The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 22:38, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
... that hockey executive Cecil Duncan experimented with a blue line at the centre of an
ice hockey rink(pictured), before introducing the red line to speed up the game?
blue linered line
ALT2:... that ice hockey administrator Cecil Duncan was a "business first person" who took exception to phone calls regarding hockey matters during business hours?
[2]
ALT3:... that ice hockey administrator Cecil Duncan helped propose a new definition of amateur in ice hockey?
[3]
New enough and long enough. QPQ present. All hooks are in the article, represented as citations, and interesting (I do prefer ALT0 myself). No textual issues. Image for ALT0 is freely licensed. One suggestion: you tend to join sentence pieces with a comma and "and" when the comma isn't necessary. I've removed many of these. You need both a comma and "and" when two full sentences are being joined, but not when there is no subject in the second half.
Raymie (
t •
c) 01:56, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 22:38, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
... that hockey executive Cecil Duncan experimented with a blue line at the centre of an
ice hockey rink(pictured), before introducing the red line to speed up the game?
blue linered line
ALT2:... that ice hockey administrator Cecil Duncan was a "business first person" who took exception to phone calls regarding hockey matters during business hours?
[2]
ALT3:... that ice hockey administrator Cecil Duncan helped propose a new definition of amateur in ice hockey?
[3]
New enough and long enough. QPQ present. All hooks are in the article, represented as citations, and interesting (I do prefer ALT0 myself). No textual issues. Image for ALT0 is freely licensed. One suggestion: you tend to join sentence pieces with a comma and "and" when the comma isn't necessary. I've removed many of these. You need both a comma and "and" when two full sentences are being joined, but not when there is no subject in the second half.
Raymie (
t •
c) 01:56, 2 August 2020 (UTC)