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I've just overhauled the structure of the page a little, hopefully placed the 'inconsistencies' in the historical context of Tolkiens writing the LOTR, removed some non-NOP, flagged up the original research and downplayed the movie adaptation saga, as most of it is recounting rumour, if someone would like to create a Hobbit(movie) page... -- Davémon 18:15, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
Legendarium? This word doesn't make the Oxford English Dictionary. Any chance someone who knows what it supposedly means can replace it with a word that actually exists...
I love the word "legendarium," but it is not in common usage. Plus Mythology lets us link to that page. -- Cayzle
The Hobbit was not considered a children's book when it was first translated into Finnish, with a matching translation of names and an illustration by Tove Jansson. This version tends to cause either mirth or nausea in good amounts among Finnish fans of Tolkien. Would this warrant a mention in the article? -- Kizor
General comment about book synopses: is it really necessary to detail the entire plot? To me, it not only makes the article unwieldy, it opens the door to more error, inconsistencies, etc. User:Alcarillo
Under the "Novel" section yet another example is made depriving Tolkien of ever having Meaning in his work because he disliked allegory, mentioned in his forward to a later edition of LOTR. People conveniently omit what he goes on to say that he doesn't like allegory proper, but does not have a problem with applicability, the former is the author's direct desire to control your interpretation and the latter allows the reader freedom to interpret. Too many people tend to confuse allegory with any degree of moral quotient. An allegorical interpretation of the work includes making the ring stand in for nuclear bombs or a specific character representing a real life person, etc etc etc. It was this Tolkien presumably detested. Degrees of moral value, open to the interpretation of the reader- mythos, obligation, faith, socio-religious system (anarchic catholicism) are all there in spades, it is just up to the reader to interpret any meaning for themselves. The Lord of the Rings is a very spiritual work, it is just not dead on specific or heavy handed. Just what Tolkien intended at the time of writing The Hobbit, who knows, but tapping into the mythos of Heroism certainly seems manifest. But it is generic to say the least, Bilbo certainly doesn't represent anything specific, or Gollum or Smaug etc etc etc.
Does the "Preview of Sequel" section really belong? The format of the article led me to believe that allusions to the beginning of The Lord of the Rings were featured at the end of the book, but upon reaching it I found no such references. This is misleading; we needn't a whole paragraph "previewing" LotR if no such preview is in The Hobbit itself. - [[User:Furrykef| furrykef ( Talk at me)]] 23:04, 21 Dec 2004 (UTC)
Wouldn't it be worth mentioning how much Tolkien was influenced by Beowulf when writing the Hobbit? Perhaps even the parallels could be drawn out. If you guys want me to, I can do it... Matthias
The only parallel to Beowulf I can think of is the Dragon, Smaug. And that may just be a coincidence. Dragons are a recurring theme in fantasy tales. Do you have any other examples? Ereinion File:RAHSymbol.JPG
A party of 13 sets out for satisfaction or revenge. In both parties there is a thief, who steals a cup from a dragon by using a secret passage. So far about the story. Singing is very important in the hobbit, poems presented by scoppes were important for Anglo Saxons and two are found in Beowulf. The dwarfish culture also has elements of Anglo Saxon culture, e.g. where Anglo Saxon names are often alliterated if they people are from the same family, the names of the dwarfes rhyme. Loyalty to their leader and kin is also very important to the dwarfes and they have bloodfeuds with the goblins(orcs) of moria. Also both Bilbo and Beowulf are pretty typical tragic heroes, e.g. supernatural ability (ring/strentgh), supernatural help(Gandalf/God,fate), reluctant to accept task(obvious wth Bilbo/Beowulf consults wise men berfore leaving to kill Grendel) and both are separated(Bilbo in the mountain/Beowulf when he faces Grendels mother), as well as both have honor and follow the heroic code(Bilbo gives smaragds to elves king/obvious with Beowulf). I know that some points are very common in fantasy, but since Tolkien studied Beowulf, I think it had a big influence on him and on The Hobbit and this is worth mentioning as an own point. Sorry for my bad english by the way. Matthias
Interesting...perhaps there is a greater correlation between the two. You've made several interesting points and have given good examples -- many of which seem more than just genre-related coincidence. I think you have something, and until someone reasonably disputes it, I say go ahead and add it to the main article. Ereinion File:RAHSymbol.JPG 23:10, Mar 3, 2005 (UTC)
I'm working at a paper for school for this and at the same time trying to recover my account, so I'll guess you'll see something this weekend. Matthias
I'd be interested in reading anything else you could find. Ereinion File:RAHSymbol.JPG
Try google, here something I found: http://faculty.uca.edu/~jona/second/hobbeow.htm http://www.unm.edu/~medinst/resources/weblinks/tolkienweb.htm
Some are rather profound though and I don't know if they have a place in the article except in further reading. Matthias
See "Beowulf: The Monsters and the Critics". Tolkien published an essay on Beowulf in 1936 - a year before the Hobbit. The copy I'm reading is included in "Beowulf: A Verse Translation"
ISBN
0-393-97580-0. Validation, anyone?
