The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk) 08:32, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
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Created by Moonraker ( talk). Self-nominated at 08:01, 24 November 2021 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
I think it's appropriate to mention
WP:DAILYMIRROR here, although because the hook explicitly references the Mirror in the quote I think that's probably okay. That said, the article doesn't fully reflect this – whereas the hook says "according to the Daily Mirror...", the article states that it was Asprey who said it. There's also a missing citation in the "Career" section. I've done some
MOS and copy-editing, but left these for the nominator to resolve, presumably with sources that exist and have already been used in the article. I think resolution of those things above will be fine – perhaps a slight CE/rw of the hook to be:
MIDI ( talk) 11:12, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk) 08:32, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
DYK toolbox |
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Created by Moonraker ( talk). Self-nominated at 08:01, 24 November 2021 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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|
QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
I think it's appropriate to mention
WP:DAILYMIRROR here, although because the hook explicitly references the Mirror in the quote I think that's probably okay. That said, the article doesn't fully reflect this – whereas the hook says "according to the Daily Mirror...", the article states that it was Asprey who said it. There's also a missing citation in the "Career" section. I've done some
MOS and copy-editing, but left these for the nominator to resolve, presumably with sources that exist and have already been used in the article. I think resolution of those things above will be fine – perhaps a slight CE/rw of the hook to be:
MIDI ( talk) 11:12, 24 November 2021 (UTC)