The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Hawkeye7 (
talk) 21:14, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by
CeeGee (
talk). Self nom at 10:35, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Unfortunately, the article is completely lacking citations for a several paragraphs (minimum of one per paragraph is required by DYK). Additionally, the article overuses words like "several", "many", some" that convey very little real information - I have tagged this sentences where clarification is needed. Once these issues are addressed, I will be happy to reconsider the article for DYK inclusion. --
ThaddeusB (
talk) 02:14, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
Very nice work, thanks. Article is now compliant with all relevant policy. The suggested hook is interesting and verified by inline citation. I suggest holding for use during the Olympics and tweaking the tense of hook accordingly:
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Hawkeye7 (
talk) 21:14, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by
CeeGee (
talk). Self nom at 10:35, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Unfortunately, the article is completely lacking citations for a several paragraphs (minimum of one per paragraph is required by DYK). Additionally, the article overuses words like "several", "many", some" that convey very little real information - I have tagged this sentences where clarification is needed. Once these issues are addressed, I will be happy to reconsider the article for DYK inclusion. --
ThaddeusB (
talk) 02:14, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
Very nice work, thanks. Article is now compliant with all relevant policy. The suggested hook is interesting and verified by inline citation. I suggest holding for use during the Olympics and tweaking the tense of hook accordingly: