The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:03, 16 August 2017 (UTC)
Created by
Elisa.rolle (
talk). Self-nominated at 12:36, 31 July 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen
check it here. QPQ done. Original hook it better.
CrossTemple Jay 13:55, 31 July 2017 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but do not see the ALT0 hook fact in the article at all. I added a "clarification needed" tag to this unusual expression: "women-committed women". I also removed the links from the book titles; it would be better to add a dash after each entry and say who the book is about, linking that description. Also please note that when clipping from
Newspapers.com, you should add {{open access}} after the cite, as I did for you.
Yoninah (
talk) 22:57, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
Y I think I have addressed all your point.
Elisa.rolle
@
Elisa.rolle: thank you for the fixes. I did some more editing on the Works section to pare the descriptions down; if people are interested in reading about these women, they can click on the links. I also removed the line about Berlin being close to Susan B. Anthony's birthplace per
WP:UNDUE; it really has nothing to do with the subject of this article. I struck the first hook for that reason. IMO the ALT1 hook is not interesting to a broad audience; I personally have never heard of all these women. Do you have another hook suggestion? Maybe something about her being the biographer of famous women like
Susan B. Anthony and
Elizabeth Cady Stanton? Note: Please remember to sign your posts with four tildes: ~~~~ so the date stamp will appear beside your signature. Thanks,
Yoninah (
talk) 09:29, 10 August 2017 (UTC)
Yes, I think that's the hookiest thing we can take out of the article. I tweaked the hook slightly. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT2 good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:10, 10 August 2017 (UTC)
Unfortunately, with three prior DYK credits on
Elisa.rolle's talk page, and two more nominations currently in prep sets, this nomination will require a QPQ review, since the five freebies will have been used up. Please provide one when you get the chance. (Contrary to the original review, a QPQ has not yet been done.) Many thanks.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 01:57, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
QPQ provided
Elisa.rolle (
talk) 02:34, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
QPQ in progress; just missing the image licensing (pinging @
Elisa.rolle:), so this is good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 14:42, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:03, 16 August 2017 (UTC)
Created by
Elisa.rolle (
talk). Self-nominated at 12:36, 31 July 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen
check it here. QPQ done. Original hook it better.
CrossTemple Jay 13:55, 31 July 2017 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but do not see the ALT0 hook fact in the article at all. I added a "clarification needed" tag to this unusual expression: "women-committed women". I also removed the links from the book titles; it would be better to add a dash after each entry and say who the book is about, linking that description. Also please note that when clipping from
Newspapers.com, you should add {{open access}} after the cite, as I did for you.
Yoninah (
talk) 22:57, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
Y I think I have addressed all your point.
Elisa.rolle
@
Elisa.rolle: thank you for the fixes. I did some more editing on the Works section to pare the descriptions down; if people are interested in reading about these women, they can click on the links. I also removed the line about Berlin being close to Susan B. Anthony's birthplace per
WP:UNDUE; it really has nothing to do with the subject of this article. I struck the first hook for that reason. IMO the ALT1 hook is not interesting to a broad audience; I personally have never heard of all these women. Do you have another hook suggestion? Maybe something about her being the biographer of famous women like
Susan B. Anthony and
Elizabeth Cady Stanton? Note: Please remember to sign your posts with four tildes: ~~~~ so the date stamp will appear beside your signature. Thanks,
Yoninah (
talk) 09:29, 10 August 2017 (UTC)
Yes, I think that's the hookiest thing we can take out of the article. I tweaked the hook slightly. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT2 good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:10, 10 August 2017 (UTC)
Unfortunately, with three prior DYK credits on
Elisa.rolle's talk page, and two more nominations currently in prep sets, this nomination will require a QPQ review, since the five freebies will have been used up. Please provide one when you get the chance. (Contrary to the original review, a QPQ has not yet been done.) Many thanks.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 01:57, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
QPQ provided
Elisa.rolle (
talk) 02:34, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
QPQ in progress; just missing the image licensing (pinging @
Elisa.rolle:), so this is good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 14:42, 15 August 2017 (UTC)