The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 20:23, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
New and long enough, all paragraphs sourced, mostly to online sources, no copyvio/close paraphrasing problems detected in spotchecks. Neither can I see neutrality issues. Rewiew done. The original hook is in-line cited and interesting in the respect that his views were somewhat unconvetional for an Ultra-Orthodox leader. I prefer the orginal hook to the ALT1 which I thought was a bit messy to read because of the focus on the father. If nominator would rather have the alternative Kabbalah hook, I would prefer to have it slightly rephrased for clarity. Otherwise, good to go. Regards,
Iselilja (
talk) 18:47, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
I'm fine with the first hook. Thanks for the review!
Yoninah (
talk) 19:11, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 20:23, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
New and long enough, all paragraphs sourced, mostly to online sources, no copyvio/close paraphrasing problems detected in spotchecks. Neither can I see neutrality issues. Rewiew done. The original hook is in-line cited and interesting in the respect that his views were somewhat unconvetional for an Ultra-Orthodox leader. I prefer the orginal hook to the ALT1 which I thought was a bit messy to read because of the focus on the father. If nominator would rather have the alternative Kabbalah hook, I would prefer to have it slightly rephrased for clarity. Otherwise, good to go. Regards,
Iselilja (
talk) 18:47, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
I'm fine with the first hook. Thanks for the review!
Yoninah (
talk) 19:11, 28 November 2013 (UTC)