The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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The result was: promoted by
Gatoclass (
talk) 08:20, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
Created/expanded by
Yunshui (
talk). Self nominated at 10:08, 25 June 2013 (UTC).
You don't have a cite for the hook sentence in the article. Also, the article needs a little copyediting; the lead includes the sentence A friend of Chen Yuanyuan, concubine of Wu Sangui who fought against Emperor Kang Xi in the Revolt of the Three Feudatories which lacks either a subject or a
predicate, and the later phrase called the "According to Sutra Studio which lacks a closing quotation.
Gatoclass (
talk) 10:41, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
Fixed, thanks.
Yunshui雲
水 10:52, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Gatoclass (
talk) 08:20, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
Created/expanded by
Yunshui (
talk). Self nominated at 10:08, 25 June 2013 (UTC).
You don't have a cite for the hook sentence in the article. Also, the article needs a little copyediting; the lead includes the sentence A friend of Chen Yuanyuan, concubine of Wu Sangui who fought against Emperor Kang Xi in the Revolt of the Three Feudatories which lacks either a subject or a
predicate, and the later phrase called the "According to Sutra Studio which lacks a closing quotation.
Gatoclass (
talk) 10:41, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
Fixed, thanks.
Yunshui雲
水 10:52, 25 June 2013 (UTC)