I made a few edits, might come back and do more when I have more time. I cut out a few things from the "Similarities to Beowulf" heading, here's why:
"While Beowulf has the help of God, Bilbo often prevails because of his sheer luck which may or may not be due to some kind of divine providence."
Redundant. Also the Christian references in Beowulf are edits by the monk(s) that made the surviving copy, which Tolkien knew and probably wouldn't have incorporated.
"Both get separated from their group, Bilbo in the mountains, Beowulf when he is captured by Grendel's mother."
Beowulf's encounter with Grendel's dam predates his encounter with the dragon by 50 years. I can't think of any parallels from Beowulf from the first two monsters, if anyone can this might bear editing & reinserting.
Edited reference to Beowulf as an "epic poem" to just "poem". Its status as an epic is highly questionable, and Tolkien himself considered it not to be one. Any "is or is not it an epic" coverage can go in a different section, here I'll stick to Tolkien's writings. 71.32.91.112 22:50, 14 February 2006 (UTC)
I'd like to merge the articles on the 12 minor dwarf companions to create a collected Dwarves of The Hobbit (or similar) article. Each is a minor character that will never have more than a few sentences or paragraphs written about them. I think that by collecting them in one place it would make it easier to learn more about the minor dwarves. Any objections? -- Mrwojo 21:19, 18 Mar 2005 (UTC)
I can't help but feel that many of these comparisons are misapplied. There's more a general similarity with other legends of northwest Europe than Beowulf as such. A direct comparison between Bilbo and Beowulf himself is extremely strained, as Bilbo is very much not an heroic character. Much of the humor in the book comes from the contrast between Bilbo's bourgeoise mannerisms and the heroic behavior of the other characters. Besides, there is a direct parallel to Beowulf in TH: Beorn. Their names even mean the same thing. For the moment I confine myself to correcting some of the more glaring errors in this section, but I really question whether it's useful at all. TCC (talk) (contribs) 21:51, 29 October 2005 (UTC)
I agree, the "Beowulf hypothesis" doesn't really warrant inclusion.
This is a messy section. I've removed 2 references to Led Zepplin songs that were influenced by the Lord of the Rings - not The Hobbit, they rightfully belong in the LOTR section. I can't find Enya actually doing a song influenced by The Hobbit itself, but absence of evidence is not evidence of absence, if someone more into Enya could list actual Hobbit songs, or remove her. Leonard Nimoys "The Ballad of Bilbo Baggins" - isn't this more of an adaptation than an influence?
Also shoudln't Adaptations come after Editions? seems more logical to me to talk about the book first, and secondary versions after? The only reason I didn't do it was I'm not sure how!-- Davémon 18:02, 2 February 2006 (UTC)
For influences, the album by Pink Floyd, the Piper at the Gates of Dawn, was largely influenced by the Hobbit.
