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Swami Vivekananda's 150th birth anniversary celebration initiatives 2013 is being celebrated as the
150th birth anniversary of Swami Vivekananda. In September 1893
he delivered a series of lectures in the Parliament of the World's Religions in Chicago. Six of those lectures are mainly referred and recorded in the Complete Works of Swami Vivekananda. We are attempting to feature DYKs on the dates on which Vivekananda delivered his speeches in Chicago.
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11 September | Swami Vivekananda (film) | Template:Did you know nominations/Swami Vivekananda (film) | Done by Crisco | Yes | Yes | ||||
15 September | Sister Christine | Template:Did you know nominations/Sister Christine | Done by Piotrus, Overturned by BlueMoonset, redone by Crisco | Yes | Yes | ||||
19 September | Vedanta Society of New York | Template:Did you know nominations/Vedanta Society of New York | Done by Bonkers The Clown | Yes | Yes | ||||
20 September | Swami Vivekananda statue (Golpark, Kolkata) | Template:Did you know nominations/Swami Vivekananda statue (Golpark, Kolkata) | Done by Crisco | Yes | Yes | ||||
26 September | Josephine MacLeod | Template:Did you know nominations/Josephine MacLeod | Done by Dharmadhyaksha, BlueMoonset had a question, re-reviewed by BlueMoonset | Yes | Yes | ||||
27 September | Arise, awake, and stop not till the goal is reached | Template:Did you know nominations/Arise, awake, and stop not till the goal is reached | Done by Bonkers The Clown | Yes | Yes | ||||
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N.A. | Nachuk Tahate Shyama | Template:Did you know nominations/Nachuk Tahate Shyama | Done by Hmlarson | Yes | |||||
N.A. | Religion not the crying need of India | Template:Did you know nominations/Religion not the crying need of India | Done by 99of9 | Yes | |||||
N.A. | Bartaman Bharat | Template:Did you know nominations/Bartaman Bharat | Done by TParis | Yes | |||||
N.A. | User:Titodutta/Buddhism, the Fulfilment of Hinduism (85% complete) | ||||||||
N.A | Atmano mokshartham jagat hitaya cha | Template:Did you know nominations/Atmano mokshartham jagat hitaya cha | |||||||
N.A | User:Titodutta/Vedanta Society of Northern California (13% complete) | ||||||||
N.A. | User:Titodutta/Kanyakumari resolve of 1892 (30% complete) | ||||||||
N.A. | User:Titodutta/Bahujana hitaya bahujana sukhaya cha (5% complete) |
how does a person reside in a society?! If you study a little, you'll see, here "society" means "The Vedanta Center" which is located at "Southern California". -- Tito☸ Dutta 05:46, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
Hollywood center in Hollywood— is this an elucidation? It is similar to "United States in the United States". Of course, "Hollywood Center" is in "Hollywood". It is unnecessary repetition. "Wikimedia organizes annual meet-ups every year" — here "annual" itself means "every year", so, either "annual" or "every year" should be deleted. Similarly, "Hollywood Centre in Hollywood" is unclear. It should be either just "centre in Hollywood" or "Hollywood Centre". That's the thing we did in our last two edits. ii) this edit was similar, when only two people are captured in a photo, one does not need to state position of both, b) you have used Wikilink to elucidate a non-English word (Pranam), but, we also used wikilink of "Vedanta Center of Southern California" c) the source is added at the end of the sentence which reads—
She too was residing at the Hollywood center when I first attended services there; and there she died a few months after Sister died, in the autumn of 1949. Clearly mentioning "Hollywood Centre". d) this source is officially very much reliable, not only because the site publisher is a notable journalist and Vivekananda researcher, another reason is, (as you have noted) those are Vivekananda's own letters, and copies of these letters may be found everywhere, including our Wikisource. -- Tito☸ Dutta 19:40, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
it should be either just "centre in Hollywood" or "Hollywood Centre", you have followed the first option, but, the second one is also applicable and that's what we had in the article. About the photo issue, no, no, if there are two people in an image, then state position of one "Person A (left) with Person B". I can find this example, where only "Barack Obama"'s position has been stated, not Jacob Zuma's. Always follow "N minus 1" rule, if there are three people in a frame, mention position of two etc. similar example, one more, Anyway, if you do not agree, leave it here, no need to debate on it. b) I replaced "society" with "center" because of your comment "how does a person reside in a society?") I see no reason of not mentioning the actual name of the place, i.e. Vedanta Society of Southern California. The only thing I can understand from the current version's pose is we don't have adequate data and don't know the name of the place. Something like "she was residing in the Vedanta Society of Southern California, Vedanta Society's centre located in Hollywood district" could be helpful, but, it will once again create "Hollywood Centre in Hollywood" type confusion. c) The only valid question (in my opinion) which could be asked here— "She died in the Hollywood center" that's fine, but, "Hollywood center of "What"?" And the answer was not so difficult " Hollywood Center of Vedanta Society -- Tito☸ Dutta 22:53, 19 September 2013 (UTC) 07:15, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
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Swami Vivekananda's 150th birth anniversary DYK celebration September 2013 — Date requests | |||||||||
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This is a part of
Swami Vivekananda's 150th birth anniversary celebration initiatives 2013 is being celebrated as the
150th birth anniversary of Swami Vivekananda. In September 1893
he delivered a series of lectures in the Parliament of the World's Religions in Chicago. Six of those lectures are mainly referred and recorded in the Complete Works of Swami Vivekananda. We are attempting to feature DYKs on the dates on which Vivekananda delivered his speeches in Chicago.
