The result was: promoted by
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 09:38, 1 February 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by Sodacan ( talk). Self nom at 19:41, 26 January 2012 (UTC)
Comment: Problem here is that hook is well over 200 characters - I make it 240. Also the source in the article gives the page in Noble as p. 150 (note 27). I suggest you cut out some of the wording, e.g. delete 'by royal charter on 18 July 1555' and 'of England', and replace 'despite the fact that' with 'although'. And tidy up the ref.-- Smerus ( talk) 20:10, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
( ref 26 or p.149) (for the story) and ( ref 27 or p.150) (for the apology afterwards). Sodacan ( talk) 03:12, 31 January 2012 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 09:38, 1 February 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by Sodacan ( talk). Self nom at 19:41, 26 January 2012 (UTC)
Comment: Problem here is that hook is well over 200 characters - I make it 240. Also the source in the article gives the page in Noble as p. 150 (note 27). I suggest you cut out some of the wording, e.g. delete 'by royal charter on 18 July 1555' and 'of England', and replace 'despite the fact that' with 'although'. And tidy up the ref.-- Smerus ( talk) 20:10, 30 January 2012 (UTC)
( ref 26 or p.149) (for the story) and ( ref 27 or p.150) (for the apology afterwards). Sodacan ( talk) 03:12, 31 January 2012 (UTC)