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Created by Zanhe ( talk). Self-nominated at 03:13, 2 December 2017 (UTC).
"Her surname was Zhao but her given name is not known"vs.
"her surname was Zhao but her given name is not recorded";
"The Book of Han records that she died of 'anxiety'"vs.
"The [...] History of the Han Dynasty records that she died of 'anxiety'"; and
"It was said that she had a pregnancy that lasted 14 months"vs.
"after a pregnancy said to have lasted fourteen months". Also, the sentence
"The mausoleum was robbed in July 2016."which is directly implied by the hook (
"more than 2,100 years after"), has no immediate inline citation and is not supported by the citation on the next sentence. — seav ( talk) 18:07, 5 December 2017 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:49, 10 December 2017 (UTC)
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Created by Zanhe ( talk). Self-nominated at 03:13, 2 December 2017 (UTC).
"Her surname was Zhao but her given name is not known"vs.
"her surname was Zhao but her given name is not recorded";
"The Book of Han records that she died of 'anxiety'"vs.
"The [...] History of the Han Dynasty records that she died of 'anxiety'"; and
"It was said that she had a pregnancy that lasted 14 months"vs.
"after a pregnancy said to have lasted fourteen months". Also, the sentence
"The mausoleum was robbed in July 2016."which is directly implied by the hook (
"more than 2,100 years after"), has no immediate inline citation and is not supported by the citation on the next sentence. — seav ( talk) 18:07, 5 December 2017 (UTC)