The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 21:49, 26 December 2019 (UTC)
Each hook had a minor grammatical error that I corrected. I like ALT0 better than ALT1, though both are of adequate length and are properly formatted.
Both hooks are supported by inline citations in the article.
QPQ is done.
Comments not directly related to DYK:
It looks like
the image in the article is missing permission and is likely to be deleted.
The second sentence of the Description section is almost identical to the second sentence in the lead; I think rewording one or the other (or removing some detail from the one in the lead) would improve the article.
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 21:49, 26 December 2019 (UTC)
Each hook had a minor grammatical error that I corrected. I like ALT0 better than ALT1, though both are of adequate length and are properly formatted.
Both hooks are supported by inline citations in the article.
QPQ is done.
Comments not directly related to DYK:
It looks like
the image in the article is missing permission and is likely to be deleted.
The second sentence of the Description section is almost identical to the second sentence in the lead; I think rewording one or the other (or removing some detail from the one in the lead) would improve the article.