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5x expanded by Andrewoh29 ( talk). Self-nominated at 03:49, 11 October 2019 (UTC).
Hello! Thank you for your feedback! I agree with your comment about clarifying the "model organism" meaning. However, regarding your comment about the article being under-referenced, the article is heavily referenced. When a footnote is introduced, all consecutive sentences that follow the cited sentence tie back to the cited footnote, until a new footnote is introduced. In that respect, the "lack of footnotes" that you reported are simply "implied footnotes" from the most recently cited footnote in the passage. With that, every sentence in the article is cited and is from a reference.
Thank you for sharing! andrewoh29 19:51, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
5x expansion verified, no close paraphrasing found. No QPQ needed for new student editor with less than 5 DYK credits. ALT2 and ALT3 are the most interesting suggestions: I'm sorry for not clarifying this earlier, but sentences that mention hook facts still need to be referenced, even if the reference is already mentioned elsewhere in the relevant paragraph. While ALT3 is interesting, as far as I can tell the section that discusses it only implies it and doesn't explicitly mention it; it would likely be a good idea to have a more explicit (and referenced) mention somewhere in the article, either in the lead section or at the start of that section. The sources for the article are offline and I have no access to them so I am assuming good faith on their reliability.
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The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
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5x expanded by Andrewoh29 ( talk). Self-nominated at 03:49, 11 October 2019 (UTC).
Hello! Thank you for your feedback! I agree with your comment about clarifying the "model organism" meaning. However, regarding your comment about the article being under-referenced, the article is heavily referenced. When a footnote is introduced, all consecutive sentences that follow the cited sentence tie back to the cited footnote, until a new footnote is introduced. In that respect, the "lack of footnotes" that you reported are simply "implied footnotes" from the most recently cited footnote in the passage. With that, every sentence in the article is cited and is from a reference.
Thank you for sharing! andrewoh29 19:51, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
5x expansion verified, no close paraphrasing found. No QPQ needed for new student editor with less than 5 DYK credits. ALT2 and ALT3 are the most interesting suggestions: I'm sorry for not clarifying this earlier, but sentences that mention hook facts still need to be referenced, even if the reference is already mentioned elsewhere in the relevant paragraph. While ALT3 is interesting, as far as I can tell the section that discusses it only implies it and doesn't explicitly mention it; it would likely be a good idea to have a more explicit (and referenced) mention somewhere in the article, either in the lead section or at the start of that section. The sources for the article are offline and I have no access to them so I am assuming good faith on their reliability.
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