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About this edit [3], I have reverted it because I have read this Hungarian-Slovak population exchanges where it stated in second paragraph The Czechoslovak government planned the removal of 25,0000[17][29] Hungarian people from South Slovakia to Hungary,[17] but 44,129[17]-45,475[30] – generally well-to-do businessmen, tradesmen, farmers and intellectuals[25] - which contains 2 references that the number is between 44,129-45,475 and not 100 000+. Since there are 2 references that say one thing and 1 recently added that says another, I added clarification needed tag at that claim until it is clarified. Adrian ( talk) 10:01, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
In the introduction and in the main text are sections about border changes before/during/after World War II. Surely this is not relevant to this article. Suggest replacing with a simple remark to the effect that the current borders match those of the Treaty except for the loss of the 3 villages to Czechoslovakia in 1947. Nigej 16:44, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
Kingdom of Hungary was reestablished on 01/03/1920. This "new" Kingdom of Hungary accepted the Treaty of Trianon. Prior to Trianon, Soviet Hungary or the First Hungarian Republic or the "new" Kingdom of Hungary possessed the rights in connection with the territory of the "old" Kingdom of Hungary 'officially' (until 04/06/1920), however in the reality they could not validate those. Hungary was not a new state. It became entirely independent, but it was not new, the "old" Kingdom of Hungary was the predecessor. (more accurately Soviet Hungary for the 'new' Kingdom of Hungary) Fakirbakir ( talk) 20:14, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
I reverted edits of user:HangingCurve because of clear POV nature of such edits. Claim that "The Allies not only assumed without question that the minority peoples of the pre-war Kingdom of Hungary wished to leave" is absolutely POV and unacceptable. Where is evidence that these peoples "did not wished to leave pre-war Kingdom of Hungary"? Also, claim that Hungary "lost almost three-fourths of their country's territory" is not accurate: firstly, that territory was mainly inhabited by Indo-European peoples whom saw separation from Hungary as their liberation. Second, pre-war Kingdom of Hungary is legally not same country as post-war Hungary. Pre-war kingdom was not independent country, but part of the Habsburg Monarchy. The treaty does not contain a single word that says that something was "taken" from Hungary. On the contrary, Treaty clearly claims that Romania, Yugoslavia and Czechoslovakia are successor states of pre-war Kingdom of Hungary, together with post-war Hungary and it defining borders of post-war Hungary as borders of an new independent country. PANONIAN 23:21, 26 January 2012 (UTC)
You agree? That must prove it to be 'true' then. Just goes to show that if something, no matter how inaccurate or incorrect, is stated often enough, it will eventually be accepted as fact. Read into that what you will. 203.161.145.42 ( talk) 09:03, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
Please note that this is an article about The Treaty of Trianon. Nothing else. Nigej 11:04, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
But some people write comments about Aryan theories (scientifically (genetically and historically) obsolete linguistic-based belief-system from 17-18th century. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.2.153.160 ( talk) 11:14, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
The article did not mention that minority rights and laws were existed only in Austria and Hungary in pre-WW1 Europe! The first minority rights were invented firstly in Hungary in Europe in July 1849! But these were overturned after the Russian and Austrian armies crushed the Hungarian Revolution. When Hungary made a compromise with the dynasty in 1867 one of the first acts of the restored Parliament was to pass a Law on Nationalities (Act Number XLIV of 1868).
The situation of minorities in Hungary were much more better than in contemporary Western Europe. Other highly multinational countries were: France Russia and UK.
See the multi-national UK:
The situation of Scottish Irish Welsh people in "Britain" during the English hegemony is well known. They utmost forgot their original language, only english language cultural educational institutions existed. The only language was English in judiciary procedures and in offices and public administrations. It was not a real "United" Kingdom, it was rather a greater England.
See the multiethnic France:
In 1870, France was a similar-degree multi-ethnic state as Hungary, only 50% of the population of France spoke the French language as mothertongue. The other half of the population spoke Occitan, Catalan, Corsican, Alsatian, West Flemish, Lorraine Franconian, Gallo, Picard or Ch’timi and Arpitan etc... Many minority languages were closer to spanish or Italian language than French) French governments banned minority language schools , minority language newspapers minority theaters. They banned the usage of minority languages in offices , public adimistration, and judiciary procedures. The ratio of french mothertongue increased from 50% to 91% during the 1870-1910 period!!!
What about Russia?
Russian Empire was a similar multiethnic state as Hungary, without the existence of minority rights. The forced russification is also well known. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 188.36.77.20 ( talk) 09:46, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
@Nigej See the article about the British election system before WW1! There were no secret ballots in Britain before WW1, and there were universal suffrage after the WW1. And learn about balkan countries: Serbia Romania etc.... — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
81.182.3.81 (
talk) 17:02, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
Again, I must repeat: learn the details of the history of British election system, there weren't general suffrage and secret ballots in Britain before WW1. The system of universal suffrage did not exist in the United Kingdom until 1928 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elections_in_the_United_Kingdom#History
Austria-Hungary did not exist after WW1, therefore your examples in post WW1 Europe are not accurate. Your Irish example is not accurate too.
The people's self determination idea of president Wilson did not happend in Kingdom of Hungary, because: The successor states protested against the helding of democratic referendums (universal suffrge secret ballots) about the disputed areas and borders. (perhabs the leader elite of the successor states did not trust in their own ethnic groups???)
There was only 1 democratic plebiscite about the borders (with general suffrage and secret ballots) in city of Sopron and its sorriunding 8 villages in North - Western Hungary in 1921. (Where every polling stations were under the controll and leadership of Entente army-officers) The treaty did not based on the people' will, therefore the Treaty hadn't legitimacy behind it. The decision-making of Paris treaties were remindful of early-modern era primitive Peace of Westphalia, rather than a modern 20th century democratic decision.
No Nigej, read it again and again if it is necessary. This whole discussion rather proves my point. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.182.3.81 ( talk) 12:18, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
I removed the following unsourced fragment: Although the territories of the former Kingdom of Hungary that were assigned by the treaty to neighbouring states in total (and each of them separately) had a majority of non-Hungarian population, they also included some areas with Hungarian majority (including areas with over 80–90% Hungarians) as well as some areas with sizable Hungarian minorities, numbering 3,318,000 in total.
It had no source since July 2012. After a later google search, I realized that it is a verbatim quote from "The Babylonian Code - Vol. One: The Unholy Scriptures" by Saladin F . There are 2 problems:
What does this exactly refer to? There were no counties with these names in interwar Romania http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Judete_1919-25.png Raysdiet ( talk) 12:23, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
I replaced Map 1 with Map 2 because Map 2 is a derivative work of Map 1, where there are added red Hungarian-populated areas. There is no reason to include them, as long as we already have in teh article ethnic maps (e. g. File:Ethnographic map of hungary 1910 by teleki carte rouge.jpg), which include all the ethnicities, not only the Hungarians. It is a little POV I think to present only the Hungarian-populated areas 82.79.215.211 ( talk) 11:22, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
I have found a contemporary map (1915) about the early plans for the disintegration of Austria-Hungary. [5] I am not sure if it is a public domain. Fakirbakir ( talk) 22:21, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
A long-bearded-man in the middle is Nikola Pašić, not Apponyi. Alexzr88 ( talk) 13:34, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
How many Trianon memorials should the article contain? There are already 3 such pictures and the one added by Rovibroni would be the 4th. I also ask the neutral editor User:AndyTheGrump to comment. 82.79.214.83 ( talk) 00:07, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
See Wikipedia:Possibly_unfree_files/2014_June_20 Avpop ( talk) 08:21, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
It feels out of place to put Romania, Czechoslovakia and Yugoslavia in the "Others" category, since they were the main beneficiaries and largely shaped the borders of the treaty trough both military and political actions, way before it was signed. I mean don't tell me that Japan had more to do with this than Romania, are you insane? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.116.34.218 ( talk) 09:16, 16 January 2016 (UTC)
The whole introduction tells how much Hungary "lost" because of the treaty. It is therefore not a summary of the treaty, but a summary of complaints about it, I gather mostly from the Hungarian side. Not neutral at all.
I propose we use this section of the talk page to come up with a decent introduction, that summarizes the actual Contents of the treaty. Syats ( talk) 13:35, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
I think we can deal in 1,000s of square kilometers for the intro. Post-Trianon we have 93,000 which matches up with the current area of Hungary, but the current intro says that "the pre-war Kingdom of Hungary (the Hungarian half of the Austro-Hungarian monarchy)" had an area of 325,411 which doesn't match up with Kingdom of Hungary which has 282,870 for 1910 in the infobox. Lands of the Crown of Saint Stephen infobox has 325,000 for 1890 (and 328.000 for 1918) while Kingdom of Croatia-Slavonia infobox has 42,541 which with the 282,870 from Kingdom of Hungary gives 325,000. So we can immediately see that we have contradictions with pre-WWI "Kingdom of Hungary" having areas of either 325,000 or 283,000 depending on which page you read. Of course this is a matter of whether Croatia-Slavonia is included or not and what names are used for the 325,000 or 283,000 parts. Currently Lands of the Crown of Saint Stephen has redirects from Transleithania (which makes sense to me) and Kingdom of Hungary (1867-1918) (which doesn't).
