The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk) 19:40, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
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Created by FaysaLBinDaruL ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:34, 13 September 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
The cast and crew did not leave the house for 10 consecutive days until filming was completedis not the same thing as
They stayed in the house for 10 days.[1]
Hook eligibility:
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FaysaLBinDaruL: This is my first DYK review, and I was hoping I'd get an easy pass, but in addition to the removal of the copyright violations (which has to happen regardless of DYK) and resolving the misstatement identified above, I don't think I can pass this when the plot summary is written the way that it is. It seems to be a bunch of individual moments from the film, but not presented in a way that a reader can follow, and with enough grammatical errors that many sentences' meanings are unclear. I understand that DYK standards are intentionally not exceptionally high, but content has to be coherent before one can say it is verified or even verifiable, and the plot summary is not coherent. --
Tamzin
cetacean needed (she|they|xe) 14:35, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
interviewing the eyewitness, and meeting and talking to the criminals detained in Kashimpur central jail. That's not actually clear on whether he met with the perpetrators of the crime, or some other criminals (which directors are known to do to get "background" understanding), but the cited source clarifies it's the actual perpetrators... except it says "accused". Are they just accused, or have they been convicted? If the former, the article can't call them "criminals"; that's a serious WP:BLP issue. Either way, the hook needs to be reworded. -- Tamzin cetacean needed (she|they|xe) 21:33, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
We can select this hook by directly or modifying it. Mehedi Abedin 07:18, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk) 19:40, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
DYK toolbox |
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Created by FaysaLBinDaruL ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:34, 13 September 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
The cast and crew did not leave the house for 10 consecutive days until filming was completedis not the same thing as
They stayed in the house for 10 days.[1]
Hook eligibility:
QPQ: None required. |
Overall:
@
FaysaLBinDaruL: This is my first DYK review, and I was hoping I'd get an easy pass, but in addition to the removal of the copyright violations (which has to happen regardless of DYK) and resolving the misstatement identified above, I don't think I can pass this when the plot summary is written the way that it is. It seems to be a bunch of individual moments from the film, but not presented in a way that a reader can follow, and with enough grammatical errors that many sentences' meanings are unclear. I understand that DYK standards are intentionally not exceptionally high, but content has to be coherent before one can say it is verified or even verifiable, and the plot summary is not coherent. --
Tamzin
cetacean needed (she|they|xe) 14:35, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
interviewing the eyewitness, and meeting and talking to the criminals detained in Kashimpur central jail. That's not actually clear on whether he met with the perpetrators of the crime, or some other criminals (which directors are known to do to get "background" understanding), but the cited source clarifies it's the actual perpetrators... except it says "accused". Are they just accused, or have they been convicted? If the former, the article can't call them "criminals"; that's a serious WP:BLP issue. Either way, the hook needs to be reworded. -- Tamzin cetacean needed (she|they|xe) 21:33, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
We can select this hook by directly or modifying it. Mehedi Abedin 07:18, 10 October 2022 (UTC)