Peter Jackson adapted The Lord of the Rings into films. So why didn't he do The Hobbit as well? Scorpionman 19:38, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
That hobbit picture is awful. Could someone replace it with something a bit more professional? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.72.130.134 ( talk • contribs)
Peter Jackson, Director of the Lord of the Rings trilogy has expressed interest in filming The Hobbit with some of his former cast returning to reprise their roles (i.e., Ian McKellan and Andy Serkis, but likely Ian Holm would not return to play Bilbo, due to the age difference.) Jackson has spoken publicly on the subject:
(Moved this here because it's a rumour, and not appropriate for an encyclopedia entry - yet! -- Davémon 18:59, 25 May 2006 (UTC))
how about we move the dust jacket image to the infobox and junk the image of the actual book - it seems a bit silly to have that frankly? Although it is quite interesting with the dragon motif and stuff, maybe swap them? Morwen - Talk 20:59, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
Not really a difference in tone: Bilbo loses his dark green hood and cloak (borrowed from Dwalin) after falling into Gollum's cave, yet puts them on before leaving Bag End. Readers of The Hobbit will recognize that these are his old clothes (contrary to what is asserted above), since the color is the same and they're "weather-stained". Uthanc 07:46, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
He could possibly obtain similar new clothes during his first journey. 84.3.249.242 09:33, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
We need to be more explicit about the differences with LoTR. For example, we currently list this as an inconsistency:
There is lighthearted use of "magic"; Gandalf is said to have given the Old Took a pair of diamond studs that "fastened themselves and never came undone till ordered", and when Bilbo tries to steal a purse from the trolls, the purse shouts.
What is the inconsistency here? We need to be clear about how this differs from LoTR.
Same goes for all the others. -- Doradus 20:18, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
Is the use of matches in the Hobbit really an inconsistancy? In Out of the Frying-Pan into the Fire the narrator comments in an aside that "dwarves have never taken to matches even yet" (The Hobbit 102, London: HarperCollins, 1996). In the Hobbit, the narrator in general uses a more playful tone and more directly involves the reader and references modern times, whereas the LOTR is written in a much more high and serious style. Couldn't it just be that dwarves (and maybe other species as well) continue to prefer not to use matches in LOTR? Correct me if I am wrong, but the LOTR doesn't specifically say matches weren't invented yet, it just choses not to mention them. I don't really see this as a legitimate inconsistancy. Mllefantine 04:53, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
This is the first time I have encountered this claim. Tolkien's biography very clearly states that a family friend named Elaine Griffiths was shown a typescript of the story in the early 1930s. When she later went to work for George Allen & Unwin, she revealed the existence of the story to a staffmember named Susan Dagnall, who in turn asked Tolkien if she could look at the (still incomplete) manuscript. He complied and Ms. Dagnall, impressed by it, urged him to complete the book. Once this was done in late 1936, she then showed the book to Stanley Unwin, who then asked his son Rayner's opinion. It is possible that Tolkien showed the book to this Reverend Mother (although the incident is not mentioned in either Carpener nor, as I recall, White), but she was not responsible for the book's publication.-- Werthead 23:17, 5 October 2006 (UTC)
Can you please ammend the text to follow the Biographical version. I'm not sure where the Reverend Mother story comes from, as no sources have been cited, as such it's not really fitting for an encyclopedia entry. I've re-outlined the story as per the biography as best as I see fit, but admit it could be clearer. -- Davémon 14:00, 24 December 2006 (UTC)
I reverted this to the previous version - the current that I saw had been deleted. I apologise for not putting any comments in to that fact
I noticed another inconsistency while reading The Hobbit. On page 33: "Some said...they have seldom ever heard of the king round here..." Which king? Gondor's kings are gone, Arnor is ruined, the dwarves are scattered and have no king, the elves have nothing to do with dwarves, and they obviously don't mean Sauron. So who is this mysterious king? -- Imp88 08:29, 15 January 2007 (UTC)
The current rule of thumb with regards to novels infoboxes is to only list ISBN numbers for books published after the system came into use in 1967-68, so I changed the one here to NA (not applicable). I'm curious, though, that the infobox indicated an ISBN number ( ISBN 1-131-37105-4) for a "UK first hardback edition". Was The Hobbit never published in hardback in the UK prior to 1967? 23skidoo 17:18, 20 January 2007 (UTC)
I have amended this this slightly. SmokeyTheCat 10:37, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
This section has been flagged as Original Research. All these statements need to be attributable to a reliable secondary source (ie. not The Hobbit or The Lord of the Rings). At the moment the only way for someone to check them is to read both primary sources. Unless these statements are given proper attribution they will eventually all be deleted. I'm sure there are sources out there, but unfortunately not in my Tolkien related collection, so if someone can add proper attribution to them... -- Davémon 19:08, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
File:The hobbit ced.jpg I have not even read its license ... but ... just so you know its there exit2dos2000 05:48, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
The Rankin-Bass Hobbit is mentioned under Adaptations [The Hobbit#TV] and has it's own article The Hobbit (film). If you'd like to add the laserdisc release and the image it to the The Hobbit (film) page, it should be welcome. -- Davémon 08:42, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
In the version of The Hobbit that I read, Fili, Kili, Oin, and Gloin did not have accents on the 'i' (Fili and Kili) and the 'o' (Oin and Gloin). Can someone explain this to me? ---Signed By: KoЯnfan71 ( User Page — My Talk — Contribs) 01:00, 4 May 2007 (UTC) P.S. The letters in question are in italics.