Perhaps we can use someone like this "The treaty regulated the status of an independent Hungarian state and defined its borders. The newly defined Hungary had an area of 93,000 square kilometers. Pre-war Transleithania (the Hungarian part of the Austro-Hungarian monarchy) had an area of 325,000 square kilometers, made of up of the Kingdom of Hungary, the Kingdom of Croatia-Slavonia and Fiume (modern Rijeka), so that Hungary had just 28% of the area of pre-war Transleithania, 33% of the area of the pre-war Kingdom of Hungary." Nigej ( talk) 10:57, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
Using only 1910 census is violation of the neutral point of view, as it shows only Hungarian view. To be accurate, these statistics must be complemented with the statistics of the new countries, like the 1921 census in Czechoslovakia, to give objective picture and reduce bias. I added one sentence into the 1910 census discussion to give an example. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 95.105.246.114 ( talk) 15:49, 17 October 2018 (UTC)
What exactly is the "Congress of Oppressed Nations"? It is referred to in the article and with a wikilink. Being capitalized and without explanation implies that it is a title of a real thing that should be known as an official entity of some sort, but the link is red. There needs to be either a separate article defining this title or it should be defined in this one. A wiki search yielded no results, so maybe the title is misnamed? A google search elicits a mention in an article in the Encyclopedia Brittanica as "Congress of Oppressed Nationalities", but no separate article there either. I've found no other google similarities. A wiki search on that last title elicits the article League for Small and Subject Nationalities, an article insufficient to explain the usage of the contested title in the present article. LisztianEndeavors ( talk) 19:35, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
Who were the real Opressed nations or people? Those who lived in such countries whose legal system did not even recognize minority rights. Just some example: Welsh, Irish, Scottish in Britain, the Occitan, Catalan, Corsican, Alsatian, West Flemish, Lorraine Franconian, Gallo, Picard or Ch’timi and Arpitan, who were in super majority before the mid 19th century in France. (forced francisation of Paris) OR we can countinue the list of non-white Biritsh and French colonies, where the people lived without any civil rights.--
Liltender (
talk) 19:26, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
In nationalist/chauvinist sense they were "opressed". Many of them imagined own country and even own army etc... despite many of the minorities had not even spoke their new artificailly created 19th century mutually intelligible common language. (like slovaks)-- Liltender ( talk) 05:58, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
Did Hungary pay the repatriations specified under the treaty? Hugo999 ( talk) 02:32, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
It must be mentioned, that there were no democratic referendums in the disputed areas.
Trianon was against Wilson's self-determination theory,because it WASN'T based on democratic referendums (general equal&secret ballots). It was not a wonder that Czech, Romanian and Serbian politicians vehemently PROTESTED against the very idea of democratic referendums about the borders at the Paris Peace Conference. Czech politicians didn't trust in Slovaks, because only very few Slovaks joined to the so-called "Czechoslovak"army against the Hungarians in 1919 (and Slovaks represented only 53% ratio in Northen parts of Hungary). Romanian politicians didn't trust in Transylvanian Romanians, perhabs they didn't want to join to the traditionally seriously backward & poor Romania (the ratio of Romanians were only 53% in Transylvania). Serbs were small minority (22% !!!) in Voivodine. Similar to Romania, Serbia was also a very backward Orthodox country without serious urbanization or industrialization.
It was not wonder that the USA did not sign this anti-democratic dictate.
There were only one democratic referendum about the borders between Hungary and Austria: The Sopron area referendum in Western Hungary in 1921, where Entente officers were the leaders of the voting districts, there were general equal and secret ballots with electoral registers (or poll books) of the LOCAL residents, and every local citizen could take part in the elections over 18year, regardless the ethnicity, social status or sex) Some villages voted to remain in Austria, some villages and citiy of Sopron voted to remain part of Hungary.
The "national councils" were brutal mockery and caricature of democracy. They were organized directly to avoid democratic referendums , thus grab more territory than it was possible for them.
It means that even few gathered people of a (single ethnicity "voters") in a very small pub/bar (as it often happened) could decide the future/fate of whole huge cities within some minutes.....
Only the Romanians were allowed to vote in Transylvania, only Slovaks were allowed to vote in Uper Hungary, Only the small Serb minority was allowed to vote in Voivodina, and only men were allowed to vote. Hungarians were not allowed to participate in these strange "elections".
There weren't secret ballot systems in that "elections", the elections were held as public open ballot/voting, with the simple raise of their hands.
The "elections" of the envoys of "national" councils were not even locally documented, only the decision of the self-appointed and locally established "national" councils in the small pubs/bars.
These so-called "elections" didn't use any ELECTORAL REGISTERS (or POLL BOOKS) of the LOCAL RESIDENTS, thus it made the gerrymandering directly possible. None of the voters in the open ballots votes were identified before the voting, it was in sharp contrast with normal democratic secret ballot systems. Like the participation of foreign voters from other countries and from foreign settlements were common, thus many people take part in the "elections" who had not any relationship with the area of the actual voting districts or even with the country. So without electoral registers, even foreign stranger "voters" or foreign soldiers could participate in the "elections" (An open possibility for brutal gerrymandery) The participation of foreign Serbian soldiers in the undocumented "elections" of "national councils" was usual in Southern Hungary Voivodine too. Without electoral registers of local residents, a usually unidentified single voter could vote in many many voting districts, thus a single man could vote in many times in many places without any problems...-- Liltender ( talk) 15:03, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
Tomás Garrigue Masaryk, the first president of Czechoslovakia:
"We had to choose between the formation of Czechoslovakia or a plebiscite".
Nigej, you don't like the words of your first own president?
@ Nigej:,
really? No way, it is a comparison, since the previous state was bigger, nothing to do with any POV. Similary, if a height Lion baby is only x percent of the Lion mother...I disagree removal, and really amazed...( KIENGIR ( talk) 22:39, 29 April 2020 (UTC))
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Quoting Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section#First sentence: "The first sentence should tell the nonspecialist reader what, or who, the subject is. Try to not overload the first sentence by describing everything notable about the subject." and "[...] use the first sentence to introduce the topic, and then spread the relevant information out over the entire lead."
Nonspecialist in this context is and average visitor not living in central Europe and not familiar with World War I and surrounding events.
Based on this, the first sentence should describe the primary context where the treaty fits: it is one of the peace treaties prepared on the Paris Peace Conference related to end of World War I, with links to the broader context. Essential preceding events (armistices) and major consequences can be then described in later sentences and paragraphs. See also the related Treaty of Versailles for inspiration and comparison.
The recent edits by Rjensen and KIENGIR inserted a specific aspect of the treaty as the first sentence: "[Treaty] reduced the size and population of Hungary by about two thirds, not just divesting it of virtually all areas that were not purely Hungarian, but leaving approx. 3 million Hungarians outside the new borders which was the cause of deep resentment in Hungary for generations.", which might be important topic for Hungarian visitors, but is not giving the proper context for others and in this sense is violation of the Neutral Point of View, more specifically this gives undue weight to one aspect of the treaty by placing it at the prominent place. The effects on the Hungarian population are extensively described both in the lead paragraph as well as in a separate section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mark5245 ( talk • contribs) 13:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
The Treaty of Trianon (French: Traité de Trianon, Hungarian: Trianoni békeszerződés) was one of the five major peace treaties prepared at the Paris Peace Conference and signed in the Grand Trianon Palace in Versailles on June 4, 1920. It formally ended World War I between most of the Allies of World War I and the Kingdom of Hungary, the latter being one of the successor states to defeated Austria-Hungary. It reduced the size and population of Hungary by about two thirds, not only divesting it of virtually all areas that were not purely Hungarian, but leaving approx. 3 million Hungarians outside the new borders, causing deep resentment in Hungary for generations.
I restored the original form of the first sentence because some information were already present in the lead section ("Its population was 7.6 million, 36% of the pre-war kingdom's population of 20.9 million.[8] The areas that were allocated to neighbouring countries in total (and each of them separately) had a majority of non-Hungarians but 31% of Hungarians (3.3 million)[9] were left outside of post-Trianon Hungary."). 82.78.135.134 ( talk) 08:29, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
The following phrase: "The treaty builds on the fact that "on the request of the former Imperial and Royal Austro-Hungarian Government an Armistice[6] was granted to Austria-Hungary on November 3, 1918, by the Principal Allied and Associated Powers, and completed as regards Hungary by the Military Convention of November 13[7], in order that a Treaty of Peace might be concluded" from the lead section may be moved to the article body I think to let the reader to reach the text about consequences faster. 82.78.135.134 ( talk) 09:56, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
Some of my best friends are Hungarians, but I'm afraid some of you are losing your perspective in this article. Austro-Hungary was an Empire, and empires tend to absorb adjacent populations. History tends to correct this process. I know it must have felt bad at the time, but no worse than it did for the neighbouring Czechs when they were absorbed in the first place.
People, this is an encyclopedia, and we need to retain a neutral viewpoint. We can surely state the facts, and let them speak for themselves. The article is about the Treaty, not just the Hungarian reaction to it. Please take a deep breath, relax, and let some neutral encyclopediasts tidy this article up. We will not betray your feelings.
Don't revert edits, work positively forward.
Also, the population figures in the lead contradict themselves. Somebody who knows more about it please choose one of the figures, and go with it.
Thanks: Peace and Love! Billyshiverstick ( talk) 03:00, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
I think the phrase "French diplomats played the major role in designing the treaty, with a mind to establishing French-led coalition of the newly formed nations" is given an undue weight in the lead section. For instance the American, Bristish, French and Italian proposals for the Hungarian-Romanian border were not are not substantially different: https://mek.oszk.hu/03400/03407/html/img/transterk-map31-j.jpg - the French and British proposals are almost identical, both of them include the railway line Satu Mare (Szatmárnémeti) - Oradea (Nagyvárad) - Arad. 86.120.251.89 ( talk) 12:05, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
This page describes the period till 1921, but some pictures are new. Some of results of the treaty are described in Trianon Syndrome, only listed here, not linked. The Romanian day is listed, nothing about the Hungarian one. Nothing about Trianon Museum in Hungary. My additions have beed removed from 'Trianon Syndrom'. Where do they belong? Many informations are in Hungarian only, I do not understand them. There is a big blank space here. Are current tenstions between Hungary and its neighbours result of Trianon or definitely not? Xx236 ( talk) 09:51, 13 January 2022 (UTC) The German page contains two sections about recent events. Xx236 ( talk) 09:55, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
Since there are many, I will take them all in order.
