The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
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5x expanded by Muboshgu ( talk). Self-nominated at 18:32, 10 February 2022 (UTC).
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QPQ: Done. |
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I think ALT0 is ok, ALT 1 and ALT2 don't read so well to me. however, the separate claims need to be cited with the same ref here as is on the article. sabr.org presently backs "encouraged her to sell" and "she kept" but not " first woman to own a Major League Baseball team in 1911" so can the relevant sentence in the article have the sabr.org ref added? further, it's really not clear to me from the article who the "fellow owners" are - sabr.org says it was her mother, which isn't in the article. or do you mean other club owners? if yes then i'd prefer that spelled out that they made offers. so a bit of work is needed to tweak the hook, or if you want to propose an entirely different one, maybe the ladies night factoid might help.
Mujinga (
talk) 19:19, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
the first woman to own a big league baseball club. "Fellow owners" was referring to the owners of the other seven NL teams who were encouraging her to sell, not her mother the part-owner of the Cardinals, so that will have to be made more clear. – Muboshgu ( talk) 23:33, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
OK I'll answer my requests myself and ask for a second review. The two new ALTs with citations are:
Mujinga (
talk) 11:21, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
ALT5 to T:DYK/P1
The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk) 23:01, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
DYK toolbox |
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5x expanded by Muboshgu ( talk). Self-nominated at 18:32, 10 February 2022 (UTC).
Policy compliance:
Hook eligibility:
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
I think ALT0 is ok, ALT 1 and ALT2 don't read so well to me. however, the separate claims need to be cited with the same ref here as is on the article. sabr.org presently backs "encouraged her to sell" and "she kept" but not " first woman to own a Major League Baseball team in 1911" so can the relevant sentence in the article have the sabr.org ref added? further, it's really not clear to me from the article who the "fellow owners" are - sabr.org says it was her mother, which isn't in the article. or do you mean other club owners? if yes then i'd prefer that spelled out that they made offers. so a bit of work is needed to tweak the hook, or if you want to propose an entirely different one, maybe the ladies night factoid might help.
Mujinga (
talk) 19:19, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
the first woman to own a big league baseball club. "Fellow owners" was referring to the owners of the other seven NL teams who were encouraging her to sell, not her mother the part-owner of the Cardinals, so that will have to be made more clear. – Muboshgu ( talk) 23:33, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
OK I'll answer my requests myself and ask for a second review. The two new ALTs with citations are:
Mujinga (
talk) 11:21, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
ALT5 to T:DYK/P1