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Created by Tbhotch ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:46, 3 September 2022 (UTC).
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Looks like a good article, but there are several things that need to be addressed:
Because of that, the sculpture became the first of its kind in Mexico– isn't the "because of that" superflous here? I find the sentence to read a little weird.
After the subsequent installation of other unnamed anti-monuments, the Antimonumento +43 began to be called like that because of its physical characteristics, although it is also known by other names– again, not really clear: If all were unnamed, how did the others cause it to be named, and "because of its physical characteristics"? And what are the other names it is known by?
Demonstrators added the slogan of those seeking justice for the case– where to? Is it that text visible at the bottom of the picture (my limited Spanish skills and intuition suggest that)?
and subsequently installed a complement, a concrete turtle– again, where? Is the turtle nearby?
where they held an intercity bus driver– what does "held" mean here? Held at gunpoint?
were holding an event that would be affected by the students– does this imply "negatively affected"? Like, the students' protests were 'annoying' the mayor? It's not clear as written.
They handed out flyers titled "+43, an anti-monument for memory and justice".– the paragraph ending with this is not cited (or, if it is in the same ref as the quote, that's currently not clear).
There might be other minor things that I haven't noticed yet. None of these are terrible, but without adjustments and clarity on the copyright concerns this can't run. – LordPeterII ( talk) 20:00, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
they deprived an intercity bus driveris just as unclear as "held", and I have not heard "deprived" being used in this way. But I gather it means they more or less abducted the bus, and forced the bus driver to drive the bus where they wanted it? Still, I'm not holding back the nomination over a minor wording issue, and I reckon it will be fixed soon enough.
The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk) 00:31, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
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Created by Tbhotch ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:46, 3 September 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
Looks like a good article, but there are several things that need to be addressed:
Because of that, the sculpture became the first of its kind in Mexico– isn't the "because of that" superflous here? I find the sentence to read a little weird.
After the subsequent installation of other unnamed anti-monuments, the Antimonumento +43 began to be called like that because of its physical characteristics, although it is also known by other names– again, not really clear: If all were unnamed, how did the others cause it to be named, and "because of its physical characteristics"? And what are the other names it is known by?
Demonstrators added the slogan of those seeking justice for the case– where to? Is it that text visible at the bottom of the picture (my limited Spanish skills and intuition suggest that)?
and subsequently installed a complement, a concrete turtle– again, where? Is the turtle nearby?
where they held an intercity bus driver– what does "held" mean here? Held at gunpoint?
were holding an event that would be affected by the students– does this imply "negatively affected"? Like, the students' protests were 'annoying' the mayor? It's not clear as written.
They handed out flyers titled "+43, an anti-monument for memory and justice".– the paragraph ending with this is not cited (or, if it is in the same ref as the quote, that's currently not clear).
There might be other minor things that I haven't noticed yet. None of these are terrible, but without adjustments and clarity on the copyright concerns this can't run. – LordPeterII ( talk) 20:00, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
they deprived an intercity bus driveris just as unclear as "held", and I have not heard "deprived" being used in this way. But I gather it means they more or less abducted the bus, and forced the bus driver to drive the bus where they wanted it? Still, I'm not holding back the nomination over a minor wording issue, and I reckon it will be fixed soon enough.