1. "This is total incorrect. Hungary had more Romanian schools than Romania itself ( /info/en/?search=Magyarization). The page shows the population data, so it is incorrect to state that Hungarian population was less than half."
You removed this section: The treatment of minorities under the Kingdom of Hungary was one of the main causes for their desire to be separated from Hungary. [1]
Faced with the danger of national competition, the Magyar gentry dared not fulfil the provisions of the Nationalities Law of 1868; on the other hand, to make their work easier, they demanded a knowledge of Magyar from all the inhabitants of Hungary. No state school, elementary or secondary, was ever provided for any national minority; the secondary schools which the Slovaks had set up for themselves were closed in 1874; Magyar was made compulsory in all schools in 1883. The highest expression of this policy was the Education Law promoted by [Prime minister, Count] Apponyi in 1907, which imposed a special oath of loyalty on all teachers and made them liable to dismissal if their pupils did not know Magyar. Similarly, the Magyar gentry attacked any political display by the nationalities -drove their few members from parliament and condemned their organisations. By these means, the Magyar gentry gained and kept a monopoly of state employment and of the liberal professions. At the beginning of the twentieth century, 95 per cent of the state officials, 92 per cent of the county officials, 89 per cent of the doctors, and 90 per cent of the judges were Magyar. Eighty per cent of the newspapers were in Magyar, and the remainder mostly German: three million Roumanians had 2,5 per cent of the newspapers, two million Slovaks had 0,64 per cent.
Pre-WW1 Kingdom of Hungary was a capitalist state and not a communist one. In capitalist countries the newspapers were owned organized and published by private companies and private entrepreneurs and not by the state. Their number and their number of copy based on the laws of the market: the demand and suppy. That's why I can not understand that as an argument. In a communist state, all newspapers are owned organized and released by the state itself, so if there are very few nminority language newspapers in a country, than you can blame the state for that without doubt.-- Longsars ( talk) 14:11, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
Looking at the /info/en/?search=Magyarization, it doesn't seem to confirm what you are saying: "For a long time, the number of non-Hungarians that lived in the Kingdom of Hungary was much larger than the number of ethnic Hungarians. According to the 1787 data, the population of the Kingdom of Hungary numbered 2,322,000 Hungarians (29%) and 5,681,000 non-Hungarians (71%). In 1809, the population numbered 3,000,000 Hungarians (30%) and 7,000,000 non-Hungarians (70%). An increasingly intense Magyarization policy was implemented after 1867." "Overall, between 1880 and 1910, the percentage of the total population that spoke Hungarian as its first language rose from 46.6% to 54.5%" But looking at /info/en/?search=Demographics_of_Hungary it seems this 54.5% is excluding Croatia for some reason, which was part of the Kingdom of Hungary. "According to the census of 1910, the largest ethnic group in the Kingdom of Hungary were Hungarians, who were 54.5% of the population of Kingdom of Hungary, excluding Croatia-Slavonia. Although the territories of the former Kingdom of Hungary that were assigned by the treaty to neighbouring states in total had a majority of non-Hungarian population, they also included areas of Hungarian majority and significant Hungarian minorities, numbering 3,318,000 in total."
This sentence, already existing on the Trianon page: "In the last census before the Treaty of Trianon held in 1910, which recorded population by language and religion, but not by ethnicity, speakers of the Hungarian language included approximately 48% of the entire population of the Kingdom of Hungary. [2]" Is more correct because it includes Croatia as well, that was part of the Kingdom of Hungary. As such, I find the assertion of the source you tried to remove correct, and am against removing it.
2. Quote from Francesco Saverio Nitti, I'm not opposed to that.
3. "Incorrect statement. The Romanian and non-Romanians were almost 50-50 according to the census which is on the page. The borders was decided in Paris by the Treaty of Trianon not by the will of the locals. For example, Nagyvárad (Oradea) and many other areas had absolute Hungarian population. Oradea had 95% Hungarian population in 1920 and it is only 10km from today's borders, so it is incorrect to say for example this city did not want to be part of Hungary, because the locals decided" This is simply incorrect. The census that is on this page: Romanian – 2,819,467 (54%), 1,658,045 (31.7%). And this is considering that:
"Several demographers (David W. Paul, [3] Peter Hanak, László Katus [4]) state that the outcome of the 1910 census is reasonably accurate, while others (Teich Mikuláš, Dušan Kováč, Martin D. Brown, Seton-Watson, Robert William, Owen Johnson, Kirk Dudley) believe that the 1910 census was manipulated by exaggerating the percentage of the speakers of Hungarian, [5] [6] pointing to the discrepancy between an improbably high growth of the Hungarian-speaking population and the decrease of percentual participation of speakers of other languages due to Magyarization in the Kingdom of Hungary in the late 19th century. [7] For example, the 1921 census in Czechoslovakia (only one year after the Treaty of Trianon) shows 21% Hungarians in Slovakia, [8] compared to 30% based on 1910 census. While the Romanian statistics (only one year before the Treaty of Trianon) shows 25% Hungarians in Transylvania."
So 31.7% may not even be the real number of Hungarians.
4. "total incorrect, check page ( /info/en/?search=Magyarization) it was many thousand schools for minorities, even Hungarian Kingdom had more Romanian schools where Romanians thaught everything in Romanian than Romanian Kingdom itself. Hungary asked the knowledge of the state language as basic level, this is not violate any human right, in Romania the Hungarians can speak Romanian and this is expected also, in England the immigrant people can speak English, this is quite normal" Can you point me out exactly where to check it? Because from what I can read, it only seems to reinforce the accuracy of the source that you removed: "By 1900, Transleithanian state administration, businesses, and high society were exclusively magyarophone, and by 1910, 96% of civil servants, 91.2% of all public employees, 96.8% of judges and public prosecutors, 91.5% of secondary school teachers and 89% of medical doctors had learned Hungarian as their first language."
5. "It was no referendum, nobody asked 5 million residents in Transylvania. Romania attacked Hungary again when WW1 was over when Hungarian army was disarmed. This one-sided Romanian rally was behind the threatening presence of the Romanian army, and Hungarians were total ignored. Also you did not mention it was a Hungarian contra rally which affirmed Transylvania remain in Hungary. Did the Romanian rally decide the Hungarian majority cities next today's borders became part of Romania?"
You removed this part:
The 1918-1920 period however, was marked by multiple general assemblies of minorities in Austria-Hungary where their elected representatives would express the aims of their people, such as the National Assembly of Romanians of Transylvania and Hungary on 1st of December 1918 who decreed by unanimous vote "the unification of those Romanians and of all the territories inhabited by them with Romania", [9] the National Assembly of Germans of Transylvania and Banat in 1919 who passed a declaration to support the decision to unite with the Kingdom of Romania, [10] [11] or the Slovak National Council's issue of the Martin Declaration in 1918, in effect declaring Slovakia's independence and presaging Slovakia's unification with the Czech lands as part of a new state. [12]
Yes, there was no referendum. You are correct. But then why remove the source? Because the source doesn't say there was a referendum either. The national assemblies of 1918-1920 were not meant to upersede democratic full-scale plebiscites/referendums, they were meant to express the will of the minorities of Austria-Hungary to the Entente. It is already mentioned previously that the only plebiscite was held in Sopron.
Actually, no. The Hungarian-Romanian War of 1919 was started by Hungary ( /info/en/?search=Hungarian%E2%80%93Romanian_War). I do not believe that "this one-sided Romanian rally was behind the threatening presence of the Romanian army" not is it our place to judge it, since no OR. "Hungarians were total ignored" the Hungarian had a national assembly of their own where they voted in favor of staying with Hungary. But according to the results of the national assemblies of Romanians, Germans and Hungarians. 65% (Romanians + Germans) of the population wanted union with Romania and 31% (Hungarians) wanted union with Hungary. We can all speculate what all of that means, but Wikipedia is not a place for OR.
Overall, I disagree with your reasons for removing the sources as I find them ill-informed. TheLastOfTheGiants ( talk) 09:42, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
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A lot of incorrect info added by: /info/en/?search=User:TheLastOfTheGiants By the way I am unable to read your sources, also if you have sources with a lot of incorrect info, it is not right to flood the page with them. "The 1918-1920 period however, was marked by multiple general assemblies of minorities in Austria-Hungary where their elected representatives would express the aims of their people, such as the National Assembly of Romanians of Transylvania and Hungary on 1st of December 1918 who decreed by unanimous vote "the unification of those Romanians and of all the territories inhabited by them with Romania" "the National Assembly of Germans of Transylvania and Banat in 1919 who passed a declaration to support the decision to unite with the Kingdom of Romania"
Romania attacked Hungary again (first 1916) when the WW1 was over when Hungarian army was disarmed. /info/en/?search=Hungarian–Romanian_War It was not at all referendum, so the people of Transylvania did not vote. Nobody asked the residents one by one. In Transylvania lived 5 million people in 1920. I do not understand why the Romanians are talking about voting, because it was no plebiscite, nobody asked 5 million people one by one about this or with a democratic referendum. Only some people from 5 million and many other Romanians from outside of Transylvania voted in not a secret vote to join Romania in wartime and of course, at the presence of the Romanian army behind this one-sided Romanian assembly. Moreover, the Hungarian partner was not invited at all, so hard to talk about any voting. Perhaps the full Hungarian populated cities, especially next to the today Hungarian border voted to join Romania? I do not believe this. Romania claimed the Hungarian territory until the Tisza river. Perhaps the full Hungarian populated Tisza region voted to join Romania? I do not think so. The borders were decided in Paris, not in the Romanian assembly.
