The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
97198 (
talk) 13:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by
Dumelow (
talk). Self-nominated at 00:51, 6 December 2017 (UTC).
New enough, not a copyvio although a heavy dependency on the USAF source with some paraphrasing, but facts are facts I suppose. Just one thing outstanding (I made a couple of tweaks), could you add a sentence or two more to the lead? While we don't mandate MOS compliance for DYK, it would be nice to see
WP:LEAD followed a bit closer here, i.e. summarise one or two more of the key points of the article in the lead?
The Rambling Man (
talk) 21:16, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
97198 (
talk) 13:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by
Dumelow (
talk). Self-nominated at 00:51, 6 December 2017 (UTC).
New enough, not a copyvio although a heavy dependency on the USAF source with some paraphrasing, but facts are facts I suppose. Just one thing outstanding (I made a couple of tweaks), could you add a sentence or two more to the lead? While we don't mandate MOS compliance for DYK, it would be nice to see
WP:LEAD followed a bit closer here, i.e. summarise one or two more of the key points of the article in the lead?
The Rambling Man (
talk) 21:16, 7 December 2017 (UTC)