The result was: rejected by
BorgQueen (
talk) 21:19, 6 February 2023 (UTC)
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Created by CurryTime7-24 ( talk). Self-nominated at 01:35, 10 December 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Interesting article and subject. A few sources are blog-like in nature, but they appear reliable based on the credentials of the author or the fact that the publisher is reliable, and the information used have been written in a neutral manner. In this oldid, citation 10 is a press release, and citation 12 is an anonymous blog, but their usage for referencing is minimal. If WP:RS is an issue, the two citations could be removed, and it would not impact the reliability of the article. @ CurryTime7-24: Note that there are instances where "kanzuri" is misspelled as "kanzari". — Arsonal ( talk + contribs)— 04:53, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
"traditional process known as kanzarashi or yukisarashi"so that the statement doesn't violate WP:SYNTH since neither the Satoyama Library nor the Yukiguni citation after that sentence specifically mentions kanzarashi. Also, looking at the hooks again, I think ALT1 needs be struck since it's directly based on a statement by the president of the product's maker. It's fine within the article, but using it as a hook doesn't meet WP:NOTADVERT in my opinion. — Arsonal ( talk + contribs)— 04:53, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
The result was: rejected by
BorgQueen (
talk) 21:19, 6 February 2023 (UTC)
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Created by CurryTime7-24 ( talk). Self-nominated at 01:35, 10 December 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Interesting article and subject. A few sources are blog-like in nature, but they appear reliable based on the credentials of the author or the fact that the publisher is reliable, and the information used have been written in a neutral manner. In this oldid, citation 10 is a press release, and citation 12 is an anonymous blog, but their usage for referencing is minimal. If WP:RS is an issue, the two citations could be removed, and it would not impact the reliability of the article. @ CurryTime7-24: Note that there are instances where "kanzuri" is misspelled as "kanzari". — Arsonal ( talk + contribs)— 04:53, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
"traditional process known as kanzarashi or yukisarashi"so that the statement doesn't violate WP:SYNTH since neither the Satoyama Library nor the Yukiguni citation after that sentence specifically mentions kanzarashi. Also, looking at the hooks again, I think ALT1 needs be struck since it's directly based on a statement by the president of the product's maker. It's fine within the article, but using it as a hook doesn't meet WP:NOTADVERT in my opinion. — Arsonal ( talk + contribs)— 04:53, 26 January 2023 (UTC)