Also you did not mention this: Contra reaction for the Romanian National Assembly: December 22, 1918 - In response, a Hungarian General Assembly in Cluj (Kolozsvár), central Transylvania, and the most important Hungarian town in Transylvania reaffirms the loyalty of Hungarians from Transylvania to Hungary.
If only some Saxon politician voted for Romania, only because by fear, do not forget the Romanian army (and behind the Entente) was in the background. Some people do not represent the full Saxon community, 550 000 people, who mostly during the history had a very good relationship with Transylvanian Hungarians. But these things do not matter at all, the Entente decided about the new borders in Paris by Treaty of Trianon and not these rallies.
"Hungary had hoped to maintain Greater Hungary, they hoped that all the regions of old Hungary would remain part of Hungary, but were not taking into account what the nationalities who lived inside Greater Hungary wanted. In Transylvania, where 54% of the population was Romanian, trying to maintain this region as part of Hungary was an utopia, for the president of the United States, Woodrow Wilson, came with his 14 points about the right of nationalities for self-determination, and the Romanians in Transylvania who were a majority, didn't want to be part of Hungary. Essentially, the Hungarian politicians hoped to keep the status quo but the historical reality, the debates during the peace conference and the arguments of the nationalities who wished to break free from Hungary, were the ones that mattered and eventually weighted decisively in favor of creating the eventual borders of Trianon."
This is not ture, Wilson points were total ignored for the Hungarians, the nationalities for self-determination for Hungarians was total ignored, that is why 3,5 million Hungarians moved to new countries, many border regions had full Hungarian population and moved to new countries. Please do not say that these full Hungarian settlements did not want remain in Hungary. "and the Romanians in Transylvania who were a majority" It should provide exact details and numbers, because Romania got bigger part from Hungary, not only Transylvania, but Partium, Banat... Romanians had 53,8% in that region which was moved from Hungary, so it was almost 50-50, but we can see the Hungarians were total ignored from the self-determination. "the debates during the peace conference and the arguments of the nationalities who wished to break free from Hungary" For example Nagyvárad (Oradea), only 10km from today's border had only 5% Romanian population and 95% non Romanian, 91% Hungarian population. Do you say the Hungarians wanted to break free from Hungary in that city? Please do not write incorrect data. /info/en/?search=Oradea Hungary offered democratic referendums about the disputed borders for minorities, however the political leaders of those minorities refused the idea of democratic referendums regarding disputed territories at the Paris peace conference, because they knew the majority of the settlements and many peoples (even many minorities) would vote to stay in Hungary. Nobody asked the residents, there were no referendums. Nobody listened Hungary in the peace treaty, when the negotiation was ended just the disarmed Hungarian country forced to sign the dictate behind the military presence of the Entente. The Hungarian diplomats were accompanied by guards. Is this the self-determination? And arguments, if the Hungarian member was not invited?
"The basic problem in Hungary was that less than half of the population were ethnically Hungarian. After the Ausgleich the Hungarians made at least one attempt to solve the cultural problem involved in the situation with the nationality law of 1868. The intent of this law was to arrange for a compromise between the non-Magyar nationalities and the Hungarians. The fact was, however, that the nationalities demanded more than cultural nationalism. They were in the process of establishing ties with their co-nationals — the Rumanians, Serbians, Czechs — living outside the monarchy or in the Austrian half, and were working for political independence. Moreover, the nationality law was seldom observed in Hungary; the rights of the nationalities were violated continuously by the Hungarian government. Their schools were closed and confiscated; their protests were suppressed by the police; their leaders were jailed for long periods of time. Hungarian propagandists spoke of a country of thirty million Hungarians, and of the sacred right of Hungary to “Magyarize” its nationalities."
The page clearly show the population data, it is incorrect that Hungarians had less than half of the population. Do not count Kingdom of Croatia, Croatia was personal union with Hungary, also you did not mention the Croatians in your text among the nationalities, but you calculate them to decrease the number of Hungarians. 30 million Hungarians? Source? Who say this? Total irrevelant topic. Schools closed? It was many thousand schools for minorities, even Hungarian Kingdom had more Romanian schools where Romanians thaught everything in Romanian than Romanian Kingdom itself. Hungary asked the knowledge of the state language as basic level, this is not violate any human right, today in Romania the Hungarians can speak Romanian and this is expected also, in England the immigrant people can speak English, this is quite normal. /info/en/?search=Magyarization
"Faced with the danger of national competition, the Magyar gentry dared not fulfil the provisions of the Nationalities Law of 1868; on the other hand, to make their work easier, they demanded a knowledge of Magyar from all the inhabitants of Hungary. No state school, elementary or secondary, was ever provided for any national minority; the secondary schools which the Slovaks had set up for themselves were closed in 1874; Magyar was made compulsory in all schools in 1883. The highest expression of this policy was the Education Law promoted by [Prime minister, Count] Apponyi in 1907, which imposed a special oath of loyalty on all teachers and made them liable to dismissal if their pupils did not know Magyar. Similarly, the Magyar gentry attacked any political display by the nationalities -drove their few members from parliament and condemned their organisations. By these means, the Magyar gentry gained and kept a monopoly of state employment and of the liberal professions. At the beginning of the twentieth century, 95 per cent of the state officials, 92 per cent of the county officials, 89 per cent of the doctors, and 90 per cent of the judges were Magyar. Eighty per cent of the newspapers were in Magyar, and the remainder mostly German: three million Roumanians had 2,5 per cent of the newspapers, two million Slovaks had 0,64 per cent." Again, it is incorrect, it was many thousand schools for minorities, even Hungarian Kingdom had more Romanian schools where Romanians thaught everything in Romanian than Romanian Kingdom itself. Hungary asked the knowledge of the state language as basic level, this is not violate any human right, today in Romania the Hungarians can speak Romanian and this is expected also, in England the immigrant people can speak English, this is quite normal. Check out how many thousand school were for the minorites: /info/en/?search=Magyarization — Preceding unsigned comment added by OrionNimrod ( talk • contribs) 12:04, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
Romania’s entry into World War 1, 27 August 1916. Detail from Proclamation of King Ferdinand of Romania:
“In our moral energy and our valour lie the means of giving him back his birthright of a great and free Romania from the Tisza to the Black Sea, and to prosper in peace in accordance with our customs and our hopes and dreams.”
https://royalromania.wordpress.com/2012/08/26/romanias-entry-into-the-great-war-27-august-1916-king-ferdinands-proclamation/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by OrionNimrod ( talk • contribs) 14:03, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
You wrote "unanimous vote the unification of those Romanians and of all the territories inhabited by them with Romania", but it was not a referendum, nobody knew the will of the locals, your text pretend that Treaty of Trianon happened because some Romanians from 5 million locals voted to join Romania, however the Treaty was decided in Paris by the Great Powers not by this rally, also you ignored the Hungarians made contra rally to vote remain in Hungary. And? Does not matter, because the Treaty made in Paris. Also the rally was mentioned in the text already, so you duplicated the info. — Preceding unsigned comment added by OrionNimrod ( talk • contribs) 17:51, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
As I said the page has already the Romanian assembly and you duplicated the info that suggest these "votes" caused the Treaty of Trianon, however not. OrionNimrod ( talk) 19:55, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
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I think that the Treaty of Neuilly-sur-Seine should be added to the list under number, because only it is omitted from all the peace treaties. In addition, I think of another event that directly affects the start of the second world war - the assassination attempt in Marseille on October 9, 1934. 212.75.27.213 ( talk) 07:12, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
I was reading this article and was very surprised to find that there was no explicit mention in the lead of the fact that the US failed to ratify the treaty and negotiated a separate treaty with Hungary.
Instead, this major fact is relegated to a minuscule superscripted note, which most users will quickly gloss over as just one of several references on the page (given the identical styling, if they are not intimately familiar with the quirks and stylings of Wikipedia). I would think this fact at least deserves a sentence in the lead, such as "It formally ended World War I between most of the Allies of World War I and the Kingdom of Hungary. Despite its important role in fighting and negotiating an end to the war, the United States ultimately failed to ratify the treaty, instead negotiating the U.S.–Hungarian Peace Treaty (1921) separately.", or if not a full sentence, than just extracting the note out into a simple clause following that sentence, something like "It formally ended World War I between most of the Allies of World War I and the Kingdom of Hungary, with the notable exception of the United States, which negotiated the U.S.–Hungarian Peace Treaty separately."—with the appropriate terms linked, obviously.
This fact is then only mentioned in the very last sentence of section 1.3, buried in the main text of the article.
Unearthing this important fact about the treaty from its current buried position would clear up what may seem like a mystery to readers unfamiliar with the subject, and provide an opportunity to place a cross link to a closely related treaty directly in the lead of the article, facilitating ease of navigation and discovery/learning.
