The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
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Created/expanded by
Emw (
talk). Self nom at 04:38, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
I checked everything over when I encouraged Emw to nominate the article. Hook could use some wording help, but otherwise it's good to go. NW(
Talk) 19:12, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
Could the nominator please suggest a hook that sounds less advertisy?
PanydThe muffin is not subtle 19:45, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
I was thinking something along the lines of "... that
Boston mayor
Thomas Menino called Clover Food Lab'ssoy bacon sandwich the "best BLT in Boston", which still has some of the same advertisy-type issues but is at least shorter. It's an issue with all articles on new corporations, I think—there's very little history to dive into so you have to go with something that's newer, which is often either unduly positive or negative. NW(
Talk) 19:50, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Created/expanded by
Emw (
talk). Self nom at 04:38, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
I checked everything over when I encouraged Emw to nominate the article. Hook could use some wording help, but otherwise it's good to go. NW(
Talk) 19:12, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
Could the nominator please suggest a hook that sounds less advertisy?
PanydThe muffin is not subtle 19:45, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
I was thinking something along the lines of "... that
Boston mayor
Thomas Menino called Clover Food Lab'ssoy bacon sandwich the "best BLT in Boston", which still has some of the same advertisy-type issues but is at least shorter. It's an issue with all articles on new corporations, I think—there's very little history to dive into so you have to go with something that's newer, which is often either unduly positive or negative. NW(
Talk) 19:50, 17 November 2011 (UTC)