ALT2: ... that for her role as short-track speed skater in the movie Breaking Through, actress
Meng Meiqi gained a weight of 15 kg (33 lb) in order to be closer in terms of physique of a short-track speed skater? Source:
《我心飞扬》曝海报 孟美岐领衔“四朵金花”冲金
Full review is to follow (spot check seems to check out though for newness and length), but before the review continues, I would suggest that the article be given a copyedit. The first hook is probably the best option here.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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Narutolovehinata5: Sure. Do let me know what copyedit I should do for the article.
Toadboy123 (
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Both the Production and Pre-publicity and release sections are the ones in need of copyediting.
Narutolovehinata5 (
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ALT2: ... that for her role as short-track speed skater in the movie Breaking Through, actress
Meng Meiqi gained a weight of 15 kg (33 lb) in order to be closer in terms of physique of a short-track speed skater? Source:
《我心飞扬》曝海报 孟美岐领衔“四朵金花”冲金
Full review is to follow (spot check seems to check out though for newness and length), but before the review continues, I would suggest that the article be given a copyedit. The first hook is probably the best option here.
Narutolovehinata5 (
talk ·
contributions) 03:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
@
Narutolovehinata5: Sure. Do let me know what copyedit I should do for the article.
Toadboy123 (
talk) 18:49, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Both the Production and Pre-publicity and release sections are the ones in need of copyediting.
Narutolovehinata5 (
talk ·
contributions) 23:12, 24 June 2024 (UTC)