Edit: Just to add to this, one reason I feel it is important to bring out this fact in the lead is because the US, and organizations in the US, were actually quite involved in how the Treaty of Trianon developed, so it is therefore notable that the country itself failed to ratify the treaty. For more on what I mean, see:
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About this edit [3], I have reverted it because I have read this Hungarian-Slovak population exchanges where it stated in second paragraph The Czechoslovak government planned the removal of 25,0000[17][29] Hungarian people from South Slovakia to Hungary,[17] but 44,129[17]-45,475[30] – generally well-to-do businessmen, tradesmen, farmers and intellectuals[25] - which contains 2 references that the number is between 44,129-45,475 and not 100 000+. Since there are 2 references that say one thing and 1 recently added that says another, I added clarification needed tag at that claim until it is clarified. Adrian ( talk) 10:01, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
In the introduction and in the main text are sections about border changes before/during/after World War II. Surely this is not relevant to this article. Suggest replacing with a simple remark to the effect that the current borders match those of the Treaty except for the loss of the 3 villages to Czechoslovakia in 1947. Nigej 16:44, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
Kingdom of Hungary was reestablished on 01/03/1920. This "new" Kingdom of Hungary accepted the Treaty of Trianon. Prior to Trianon, Soviet Hungary or the First Hungarian Republic or the "new" Kingdom of Hungary possessed the rights in connection with the territory of the "old" Kingdom of Hungary 'officially' (until 04/06/1920), however in the reality they could not validate those. Hungary was not a new state. It became entirely independent, but it was not new, the "old" Kingdom of Hungary was the predecessor. (more accurately Soviet Hungary for the 'new' Kingdom of Hungary) Fakirbakir ( talk) 20:14, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
I reverted edits of user:HangingCurve because of clear POV nature of such edits. Claim that "The Allies not only assumed without question that the minority peoples of the pre-war Kingdom of Hungary wished to leave" is absolutely POV and unacceptable. Where is evidence that these peoples "did not wished to leave pre-war Kingdom of Hungary"? Also, claim that Hungary "lost almost three-fourths of their country's territory" is not accurate: firstly, that territory was mainly inhabited by Indo-European peoples whom saw separation from Hungary as their liberation. Second, pre-war Kingdom of Hungary is legally not same country as post-war Hungary. Pre-war kingdom was not independent country, but part of the Habsburg Monarchy. The treaty does not contain a single word that says that something was "taken" from Hungary. On the contrary, Treaty clearly claims that Romania, Yugoslavia and Czechoslovakia are successor states of pre-war Kingdom of Hungary, together with post-war Hungary and it defining borders of post-war Hungary as borders of an new independent country. PANONIAN 23:21, 26 January 2012 (UTC)
You agree? That must prove it to be 'true' then. Just goes to show that if something, no matter how inaccurate or incorrect, is stated often enough, it will eventually be accepted as fact. Read into that what you will. 203.161.145.42 ( talk) 09:03, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
Please note that this is an article about The Treaty of Trianon. Nothing else. Nigej 11:04, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
But some people write comments about Aryan theories (scientifically (genetically and historically) obsolete linguistic-based belief-system from 17-18th century. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.2.153.160 ( talk) 11:14, 4 June 2012 (UTC)
The article did not mention that minority rights and laws were existed only in Austria and Hungary in pre-WW1 Europe! The first minority rights were invented firstly in Hungary in Europe in July 1849! But these were overturned after the Russian and Austrian armies crushed the Hungarian Revolution. When Hungary made a compromise with the dynasty in 1867 one of the first acts of the restored Parliament was to pass a Law on Nationalities (Act Number XLIV of 1868).
The situation of minorities in Hungary were much more better than in contemporary Western Europe. Other highly multinational countries were: France Russia and UK.
See the multi-national UK:
The situation of Scottish Irish Welsh people in "Britain" during the English hegemony is well known. They utmost forgot their original language, only english language cultural educational institutions existed. The only language was English in judiciary procedures and in offices and public administrations. It was not a real "United" Kingdom, it was rather a greater England.
See the multiethnic France:
In 1870, France was a similar-degree multi-ethnic state as Hungary, only 50% of the population of France spoke the French language as mothertongue. The other half of the population spoke Occitan, Catalan, Corsican, Alsatian, West Flemish, Lorraine Franconian, Gallo, Picard or Ch’timi and Arpitan etc... Many minority languages were closer to spanish or Italian language than French) French governments banned minority language schools , minority language newspapers minority theaters. They banned the usage of minority languages in offices , public adimistration, and judiciary procedures. The ratio of french mothertongue increased from 50% to 91% during the 1870-1910 period!!!
What about Russia?
Russian Empire was a similar multiethnic state as Hungary, without the existence of minority rights. The forced russification is also well known. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 188.36.77.20 ( talk) 09:46, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
@Nigej See the article about the British election system before WW1! There were no secret ballots in Britain before WW1, and there were universal suffrage after the WW1. And learn about balkan countries: Serbia Romania etc.... — Preceding
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81.182.3.81 (
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Again, I must repeat: learn the details of the history of British election system, there weren't general suffrage and secret ballots in Britain before WW1. The system of universal suffrage did not exist in the United Kingdom until 1928 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elections_in_the_United_Kingdom#History
Austria-Hungary did not exist after WW1, therefore your examples in post WW1 Europe are not accurate. Your Irish example is not accurate too.
The people's self determination idea of president Wilson did not happend in Kingdom of Hungary, because: The successor states protested against the helding of democratic referendums (universal suffrge secret ballots) about the disputed areas and borders. (perhabs the leader elite of the successor states did not trust in their own ethnic groups???)
There was only 1 democratic plebiscite about the borders (with general suffrage and secret ballots) in city of Sopron and its sorriunding 8 villages in North - Western Hungary in 1921. (Where every polling stations were under the controll and leadership of Entente army-officers) The treaty did not based on the people' will, therefore the Treaty hadn't legitimacy behind it. The decision-making of Paris treaties were remindful of early-modern era primitive Peace of Westphalia, rather than a modern 20th century democratic decision.
No Nigej, read it again and again if it is necessary. This whole discussion rather proves my point. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.182.3.81 ( talk) 12:18, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
I removed the following unsourced fragment: Although the territories of the former Kingdom of Hungary that were assigned by the treaty to neighbouring states in total (and each of them separately) had a majority of non-Hungarian population, they also included some areas with Hungarian majority (including areas with over 80–90% Hungarians) as well as some areas with sizable Hungarian minorities, numbering 3,318,000 in total.
It had no source since July 2012. After a later google search, I realized that it is a verbatim quote from "The Babylonian Code - Vol. One: The Unholy Scriptures" by Saladin F . There are 2 problems:
What does this exactly refer to? There were no counties with these names in interwar Romania http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Judete_1919-25.png Raysdiet ( talk) 12:23, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
I replaced Map 1 with Map 2 because Map 2 is a derivative work of Map 1, where there are added red Hungarian-populated areas. There is no reason to include them, as long as we already have in teh article ethnic maps (e. g. File:Ethnographic map of hungary 1910 by teleki carte rouge.jpg), which include all the ethnicities, not only the Hungarians. It is a little POV I think to present only the Hungarian-populated areas 82.79.215.211 ( talk) 11:22, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
I have found a contemporary map (1915) about the early plans for the disintegration of Austria-Hungary. [5] I am not sure if it is a public domain. Fakirbakir ( talk) 22:21, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
A long-bearded-man in the middle is Nikola Pašić, not Apponyi. Alexzr88 ( talk) 13:34, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
How many Trianon memorials should the article contain? There are already 3 such pictures and the one added by Rovibroni would be the 4th. I also ask the neutral editor User:AndyTheGrump to comment. 82.79.214.83 ( talk) 00:07, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
See Wikipedia:Possibly_unfree_files/2014_June_20 Avpop ( talk) 08:21, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
It feels out of place to put Romania, Czechoslovakia and Yugoslavia in the "Others" category, since they were the main beneficiaries and largely shaped the borders of the treaty trough both military and political actions, way before it was signed. I mean don't tell me that Japan had more to do with this than Romania, are you insane? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.116.34.218 ( talk) 09:16, 16 January 2016 (UTC)
The whole introduction tells how much Hungary "lost" because of the treaty. It is therefore not a summary of the treaty, but a summary of complaints about it, I gather mostly from the Hungarian side. Not neutral at all.
I propose we use this section of the talk page to come up with a decent introduction, that summarizes the actual Contents of the treaty. Syats ( talk) 13:35, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
I think we can deal in 1,000s of square kilometers for the intro. Post-Trianon we have 93,000 which matches up with the current area of Hungary, but the current intro says that "the pre-war Kingdom of Hungary (the Hungarian half of the Austro-Hungarian monarchy)" had an area of 325,411 which doesn't match up with Kingdom of Hungary which has 282,870 for 1910 in the infobox. Lands of the Crown of Saint Stephen infobox has 325,000 for 1890 (and 328.000 for 1918) while Kingdom of Croatia-Slavonia infobox has 42,541 which with the 282,870 from Kingdom of Hungary gives 325,000. So we can immediately see that we have contradictions with pre-WWI "Kingdom of Hungary" having areas of either 325,000 or 283,000 depending on which page you read. Of course this is a matter of whether Croatia-Slavonia is included or not and what names are used for the 325,000 or 283,000 parts. Currently Lands of the Crown of Saint Stephen has redirects from Transleithania (which makes sense to me) and Kingdom of Hungary (1867-1918) (which doesn't).
