The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cielquiparle (
talk) 14:03, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
@
Theleekycauldron: Any explanation on which clause do I violate with this hook? Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael 08:00, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
From
WP:DYK#gen4a: Articles and hooks that focus unduly on negative aspects of living individuals should be avoided.theleekycauldron (
talk •
contribs) (she/her) 08:10, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that former rector Asman Boedisantoso Ranakusuma would sometimes use train to commute the campus in order to listen in criticisms about the campus? Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael 01:54, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
Jeromi Mikhael, QPQs must be provided no later than 7 days after submitting a nomination; it's been 25 days. Please complete your QPQ right away. Thank you.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 15:59, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
@
BlueMoonset: I've added a QPQ for the nomination. Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael 13:23, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
ALT1 looks passable; article will need a full review.
theleekycauldron (
talk •
contribs) (she/her) 08:14, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
@
Jeromi Mikhael and
Theleekycauldron: ALT1 seems a bit redundant since it mentions "campus" twice. How about this alternative wording?
I changed "train" to "public transportation" as the article doesn't specifically mention trains.
Narutolovehinata5 (
talk ·
contributions) 10:17, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
Review coming. New enough, long enough, neutral and appears well cited (mostly in Indonesian). Copyedited as I read, but a few minor remaining questions for @
Jeromi Mikhael: Is it appropriate to link "undergraduate medical degree" to
Medical degree? Should "academician" (3x) be changed to "administrator"? What happened after the suspension saga - it seems unresolved? Added back the mention of train, so my preference for hook (also restoring "sometimes") would be:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cielquiparle (
talk) 14:03, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
@
Theleekycauldron: Any explanation on which clause do I violate with this hook? Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael 08:00, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
From
WP:DYK#gen4a: Articles and hooks that focus unduly on negative aspects of living individuals should be avoided.theleekycauldron (
talk •
contribs) (she/her) 08:10, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that former rector Asman Boedisantoso Ranakusuma would sometimes use train to commute the campus in order to listen in criticisms about the campus? Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael 01:54, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
Jeromi Mikhael, QPQs must be provided no later than 7 days after submitting a nomination; it's been 25 days. Please complete your QPQ right away. Thank you.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 15:59, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
@
BlueMoonset: I've added a QPQ for the nomination. Regards,
Jeromi Mikhael 13:23, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
ALT1 looks passable; article will need a full review.
theleekycauldron (
talk •
contribs) (she/her) 08:14, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
@
Jeromi Mikhael and
Theleekycauldron: ALT1 seems a bit redundant since it mentions "campus" twice. How about this alternative wording?
I changed "train" to "public transportation" as the article doesn't specifically mention trains.
Narutolovehinata5 (
talk ·
contributions) 10:17, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
Review coming. New enough, long enough, neutral and appears well cited (mostly in Indonesian). Copyedited as I read, but a few minor remaining questions for @
Jeromi Mikhael: Is it appropriate to link "undergraduate medical degree" to
Medical degree? Should "academician" (3x) be changed to "administrator"? What happened after the suspension saga - it seems unresolved? Added back the mention of train, so my preference for hook (also restoring "sometimes") would be: