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Hawkeye7 (
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Created by Launchballer ( talk). Self nominated at 00:31, 12 August 2014 (UTC).
Generally, this looks good to me - length, hook etc. My only query is about the tone - e.g. saying the band "did not have the balls" to release the single. Is this a quote or paraphrase? If not, it doesn't sound very neutral.
Dwab3 (
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The result was: promoted by
Hawkeye7 (
talk) 21:20, 1 October 2014 (UTC)
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Created by Launchballer ( talk). Self nominated at 00:31, 12 August 2014 (UTC).
Generally, this looks good to me - length, hook etc. My only query is about the tone - e.g. saying the band "did not have the balls" to release the single. Is this a quote or paraphrase? If not, it doesn't sound very neutral.
Dwab3 (
talk) 08:47, 12 August 2014 (UTC)