Perhaps we can use someone like this "The treaty regulated the status of an independent Hungarian state and defined its borders. The newly defined Hungary had an area of 93,000 square kilometers. Pre-war Transleithania (the Hungarian part of the Austro-Hungarian monarchy) had an area of 325,000 square kilometers, made of up of the Kingdom of Hungary, the Kingdom of Croatia-Slavonia and Fiume (modern Rijeka), so that Hungary had just 28% of the area of pre-war Transleithania, 33% of the area of the pre-war Kingdom of Hungary." Nigej ( talk) 10:57, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
Using only 1910 census is violation of the neutral point of view, as it shows only Hungarian view. To be accurate, these statistics must be complemented with the statistics of the new countries, like the 1921 census in Czechoslovakia, to give objective picture and reduce bias. I added one sentence into the 1910 census discussion to give an example. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 95.105.246.114 ( talk) 15:49, 17 October 2018 (UTC)
What exactly is the "Congress of Oppressed Nations"? It is referred to in the article and with a wikilink. Being capitalized and without explanation implies that it is a title of a real thing that should be known as an official entity of some sort, but the link is red. There needs to be either a separate article defining this title or it should be defined in this one. A wiki search yielded no results, so maybe the title is misnamed? A google search elicits a mention in an article in the Encyclopedia Brittanica as "Congress of Oppressed Nationalities", but no separate article there either. I've found no other google similarities. A wiki search on that last title elicits the article League for Small and Subject Nationalities, an article insufficient to explain the usage of the contested title in the present article. LisztianEndeavors ( talk) 19:35, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
Who were the real Opressed nations or people? Those who lived in such countries whose legal system did not even recognize minority rights. Just some example: Welsh, Irish, Scottish in Britain, the Occitan, Catalan, Corsican, Alsatian, West Flemish, Lorraine Franconian, Gallo, Picard or Ch’timi and Arpitan, who were in super majority before the mid 19th century in France. (forced francisation of Paris) OR we can countinue the list of non-white Biritsh and French colonies, where the people lived without any civil rights.--
Liltender (
talk) 19:26, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
In nationalist/chauvinist sense they were "opressed". Many of them imagined own country and even own army etc... despite many of the minorities had not even spoke their new artificailly created 19th century mutually intelligible common language. (like slovaks)-- Liltender ( talk) 05:58, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
Did Hungary pay the repatriations specified under the treaty? Hugo999 ( talk) 02:32, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
It must be mentioned, that there were no democratic referendums in the disputed areas.
Trianon was against Wilson's self-determination theory,because it WASN'T based on democratic referendums (general equal&secret ballots). It was not a wonder that Czech, Romanian and Serbian politicians vehemently PROTESTED against the very idea of democratic referendums about the borders at the Paris Peace Conference. Czech politicians didn't trust in Slovaks, because only very few Slovaks joined to the so-called "Czechoslovak"army against the Hungarians in 1919 (and Slovaks represented only 53% ratio in Northen parts of Hungary). Romanian politicians didn't trust in Transylvanian Romanians, perhabs they didn't want to join to the traditionally seriously backward & poor Romania (the ratio of Romanians were only 53% in Transylvania). Serbs were small minority (22% !!!) in Voivodine. Similar to Romania, Serbia was also a very backward Orthodox country without serious urbanization or industrialization.
It was not wonder that the USA did not sign this anti-democratic dictate.
There were only one democratic referendum about the borders between Hungary and Austria: The Sopron area referendum in Western Hungary in 1921, where Entente officers were the leaders of the voting districts, there were general equal and secret ballots with electoral registers (or poll books) of the LOCAL residents, and every local citizen could take part in the elections over 18year, regardless the ethnicity, social status or sex) Some villages voted to remain in Austria, some villages and citiy of Sopron voted to remain part of Hungary.
The "national councils" were brutal mockery and caricature of democracy. They were organized directly to avoid democratic referendums , thus grab more territory than it was possible for them.
It means that even few gathered people of a (single ethnicity "voters") in a very small pub/bar (as it often happened) could decide the future/fate of whole huge cities within some minutes.....
Only the Romanians were allowed to vote in Transylvania, only Slovaks were allowed to vote in Uper Hungary, Only the small Serb minority was allowed to vote in Voivodina, and only men were allowed to vote. Hungarians were not allowed to participate in these strange "elections".
There weren't secret ballot systems in that "elections", the elections were held as public open ballot/voting, with the simple raise of their hands.
The "elections" of the envoys of "national" councils were not even locally documented, only the decision of the self-appointed and locally established "national" councils in the small pubs/bars.
These so-called "elections" didn't use any ELECTORAL REGISTERS (or POLL BOOKS) of the LOCAL RESIDENTS, thus it made the gerrymandering directly possible. None of the voters in the open ballots votes were identified before the voting, it was in sharp contrast with normal democratic secret ballot systems. Like the participation of foreign voters from other countries and from foreign settlements were common, thus many people take part in the "elections" who had not any relationship with the area of the actual voting districts or even with the country. So without electoral registers, even foreign stranger "voters" or foreign soldiers could participate in the "elections" (An open possibility for brutal gerrymandery) The participation of foreign Serbian soldiers in the undocumented "elections" of "national councils" was usual in Southern Hungary Voivodine too. Without electoral registers of local residents, a usually unidentified single voter could vote in many many voting districts, thus a single man could vote in many times in many places without any problems...-- Liltender ( talk) 15:03, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
Tomás Garrigue Masaryk, the first president of Czechoslovakia:
"We had to choose between the formation of Czechoslovakia or a plebiscite".
Nigej, you don't like the words of your first own president?
@ Nigej:,
really? No way, it is a comparison, since the previous state was bigger, nothing to do with any POV. Similary, if a height Lion baby is only x percent of the Lion mother...I disagree removal, and really amazed...( KIENGIR ( talk) 22:39, 29 April 2020 (UTC))
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Quoting Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section#First sentence: "The first sentence should tell the nonspecialist reader what, or who, the subject is. Try to not overload the first sentence by describing everything notable about the subject." and "[...] use the first sentence to introduce the topic, and then spread the relevant information out over the entire lead."
Nonspecialist in this context is and average visitor not living in central Europe and not familiar with World War I and surrounding events.
Based on this, the first sentence should describe the primary context where the treaty fits: it is one of the peace treaties prepared on the Paris Peace Conference related to end of World War I, with links to the broader context. Essential preceding events (armistices) and major consequences can be then described in later sentences and paragraphs. See also the related Treaty of Versailles for inspiration and comparison.
The recent edits by Rjensen and KIENGIR inserted a specific aspect of the treaty as the first sentence: "[Treaty] reduced the size and population of Hungary by about two thirds, not just divesting it of virtually all areas that were not purely Hungarian, but leaving approx. 3 million Hungarians outside the new borders which was the cause of deep resentment in Hungary for generations.", which might be important topic for Hungarian visitors, but is not giving the proper context for others and in this sense is violation of the Neutral Point of View, more specifically this gives undue weight to one aspect of the treaty by placing it at the prominent place. The effects on the Hungarian population are extensively described both in the lead paragraph as well as in a separate section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mark5245 ( talk • contribs) 13:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
The Treaty of Trianon (French: Traité de Trianon, Hungarian: Trianoni békeszerződés) was one of the five major peace treaties prepared at the Paris Peace Conference and signed in the Grand Trianon Palace in Versailles on June 4, 1920. It formally ended World War I between most of the Allies of World War I and the Kingdom of Hungary, the latter being one of the successor states to defeated Austria-Hungary. It reduced the size and population of Hungary by about two thirds, not only divesting it of virtually all areas that were not purely Hungarian, but leaving approx. 3 million Hungarians outside the new borders, causing deep resentment in Hungary for generations.
I restored the original form of the first sentence because some information were already present in the lead section ("Its population was 7.6 million, 36% of the pre-war kingdom's population of 20.9 million.[8] The areas that were allocated to neighbouring countries in total (and each of them separately) had a majority of non-Hungarians but 31% of Hungarians (3.3 million)[9] were left outside of post-Trianon Hungary."). 82.78.135.134 ( talk) 08:29, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
The following phrase: "The treaty builds on the fact that "on the request of the former Imperial and Royal Austro-Hungarian Government an Armistice[6] was granted to Austria-Hungary on November 3, 1918, by the Principal Allied and Associated Powers, and completed as regards Hungary by the Military Convention of November 13[7], in order that a Treaty of Peace might be concluded" from the lead section may be moved to the article body I think to let the reader to reach the text about consequences faster. 82.78.135.134 ( talk) 09:56, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
Some of my best friends are Hungarians, but I'm afraid some of you are losing your perspective in this article. Austro-Hungary was an Empire, and empires tend to absorb adjacent populations. History tends to correct this process. I know it must have felt bad at the time, but no worse than it did for the neighbouring Czechs when they were absorbed in the first place.
People, this is an encyclopedia, and we need to retain a neutral viewpoint. We can surely state the facts, and let them speak for themselves. The article is about the Treaty, not just the Hungarian reaction to it. Please take a deep breath, relax, and let some neutral encyclopediasts tidy this article up. We will not betray your feelings.
Don't revert edits, work positively forward.
Also, the population figures in the lead contradict themselves. Somebody who knows more about it please choose one of the figures, and go with it.
Thanks: Peace and Love! Billyshiverstick ( talk) 03:00, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
I think the phrase "French diplomats played the major role in designing the treaty, with a mind to establishing French-led coalition of the newly formed nations" is given an undue weight in the lead section. For instance the American, Bristish, French and Italian proposals for the Hungarian-Romanian border were not are not substantially different: https://mek.oszk.hu/03400/03407/html/img/transterk-map31-j.jpg - the French and British proposals are almost identical, both of them include the railway line Satu Mare (Szatmárnémeti) - Oradea (Nagyvárad) - Arad. 86.120.251.89 ( talk) 12:05, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
This page describes the period till 1921, but some pictures are new. Some of results of the treaty are described in Trianon Syndrome, only listed here, not linked. The Romanian day is listed, nothing about the Hungarian one. Nothing about Trianon Museum in Hungary. My additions have beed removed from 'Trianon Syndrom'. Where do they belong? Many informations are in Hungarian only, I do not understand them. There is a big blank space here. Are current tenstions between Hungary and its neighbours result of Trianon or definitely not? Xx236 ( talk) 09:51, 13 January 2022 (UTC) The German page contains two sections about recent events. Xx236 ( talk) 09:55, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
Since there are many, I will take them all in order.
