The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
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The result was: promoted by
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 23:47, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
Long enough. Sources verified against offline books. Hook okay, but would have expected one about his unusual court martial like: "... that when
All-American basketball player Elliott Loughlin was court martialed in 1945, the court received a more serious penalty than he did?"
We had debated putting something about his court-martial in there, but I thought it would be too derogatory for a DYK hook. If you think it's ok, however, I would prefer the hook you mentioned.
Jrcla2 (
talk) 20:44, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
I also prefer the reviewer's proposed hook.
JMOprof (
talk) 00:59, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
That's fine then. Ready to go.
Hawkeye7 (
talk) 01:23, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 23:47, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
Long enough. Sources verified against offline books. Hook okay, but would have expected one about his unusual court martial like: "... that when
All-American basketball player Elliott Loughlin was court martialed in 1945, the court received a more serious penalty than he did?"
We had debated putting something about his court-martial in there, but I thought it would be too derogatory for a DYK hook. If you think it's ok, however, I would prefer the hook you mentioned.
Jrcla2 (
talk) 20:44, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
I also prefer the reviewer's proposed hook.
JMOprof (
talk) 00:59, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
That's fine then. Ready to go.
Hawkeye7 (
talk) 01:23, 13 January 2012 (UTC)