The same is applicable here. Cunard ( talk) 23:28, 28 September 2011 (UTC)What's more, the hook looks like advertising. I've looked through about a dozen sourced, and read the article a dozen times, and yet I cannot see a single fact that if put on the main page as a hook would not look like advertising.
Created/expanded by Porchcorpter ( talk). Self nom at 19:18, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
The same is applicable here. Cunard ( talk) 23:28, 28 September 2011 (UTC)What's more, the hook looks like advertising. I've looked through about a dozen sourced, and read the article a dozen times, and yet I cannot see a single fact that if put on the main page as a hook would not look like advertising.
Created/expanded by Porchcorpter ( talk). Self nom at 19:18, 16 September 2011 (UTC)