1. "This is total incorrect. Hungary had more Romanian schools than Romania itself ( /info/en/?search=Magyarization). The page shows the population data, so it is incorrect to state that Hungarian population was less than half."
You removed this section: The treatment of minorities under the Kingdom of Hungary was one of the main causes for their desire to be separated from Hungary. [1]
Faced with the danger of national competition, the Magyar gentry dared not fulfil the provisions of the Nationalities Law of 1868; on the other hand, to make their work easier, they demanded a knowledge of Magyar from all the inhabitants of Hungary. No state school, elementary or secondary, was ever provided for any national minority; the secondary schools which the Slovaks had set up for themselves were closed in 1874; Magyar was made compulsory in all schools in 1883. The highest expression of this policy was the Education Law promoted by [Prime minister, Count] Apponyi in 1907, which imposed a special oath of loyalty on all teachers and made them liable to dismissal if their pupils did not know Magyar. Similarly, the Magyar gentry attacked any political display by the nationalities -drove their few members from parliament and condemned their organisations. By these means, the Magyar gentry gained and kept a monopoly of state employment and of the liberal professions. At the beginning of the twentieth century, 95 per cent of the state officials, 92 per cent of the county officials, 89 per cent of the doctors, and 90 per cent of the judges were Magyar. Eighty per cent of the newspapers were in Magyar, and the remainder mostly German: three million Roumanians had 2,5 per cent of the newspapers, two million Slovaks had 0,64 per cent.
Pre-WW1 Kingdom of Hungary was a capitalist state and not a communist one. In capitalist countries the newspapers were owned organized and published by private companies and private entrepreneurs and not by the state. Their number and their number of copy based on the laws of the market: the demand and suppy. That's why I can not understand that as an argument. In a communist state, all newspapers are owned organized and released by the state itself, so if there are very few nminority language newspapers in a country, than you can blame the state for that without doubt.-- Longsars ( talk) 14:11, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
Looking at the /info/en/?search=Magyarization, it doesn't seem to confirm what you are saying: "For a long time, the number of non-Hungarians that lived in the Kingdom of Hungary was much larger than the number of ethnic Hungarians. According to the 1787 data, the population of the Kingdom of Hungary numbered 2,322,000 Hungarians (29%) and 5,681,000 non-Hungarians (71%). In 1809, the population numbered 3,000,000 Hungarians (30%) and 7,000,000 non-Hungarians (70%). An increasingly intense Magyarization policy was implemented after 1867." "Overall, between 1880 and 1910, the percentage of the total population that spoke Hungarian as its first language rose from 46.6% to 54.5%" But looking at /info/en/?search=Demographics_of_Hungary it seems this 54.5% is excluding Croatia for some reason, which was part of the Kingdom of Hungary. "According to the census of 1910, the largest ethnic group in the Kingdom of Hungary were Hungarians, who were 54.5% of the population of Kingdom of Hungary, excluding Croatia-Slavonia. Although the territories of the former Kingdom of Hungary that were assigned by the treaty to neighbouring states in total had a majority of non-Hungarian population, they also included areas of Hungarian majority and significant Hungarian minorities, numbering 3,318,000 in total."
This sentence, already existing on the Trianon page: "In the last census before the Treaty of Trianon held in 1910, which recorded population by language and religion, but not by ethnicity, speakers of the Hungarian language included approximately 48% of the entire population of the Kingdom of Hungary. [2]" Is more correct because it includes Croatia as well, that was part of the Kingdom of Hungary. As such, I find the assertion of the source you tried to remove correct, and am against removing it.
2. Quote from Francesco Saverio Nitti, I'm not opposed to that.
3. "Incorrect statement. The Romanian and non-Romanians were almost 50-50 according to the census which is on the page. The borders was decided in Paris by the Treaty of Trianon not by the will of the locals. For example, Nagyvárad (Oradea) and many other areas had absolute Hungarian population. Oradea had 95% Hungarian population in 1920 and it is only 10km from today's borders, so it is incorrect to say for example this city did not want to be part of Hungary, because the locals decided" This is simply incorrect. The census that is on this page: Romanian – 2,819,467 (54%), 1,658,045 (31.7%). And this is considering that:
"Several demographers (David W. Paul, [3] Peter Hanak, László Katus [4]) state that the outcome of the 1910 census is reasonably accurate, while others (Teich Mikuláš, Dušan Kováč, Martin D. Brown, Seton-Watson, Robert William, Owen Johnson, Kirk Dudley) believe that the 1910 census was manipulated by exaggerating the percentage of the speakers of Hungarian, [5] [6] pointing to the discrepancy between an improbably high growth of the Hungarian-speaking population and the decrease of percentual participation of speakers of other languages due to Magyarization in the Kingdom of Hungary in the late 19th century. [7] For example, the 1921 census in Czechoslovakia (only one year after the Treaty of Trianon) shows 21% Hungarians in Slovakia, [8] compared to 30% based on 1910 census. While the Romanian statistics (only one year before the Treaty of Trianon) shows 25% Hungarians in Transylvania."
So 31.7% may not even be the real number of Hungarians.
4. "total incorrect, check page ( /info/en/?search=Magyarization) it was many thousand schools for minorities, even Hungarian Kingdom had more Romanian schools where Romanians thaught everything in Romanian than Romanian Kingdom itself. Hungary asked the knowledge of the state language as basic level, this is not violate any human right, in Romania the Hungarians can speak Romanian and this is expected also, in England the immigrant people can speak English, this is quite normal" Can you point me out exactly where to check it? Because from what I can read, it only seems to reinforce the accuracy of the source that you removed: "By 1900, Transleithanian state administration, businesses, and high society were exclusively magyarophone, and by 1910, 96% of civil servants, 91.2% of all public employees, 96.8% of judges and public prosecutors, 91.5% of secondary school teachers and 89% of medical doctors had learned Hungarian as their first language."
5. "It was no referendum, nobody asked 5 million residents in Transylvania. Romania attacked Hungary again when WW1 was over when Hungarian army was disarmed. This one-sided Romanian rally was behind the threatening presence of the Romanian army, and Hungarians were total ignored. Also you did not mention it was a Hungarian contra rally which affirmed Transylvania remain in Hungary. Did the Romanian rally decide the Hungarian majority cities next today's borders became part of Romania?"
You removed this part:
The 1918-1920 period however, was marked by multiple general assemblies of minorities in Austria-Hungary where their elected representatives would express the aims of their people, such as the National Assembly of Romanians of Transylvania and Hungary on 1st of December 1918 who decreed by unanimous vote "the unification of those Romanians and of all the territories inhabited by them with Romania", [9] the National Assembly of Germans of Transylvania and Banat in 1919 who passed a declaration to support the decision to unite with the Kingdom of Romania, [10] [11] or the Slovak National Council's issue of the Martin Declaration in 1918, in effect declaring Slovakia's independence and presaging Slovakia's unification with the Czech lands as part of a new state. [12]
Yes, there was no referendum. You are correct. But then why remove the source? Because the source doesn't say there was a referendum either. The national assemblies of 1918-1920 were not meant to upersede democratic full-scale plebiscites/referendums, they were meant to express the will of the minorities of Austria-Hungary to the Entente. It is already mentioned previously that the only plebiscite was held in Sopron.
Actually, no. The Hungarian-Romanian War of 1919 was started by Hungary ( /info/en/?search=Hungarian%E2%80%93Romanian_War). I do not believe that "this one-sided Romanian rally was behind the threatening presence of the Romanian army" not is it our place to judge it, since no OR. "Hungarians were total ignored" the Hungarian had a national assembly of their own where they voted in favor of staying with Hungary. But according to the results of the national assemblies of Romanians, Germans and Hungarians. 65% (Romanians + Germans) of the population wanted union with Romania and 31% (Hungarians) wanted union with Hungary. We can all speculate what all of that means, but Wikipedia is not a place for OR.
Overall, I disagree with your reasons for removing the sources as I find them ill-informed. TheLastOfTheGiants ( talk) 09:42, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
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A lot of incorrect info added by: /info/en/?search=User:TheLastOfTheGiants By the way I am unable to read your sources, also if you have sources with a lot of incorrect info, it is not right to flood the page with them. "The 1918-1920 period however, was marked by multiple general assemblies of minorities in Austria-Hungary where their elected representatives would express the aims of their people, such as the National Assembly of Romanians of Transylvania and Hungary on 1st of December 1918 who decreed by unanimous vote "the unification of those Romanians and of all the territories inhabited by them with Romania" "the National Assembly of Germans of Transylvania and Banat in 1919 who passed a declaration to support the decision to unite with the Kingdom of Romania"
Romania attacked Hungary again (first 1916) when the WW1 was over when Hungarian army was disarmed. /info/en/?search=Hungarian–Romanian_War It was not at all referendum, so the people of Transylvania did not vote. Nobody asked the residents one by one. In Transylvania lived 5 million people in 1920. I do not understand why the Romanians are talking about voting, because it was no plebiscite, nobody asked 5 million people one by one about this or with a democratic referendum. Only some people from 5 million and many other Romanians from outside of Transylvania voted in not a secret vote to join Romania in wartime and of course, at the presence of the Romanian army behind this one-sided Romanian assembly. Moreover, the Hungarian partner was not invited at all, so hard to talk about any voting. Perhaps the full Hungarian populated cities, especially next to the today Hungarian border voted to join Romania? I do not believe this. Romania claimed the Hungarian territory until the Tisza river. Perhaps the full Hungarian populated Tisza region voted to join Romania? I do not think so. The borders were decided in Paris, not in the Romanian assembly.
