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Created by Gerda Arendt ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:38, 13 October 2019 (UTC).
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Gerda Arendt, review follows: article is new (created 10 October) and appears to be reliably sourced. I have a few relatively minor comments with the writing:
I enjoyed reading this article (despite having little to no interest in opera) and would love to find out more about Schlößmann's designs for different performances. Is it possible to add anything further? The hook is interesting but too long (226 characters), can it be shortened by omitting the Bayreuth festival part and focusing on his work at Minden? Hook facts are in article, AGF on German-language sourcing (my German is regrettably very poor). Would be great to see this article developed a little further and on DYK - Dumelow ( talk) 07:51, 26 October 2019 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:36, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
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Created by Gerda Arendt ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:38, 13 October 2019 (UTC).
Hi
Gerda Arendt, review follows: article is new (created 10 October) and appears to be reliably sourced. I have a few relatively minor comments with the writing:
I enjoyed reading this article (despite having little to no interest in opera) and would love to find out more about Schlößmann's designs for different performances. Is it possible to add anything further? The hook is interesting but too long (226 characters), can it be shortened by omitting the Bayreuth festival part and focusing on his work at Minden? Hook facts are in article, AGF on German-language sourcing (my German is regrettably very poor). Would be great to see this article developed a little further and on DYK - Dumelow ( talk) 07:51, 26 October 2019 (UTC)