The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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the article's talk page or
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The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:12, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by
Juhachi (
talk). Self-nominated at 20:27, 8 May 2017 (UTC).
Meets New (GA promotion), Length, Neutral, RS, Copyvio, Format, Content, and Other requirements—i.e., all requirements.
Bluesphere 15:11, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
Sorry, I don't find the hook so hooky. Can you come up with something else? Thanks,
Yoninah (
talk) 23:50, 15 May 2017 (UTC)
ALT 1 ... that the Japanese
visual novelHarmonia was first released in English to see how the game would be received worldwide before its release in Japan?
ALT 2... that the Japanese
visual novelHarmonia was created to celebrate the 15th anniversary of the development studio
Key?
ALT 3 ... that the art director of the Japanese
visual novelHarmonia resigned from the development studio the month it was released?--十八 00:31, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
Thank you. ALT1 is a much better hook! Foreign-language hook ref AGF and cited inline. ALT1 good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 12:29, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:12, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by
Juhachi (
talk). Self-nominated at 20:27, 8 May 2017 (UTC).
Meets New (GA promotion), Length, Neutral, RS, Copyvio, Format, Content, and Other requirements—i.e., all requirements.
Bluesphere 15:11, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
Sorry, I don't find the hook so hooky. Can you come up with something else? Thanks,
Yoninah (
talk) 23:50, 15 May 2017 (UTC)
ALT 1 ... that the Japanese
visual novelHarmonia was first released in English to see how the game would be received worldwide before its release in Japan?
ALT 2... that the Japanese
visual novelHarmonia was created to celebrate the 15th anniversary of the development studio
Key?
ALT 3 ... that the art director of the Japanese
visual novelHarmonia resigned from the development studio the month it was released?--十八 00:31, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
Thank you. ALT1 is a much better hook! Foreign-language hook ref AGF and cited inline. ALT1 good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 12:29, 16 May 2017 (UTC)