The result was: promoted by
Casliber (
talk ·
contribs) 09:48, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
Created/expanded by SonofSetanta ( talk). Nominated by Hawkeye7 ( talk) at 19:40, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing concerns. Example: "On 5 March 1945 he received the Military Cross, presented personally by Field Marshal Sir Bernard Montgomery, for his bravery during the battle for the hamlet of Doornhoek, near St. Joost in Holland, in October 1944. Under heavy German machine-gun, mortar and shell fire, and in a minefield, He got his burning tank and crew to safety before overrunning enemy positions to allow infantrymen to push through." vs "On 5 March 1945 he received the Military Cross, presented personally by Field Marshal Montgomery, for his bravery during the battle for the hamlet of Doornhoek, near St. Joost in Holland, in October 1944. Under heavy German machine-gun, mortar and shell fire, and in a minefield, Bellamy got his burning tank and crew to safety before overrunning enemy positions to allow infantrymen to push through."
Nikkimaria (
talk) 17:10, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Casliber (
talk ·
contribs) 09:48, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
Created/expanded by SonofSetanta ( talk). Nominated by Hawkeye7 ( talk) at 19:40, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing concerns. Example: "On 5 March 1945 he received the Military Cross, presented personally by Field Marshal Sir Bernard Montgomery, for his bravery during the battle for the hamlet of Doornhoek, near St. Joost in Holland, in October 1944. Under heavy German machine-gun, mortar and shell fire, and in a minefield, He got his burning tank and crew to safety before overrunning enemy positions to allow infantrymen to push through." vs "On 5 March 1945 he received the Military Cross, presented personally by Field Marshal Montgomery, for his bravery during the battle for the hamlet of Doornhoek, near St. Joost in Holland, in October 1944. Under heavy German machine-gun, mortar and shell fire, and in a minefield, Bellamy got his burning tank and crew to safety before overrunning enemy positions to allow infantrymen to push through."
Nikkimaria (
talk) 17:10, 10 December 2011 (UTC)