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I'm not sure how relevant the statement about the directors death is to the article. I feel that it should be there somewhere, but not necessarily in the lede. I'm also not sure what the original author means by a 'forced idea' but since I'm not at all familiar with the context of the film I can't change it to something more unambiguous -- Chemoralora ( talk) 01:37, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
There's been some back-and-forth recently re: certain phrasing in the plot section:
There is an obvious ambiguity in the original, which led to the modified version, but we should clear this up. So, the questions are: 1) Who has gone missing? 2) Who is investigating?
Using my logic goggles, my guess is that the actress has gone missing, and Commissioner Sreebala and Silas Abraham are investigating. Is this correct? Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 19:11, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
"The story revolves around Commissioner Sreebala IPS (Manju Warrier) and her colleague ACP Silas Abraham (Indrajith), who investigate a missing person case of an actress."This still contains grammar problems and confusing abbreviations, but by moving Silas and "colleague", we've eliminated the ambiguity about who the colleagues are and who disappears. Hope that helps. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 21:41, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
It's unclear what the relevance of 28 days is in this edit submitted by Charles Turing. Typically we only care about the opening weekend and the lifetime gross, not arbitrarily selected points along the timeline. 28 days doesn't mean anything as far as I can tell. If the film only ran 28 days, that would be noteworthy. I have flagged this content as potentially irrelevant. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 18:03, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
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I'm not sure how relevant the statement about the directors death is to the article. I feel that it should be there somewhere, but not necessarily in the lede. I'm also not sure what the original author means by a 'forced idea' but since I'm not at all familiar with the context of the film I can't change it to something more unambiguous -- Chemoralora ( talk) 01:37, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
There's been some back-and-forth recently re: certain phrasing in the plot section:
There is an obvious ambiguity in the original, which led to the modified version, but we should clear this up. So, the questions are: 1) Who has gone missing? 2) Who is investigating?
Using my logic goggles, my guess is that the actress has gone missing, and Commissioner Sreebala and Silas Abraham are investigating. Is this correct? Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 19:11, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
"The story revolves around Commissioner Sreebala IPS (Manju Warrier) and her colleague ACP Silas Abraham (Indrajith), who investigate a missing person case of an actress."This still contains grammar problems and confusing abbreviations, but by moving Silas and "colleague", we've eliminated the ambiguity about who the colleagues are and who disappears. Hope that helps. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 21:41, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
It's unclear what the relevance of 28 days is in this edit submitted by Charles Turing. Typically we only care about the opening weekend and the lifetime gross, not arbitrarily selected points along the timeline. 28 days doesn't mean anything as far as I can tell. If the film only ran 28 days, that would be noteworthy. I have flagged this content as potentially irrelevant. Cyphoidbomb ( talk) 18:03, 20 April 2016 (UTC)