The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 05:34, 3 August 2016 (UTC)
Overall: The lead is too short for an article of that length. Nothing about the company's involvement in motorsports field was mentioned in the lead. Please address this issue. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga✉ 12:57, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
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ZappaOMati: The nomination is good to go with primary ALT. But ALT1 has some issues. It should be which had sponsored ... as Axalta Coating Systems is a company or a person. And the next correction that I don't think that the word had is to be used. Because it suggests that the company is no longer sponsoring the mentioned driver. It would be good if it changed to which sponsored .... Please make the corrections accordingly if it is to approved with any of the hooks else the nomination is GTG with the first hook. In that case strike out ALT1. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga✉ 02:47, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 05:34, 3 August 2016 (UTC)
Overall: The lead is too short for an article of that length. Nothing about the company's involvement in motorsports field was mentioned in the lead. Please address this issue. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga✉ 12:57, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
@
ZappaOMati: The nomination is good to go with primary ALT. But ALT1 has some issues. It should be which had sponsored ... as Axalta Coating Systems is a company or a person. And the next correction that I don't think that the word had is to be used. Because it suggests that the company is no longer sponsoring the mentioned driver. It would be good if it changed to which sponsored .... Please make the corrections accordingly if it is to approved with any of the hooks else the nomination is GTG with the first hook. In that case strike out ALT1. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga✉ 02:47, 2 August 2016 (UTC)