Also you did not mention this: Contra reaction for the Romanian National Assembly: December 22, 1918 - In response, a Hungarian General Assembly in Cluj (Kolozsvár), central Transylvania, and the most important Hungarian town in Transylvania reaffirms the loyalty of Hungarians from Transylvania to Hungary.
If only some Saxon politician voted for Romania, only because by fear, do not forget the Romanian army (and behind the Entente) was in the background. Some people do not represent the full Saxon community, 550 000 people, who mostly during the history had a very good relationship with Transylvanian Hungarians. But these things do not matter at all, the Entente decided about the new borders in Paris by Treaty of Trianon and not these rallies.
"Hungary had hoped to maintain Greater Hungary, they hoped that all the regions of old Hungary would remain part of Hungary, but were not taking into account what the nationalities who lived inside Greater Hungary wanted. In Transylvania, where 54% of the population was Romanian, trying to maintain this region as part of Hungary was an utopia, for the president of the United States, Woodrow Wilson, came with his 14 points about the right of nationalities for self-determination, and the Romanians in Transylvania who were a majority, didn't want to be part of Hungary. Essentially, the Hungarian politicians hoped to keep the status quo but the historical reality, the debates during the peace conference and the arguments of the nationalities who wished to break free from Hungary, were the ones that mattered and eventually weighted decisively in favor of creating the eventual borders of Trianon."
This is not ture, Wilson points were total ignored for the Hungarians, the nationalities for self-determination for Hungarians was total ignored, that is why 3,5 million Hungarians moved to new countries, many border regions had full Hungarian population and moved to new countries. Please do not say that these full Hungarian settlements did not want remain in Hungary. "and the Romanians in Transylvania who were a majority" It should provide exact details and numbers, because Romania got bigger part from Hungary, not only Transylvania, but Partium, Banat... Romanians had 53,8% in that region which was moved from Hungary, so it was almost 50-50, but we can see the Hungarians were total ignored from the self-determination. "the debates during the peace conference and the arguments of the nationalities who wished to break free from Hungary" For example Nagyvárad (Oradea), only 10km from today's border had only 5% Romanian population and 95% non Romanian, 91% Hungarian population. Do you say the Hungarians wanted to break free from Hungary in that city? Please do not write incorrect data. /info/en/?search=Oradea Hungary offered democratic referendums about the disputed borders for minorities, however the political leaders of those minorities refused the idea of democratic referendums regarding disputed territories at the Paris peace conference, because they knew the majority of the settlements and many peoples (even many minorities) would vote to stay in Hungary. Nobody asked the residents, there were no referendums. Nobody listened Hungary in the peace treaty, when the negotiation was ended just the disarmed Hungarian country forced to sign the dictate behind the military presence of the Entente. The Hungarian diplomats were accompanied by guards. Is this the self-determination? And arguments, if the Hungarian member was not invited?
"The basic problem in Hungary was that less than half of the population were ethnically Hungarian. After the Ausgleich the Hungarians made at least one attempt to solve the cultural problem involved in the situation with the nationality law of 1868. The intent of this law was to arrange for a compromise between the non-Magyar nationalities and the Hungarians. The fact was, however, that the nationalities demanded more than cultural nationalism. They were in the process of establishing ties with their co-nationals — the Rumanians, Serbians, Czechs — living outside the monarchy or in the Austrian half, and were working for political independence. Moreover, the nationality law was seldom observed in Hungary; the rights of the nationalities were violated continuously by the Hungarian government. Their schools were closed and confiscated; their protests were suppressed by the police; their leaders were jailed for long periods of time. Hungarian propagandists spoke of a country of thirty million Hungarians, and of the sacred right of Hungary to “Magyarize” its nationalities."
The page clearly show the population data, it is incorrect that Hungarians had less than half of the population. Do not count Kingdom of Croatia, Croatia was personal union with Hungary, also you did not mention the Croatians in your text among the nationalities, but you calculate them to decrease the number of Hungarians. 30 million Hungarians? Source? Who say this? Total irrevelant topic. Schools closed? It was many thousand schools for minorities, even Hungarian Kingdom had more Romanian schools where Romanians thaught everything in Romanian than Romanian Kingdom itself. Hungary asked the knowledge of the state language as basic level, this is not violate any human right, today in Romania the Hungarians can speak Romanian and this is expected also, in England the immigrant people can speak English, this is quite normal. /info/en/?search=Magyarization
"Faced with the danger of national competition, the Magyar gentry dared not fulfil the provisions of the Nationalities Law of 1868; on the other hand, to make their work easier, they demanded a knowledge of Magyar from all the inhabitants of Hungary. No state school, elementary or secondary, was ever provided for any national minority; the secondary schools which the Slovaks had set up for themselves were closed in 1874; Magyar was made compulsory in all schools in 1883. The highest expression of this policy was the Education Law promoted by [Prime minister, Count] Apponyi in 1907, which imposed a special oath of loyalty on all teachers and made them liable to dismissal if their pupils did not know Magyar. Similarly, the Magyar gentry attacked any political display by the nationalities -drove their few members from parliament and condemned their organisations. By these means, the Magyar gentry gained and kept a monopoly of state employment and of the liberal professions. At the beginning of the twentieth century, 95 per cent of the state officials, 92 per cent of the county officials, 89 per cent of the doctors, and 90 per cent of the judges were Magyar. Eighty per cent of the newspapers were in Magyar, and the remainder mostly German: three million Roumanians had 2,5 per cent of the newspapers, two million Slovaks had 0,64 per cent." Again, it is incorrect, it was many thousand schools for minorities, even Hungarian Kingdom had more Romanian schools where Romanians thaught everything in Romanian than Romanian Kingdom itself. Hungary asked the knowledge of the state language as basic level, this is not violate any human right, today in Romania the Hungarians can speak Romanian and this is expected also, in England the immigrant people can speak English, this is quite normal. Check out how many thousand school were for the minorites: /info/en/?search=Magyarization — Preceding unsigned comment added by OrionNimrod ( talk • contribs) 12:04, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
Romania’s entry into World War 1, 27 August 1916. Detail from Proclamation of King Ferdinand of Romania:
“In our moral energy and our valour lie the means of giving him back his birthright of a great and free Romania from the Tisza to the Black Sea, and to prosper in peace in accordance with our customs and our hopes and dreams.”
https://royalromania.wordpress.com/2012/08/26/romanias-entry-into-the-great-war-27-august-1916-king-ferdinands-proclamation/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by OrionNimrod ( talk • contribs) 14:03, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
You wrote "unanimous vote the unification of those Romanians and of all the territories inhabited by them with Romania", but it was not a referendum, nobody knew the will of the locals, your text pretend that Treaty of Trianon happened because some Romanians from 5 million locals voted to join Romania, however the Treaty was decided in Paris by the Great Powers not by this rally, also you ignored the Hungarians made contra rally to vote remain in Hungary. And? Does not matter, because the Treaty made in Paris. Also the rally was mentioned in the text already, so you duplicated the info. — Preceding unsigned comment added by OrionNimrod ( talk • contribs) 17:51, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
As I said the page has already the Romanian assembly and you duplicated the info that suggest these "votes" caused the Treaty of Trianon, however not. OrionNimrod ( talk) 19:55, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
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I think that the Treaty of Neuilly-sur-Seine should be added to the list under number, because only it is omitted from all the peace treaties. In addition, I think of another event that directly affects the start of the second world war - the assassination attempt in Marseille on October 9, 1934. 212.75.27.213 ( talk) 07:12, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
I was reading this article and was very surprised to find that there was no explicit mention in the lead of the fact that the US failed to ratify the treaty and negotiated a separate treaty with Hungary.
Instead, this major fact is relegated to a minuscule superscripted note, which most users will quickly gloss over as just one of several references on the page (given the identical styling, if they are not intimately familiar with the quirks and stylings of Wikipedia). I would think this fact at least deserves a sentence in the lead, such as "It formally ended World War I between most of the Allies of World War I and the Kingdom of Hungary. Despite its important role in fighting and negotiating an end to the war, the United States ultimately failed to ratify the treaty, instead negotiating the U.S.–Hungarian Peace Treaty (1921) separately.", or if not a full sentence, than just extracting the note out into a simple clause following that sentence, something like "It formally ended World War I between most of the Allies of World War I and the Kingdom of Hungary, with the notable exception of the United States, which negotiated the U.S.–Hungarian Peace Treaty separately."—with the appropriate terms linked, obviously.
This fact is then only mentioned in the very last sentence of section 1.3, buried in the main text of the article.
Unearthing this important fact about the treaty from its current buried position would clear up what may seem like a mystery to readers unfamiliar with the subject, and provide an opportunity to place a cross link to a closely related treaty directly in the lead of the article, facilitating ease of navigation and discovery/learning.
Edit: Just to add to this, one reason I feel it is important to bring out this fact in the lead is because the US, and organizations in the US, were actually quite involved in how the Treaty of Trianon developed, so it is therefore notable that the country itself failed to ratify the treaty. For more on what I mean, see:
Best,
Hermes Thrice Great ( talk) 11:05, 5 December 2023 (UTC)