The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
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The result was: promoted by
Victuallers (
talk) 15:11, 10 July 2015 (UTC)
Article is long enough with 2683 chars, and nominated on 7th day so new enough. Neutral, in-line citations, does not appear to have close paraphrasing. Hook is interesting (where can I get it?) and is 168 chars (omitting word pictured). I'm okay with the first part of the hook, but do not see a source for the claim that it "is mostly exported". The source says importer demand exceeds production but that doesn't necessarily equate to them exporting it. (It could simply mean that the government doesn't allow export, but people want it.) Photo appears to be properly released and available for any use per commons.
SusunW (
talk) 21:04, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
Perfect! GTG.
SusunW (
talk) 01:11, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
To my ears, the hook sounds too repetitive. Also, a number of citation needed tags have been added to the article.
Yoninah (
talk) 23:44, 4 July 2015 (UTC)
Thanks @
Yoninah: All the citations have been fixed now. The references were already there at the end of each section. How about this ALT2 hook ... that Coffee export to
Japan is mainly of
Jamaican Blue Mountain Coffee(pictured), which is reported to be more than 80 per cent of its production?--Nvvchar. 00:43, 5 July 2015 (UTC)
@
Yoninah:Do you want me to suggest another hook.--Nvvchar. 21:16, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
I just took another look at the article. There's a citation needed tag to take care of. Also, the article is top-heavy with a largely unsourced lead, and the rest of the article seems to be strung together too casually. If you could come up with a source for the beans being used as the base for Tia Maria liqueur, that would work as a hook.
Yoninah (
talk) 21:47, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
@
Yoninah:. There is some mix up here. The lead has only two sentences and both are refrenced. There is no tag in the article. Probably you read the
Jamaican Blue Mountain Coffee, which is not our article. The artcile also does not have any sentence related to the beans being used as the base for "Tia Maria liqueur". --Nvvchar. 23:34, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
Sorry about that. I did a copyedit on the nominated article and made a few things clearer. What do you think about:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Victuallers (
talk) 15:11, 10 July 2015 (UTC)
Article is long enough with 2683 chars, and nominated on 7th day so new enough. Neutral, in-line citations, does not appear to have close paraphrasing. Hook is interesting (where can I get it?) and is 168 chars (omitting word pictured). I'm okay with the first part of the hook, but do not see a source for the claim that it "is mostly exported". The source says importer demand exceeds production but that doesn't necessarily equate to them exporting it. (It could simply mean that the government doesn't allow export, but people want it.) Photo appears to be properly released and available for any use per commons.
SusunW (
talk) 21:04, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
Perfect! GTG.
SusunW (
talk) 01:11, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
To my ears, the hook sounds too repetitive. Also, a number of citation needed tags have been added to the article.
Yoninah (
talk) 23:44, 4 July 2015 (UTC)
Thanks @
Yoninah: All the citations have been fixed now. The references were already there at the end of each section. How about this ALT2 hook ... that Coffee export to
Japan is mainly of
Jamaican Blue Mountain Coffee(pictured), which is reported to be more than 80 per cent of its production?--Nvvchar. 00:43, 5 July 2015 (UTC)
@
Yoninah:Do you want me to suggest another hook.--Nvvchar. 21:16, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
I just took another look at the article. There's a citation needed tag to take care of. Also, the article is top-heavy with a largely unsourced lead, and the rest of the article seems to be strung together too casually. If you could come up with a source for the beans being used as the base for Tia Maria liqueur, that would work as a hook.
Yoninah (
talk) 21:47, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
@
Yoninah:. There is some mix up here. The lead has only two sentences and both are refrenced. There is no tag in the article. Probably you read the
Jamaican Blue Mountain Coffee, which is not our article. The artcile also does not have any sentence related to the beans being used as the base for "Tia Maria liqueur". --Nvvchar. 23:34, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
Sorry about that. I did a copyedit on the nominated article and made a few things clearer. What do you think about: