The result was: promoted by
Miyagawa
(talk) 18:49, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by PumpkinSky ( talk). Self nom at 01:20, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
"bell-cast mansard roof, decorative bracketing, and exquisite ornamental iron cresting" is verbatim from the source - while the first bit is a technical term, the rest should be reworded or quoted. I also notice that some of the material is not supported by the source being cited (for example, Sanford's background) - is there another source missing? Nikkimaria ( talk) 17:11, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Miyagawa
(talk) 18:49, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
Created/expanded by PumpkinSky ( talk). Self nom at 01:20, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
"bell-cast mansard roof, decorative bracketing, and exquisite ornamental iron cresting" is verbatim from the source - while the first bit is a technical term, the rest should be reworded or quoted. I also notice that some of the material is not supported by the source being cited (for example, Sanford's background) - is there another source missing? Nikkimaria ( talk) 17:11, 5 February 2012 (UTC)