The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
PumpkinSkytalk 20:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by
Rcsprinter123 (
talk). Self nom at 21:46, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
Newness and length are fine, hook could use some more wikilinking, and the article could definitely use some copyediting. There is an instance of "we" in the article as well as some improper grammar/comma use that needs to be addressed. I am also unsure of the accuracy of the hook, as the reference in the article says the Protestant missionaries came from
New England. Eagles24/7(C) 07:55, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Can't understand why I missed the 'New' of 'New England'! What comma use? Rcsprinter(talk) 12:28, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
I've done a quick copyedit of the article to address the punctuation issues and everything else looks good now. Eagles24/7(C) 17:47, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
PumpkinSkytalk 20:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by
Rcsprinter123 (
talk). Self nom at 21:46, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
Newness and length are fine, hook could use some more wikilinking, and the article could definitely use some copyediting. There is an instance of "we" in the article as well as some improper grammar/comma use that needs to be addressed. I am also unsure of the accuracy of the hook, as the reference in the article says the Protestant missionaries came from
New England. Eagles24/7(C) 07:55, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Can't understand why I missed the 'New' of 'New England'! What comma use? Rcsprinter(talk) 12:28, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
I've done a quick copyedit of the article to address the punctuation issues and everything else looks good now. Eagles24/7(C) 17:47, 2 January 2012 (UTC)