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11 September | Swami Vivekananda (film) | Template:Did you know nominations/Swami Vivekananda (film) | Done by Crisco | Yes | Yes | ||||
15 September | Sister Christine | Template:Did you know nominations/Sister Christine | Done by Piotrus, Overturned by BlueMoonset, redone by Crisco | Yes | Yes | ||||
19 September | Vedanta Society of New York | Template:Did you know nominations/Vedanta Society of New York | Done by Bonkers The Clown | Yes | Yes | ||||
20 September | Swami Vivekananda statue (Golpark, Kolkata) | Template:Did you know nominations/Swami Vivekananda statue (Golpark, Kolkata) | Done by Crisco | Yes | Yes | ||||
26 September | Josephine MacLeod | Template:Did you know nominations/Josephine MacLeod | Done by Dharmadhyaksha, BlueMoonset had a question, re-reviewed by BlueMoonset | Yes | Yes | ||||
27 September | Arise, awake, and stop not till the goal is reached | Template:Did you know nominations/Arise, awake, and stop not till the goal is reached | Done by Bonkers The Clown | Yes | Yes | ||||
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N.A. | Nachuk Tahate Shyama | Template:Did you know nominations/Nachuk Tahate Shyama | Done by Hmlarson | Yes | |||||
N.A. | Religion not the crying need of India | Template:Did you know nominations/Religion not the crying need of India | Done by 99of9 | Yes | |||||
N.A. | Bartaman Bharat | Template:Did you know nominations/Bartaman Bharat | Done by TParis | Yes | |||||
N.A. | User:Titodutta/Buddhism, the Fulfilment of Hinduism (85% complete) | ||||||||
N.A | Atmano mokshartham jagat hitaya cha | Template:Did you know nominations/Atmano mokshartham jagat hitaya cha | |||||||
N.A | User:Titodutta/Vedanta Society of Northern California (13% complete) | ||||||||
N.A. | User:Titodutta/Kanyakumari resolve of 1892 (30% complete) | ||||||||
N.A. | User:Titodutta/Bahujana hitaya bahujana sukhaya cha (5% complete) |
how does a person reside in a society?! If you study a little, you'll see, here "society" means "The Vedanta Center" which is located at "Southern California". -- Tito☸ Dutta 05:46, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
Hollywood center in Hollywood— is this an elucidation? It is similar to "United States in the United States". Of course, "Hollywood Center" is in "Hollywood". It is unnecessary repetition. "Wikimedia organizes annual meet-ups every year" — here "annual" itself means "every year", so, either "annual" or "every year" should be deleted. Similarly, "Hollywood Centre in Hollywood" is unclear. It should be either just "centre in Hollywood" or "Hollywood Centre". That's the thing we did in our last two edits. ii) this edit was similar, when only two people are captured in a photo, one does not need to state position of both, b) you have used Wikilink to elucidate a non-English word (Pranam), but, we also used wikilink of "Vedanta Center of Southern California" c) the source is added at the end of the sentence which reads—
She too was residing at the Hollywood center when I first attended services there; and there she died a few months after Sister died, in the autumn of 1949. Clearly mentioning "Hollywood Centre". d) this source is officially very much reliable, not only because the site publisher is a notable journalist and Vivekananda researcher, another reason is, (as you have noted) those are Vivekananda's own letters, and copies of these letters may be found everywhere, including our Wikisource. -- Tito☸ Dutta 19:40, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
it should be either just "centre in Hollywood" or "Hollywood Centre", you have followed the first option, but, the second one is also applicable and that's what we had in the article. About the photo issue, no, no, if there are two people in an image, then state position of one "Person A (left) with Person B". I can find this example, where only "Barack Obama"'s position has been stated, not Jacob Zuma's. Always follow "N minus 1" rule, if there are three people in a frame, mention position of two etc. similar example, one more, Anyway, if you do not agree, leave it here, no need to debate on it. b) I replaced "society" with "center" because of your comment "how does a person reside in a society?") I see no reason of not mentioning the actual name of the place, i.e. Vedanta Society of Southern California. The only thing I can understand from the current version's pose is we don't have adequate data and don't know the name of the place. Something like "she was residing in the Vedanta Society of Southern California, Vedanta Society's centre located in Hollywood district" could be helpful, but, it will once again create "Hollywood Centre in Hollywood" type confusion. c) The only valid question (in my opinion) which could be asked here— "She died in the Hollywood center" that's fine, but, "Hollywood center of "What"?" And the answer was not so difficult " Hollywood Center of Vedanta Society -- Tito☸ Dutta 22:53, 19 September 2013 (UTC) 07:15, 20 September 2013 (UTC)