The following is an archived discussion of Ferney Park's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s
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The result was: promoted by Allen3talk 20:06, 23 March 2013 (UTC).
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The C of E (
talk). Self nominated at 18:30, 17 March 2013 (UTC).
Interesting enough article, my local club's footage always used to look like dodgy home-movies (and we were 1st div!), however there's maybe a bit too much repetition. I counted three Milk Cups in one paragraph and 17 Ballinamallards which might be a bit excessive.
Hillbillyholidaytalk 15:39, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
I understand there was a bit excessive to use the club's full name regularly and I have cut it and the milk cup back a bit but the way it is worded, most of it needs Ballinamallard in there rather than just "the club". The C of E God Save the Queen! (
talk) 15:56, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of Ferney Park's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s
(talk) page, the nominated article's
(talk) page, or the Did you know(talk) page. Unless there is consensus to re-open the archived discussion here. No further edits should be made to this page.See the talk page guidelines for
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The result was: promoted by Allen3talk 20:06, 23 March 2013 (UTC).
5x expanded by
The C of E (
talk). Self nominated at 18:30, 17 March 2013 (UTC).
Interesting enough article, my local club's footage always used to look like dodgy home-movies (and we were 1st div!), however there's maybe a bit too much repetition. I counted three Milk Cups in one paragraph and 17 Ballinamallards which might be a bit excessive.
Hillbillyholidaytalk 15:39, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
I understand there was a bit excessive to use the club's full name regularly and I have cut it and the milk cup back a bit but the way it is worded, most of it needs Ballinamallard in there rather than just "the club". The C of E God Save the Queen! (
talk) 15:56, 18 March 2013 (UTC)