The result was: promoted by
Evrik (
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Improved to Good Article status by Colin M ( talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke ( talk) at 18:48, 23 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Les Avariés; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Onegreatjoke: article looks good... (pardon the pun). New, somewhat long, sourced to a book (hence the AGF) and a blog, which is fine per
WP:BLOG as the writer is a subject matter expert. Hook is nice and interesting (syphilis will probably get quite a few clicks), however, I wonder if there is a slightly less clunky way to state it. The repetition could be removed, for example: ALT 1: ... that
Les Avariés, the first play in the United States to mention the word "
syphilis", was temporarily banned in England and France for its focus on the disease? That's all, it's a good candidate. Well done to
Colin M.
Schminnte (
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Or one can simply pick one or the other statements, as they are both rather catchy on their own:
Maury Markowitz ( talk) 15:52, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Evrik (
talk) 17:27, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
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Improved to Good Article status by Colin M ( talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke ( talk) at 18:48, 23 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Les Avariés; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook eligibility:
QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
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Onegreatjoke: article looks good... (pardon the pun). New, somewhat long, sourced to a book (hence the AGF) and a blog, which is fine per
WP:BLOG as the writer is a subject matter expert. Hook is nice and interesting (syphilis will probably get quite a few clicks), however, I wonder if there is a slightly less clunky way to state it. The repetition could be removed, for example: ALT 1: ... that
Les Avariés, the first play in the United States to mention the word "
syphilis", was temporarily banned in England and France for its focus on the disease? That's all, it's a good candidate. Well done to
Colin M.
Schminnte (
talk •
contribs) 15:58, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
Or one can simply pick one or the other statements, as they are both rather catchy on their own:
Maury Markowitz ( talk) 15:52, 30 June 2023 (UTC)