Perhaps it schould be mentionend, that a German translation and publication of the "Hobbit" was already destined for 1938. But for Nazi-Germany he had to give a certificate, that he is pure aryan (Arier-Nachweis). But Tolkien refused and so the German translation took time until 1957. 91.12.103.79 13:58, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
I don't remember where I read it, but I distinctly remember reading about the "history" of Tolkien's dragons, which stated that their wings were made of metal (as opposed to bat-hide, like most Western dragons). I was sure I'd read it either in the Silmarillion or in The Lost Road and Other Tales (I think that's what it's called--it's kind of a making-of type thing), but I've gone over both numerous times and it just doesn't seem to be there. Does anyone know where I might have heard it, and/or if it's true? 71.217.102.196 04:59, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
The statement
cites the 12-volume History of Middle-earth as its source. I think this could be improved by converting it to a footnote describing HoMe or by citing a more specific source. -- Mrwojo 03:18, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
The designation of The Hobbit as a children's book keeps getting edited-out of the intro paragraph and changed to "Fantasy Novel" or something-or-other. Whilst the Hobbit may be enjoyed by many adults it is most certainly a children's story, and is listed as such on Children's Literature Canon, the US publishers website Houghton Mifflin, and the " Mythopoeic Fantasy Award for Children’s Literature honors books for younger readers (from “Young Adults” to picture books for beginning readers), in the tradition of The Hobbit...", W. H Auden calls it a children's story in his review of FoTR in the New York Times | link - even the original decision to publish the book was largely influenced on the favorable review of a child. -- Davémon 17:39, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
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Nomination this article should be nominated for an award. -- Cman7792 14:05, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
The Hobbit (2009 film) is so messy, and I feel what little that has happened of the production so far should be accumulated here. Alientraveller 09:11, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
This merge is innapropriate. The Hobbit book and The Hobbit film are 2 completely things. The Hobbit book article should be about the book work; including book plot, author, work it has infuenced, games made from it, and other info. The Hobbit film has alot of info about the hobbit movies, there will be 2 movies, and stuff people actually care about. You can't just take an article, crumble it up into a paragraph, and scram it into another article. That only ruins the quality of what you are reading. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cman7792 ( talk • contribs)
First two paragraphs are remarkably similar to that found here http://www.tolkienlibrary.com/booksbytolkien/hobbit/description.htm ( copyvio)
See http://www.tolkienlibrary.com/disclaimer.htm
Though I don't know if permission has been sought etc.. 87.102.81.184 17:07, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
3rd and 4th paragraphs are also too similar for comfort. (possible copyvio) 87.102.81.184 17:09, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
Also
The_Hobbit#Writing_the_Book compare http://www.tolkienlibrary.com/press/69thanniversary.htm
I can't say that this page is the one at fault - but it needs looking into. 87.102.81.184 17:16, 4 September 2007 (UTC) This revision http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=The_Hobbit&oldid=155663023
Actually, I've been ferreting through the page history, and I think that the text starting with the Auden letter in 1955 is definitely not a problem, it goes back a lot further than the August 2006 date of that website article. Given that, I'm going to give the benefit of the doubt to the other bit of text, at least until Hyarion hears back from the author of that site. Thanks for reminding me about the listing at Copyright Problems. I'll remove it from there, but we must all keep an eye on this until it is resolved one way or the other. Carcharoth 20:11, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
I'll leave this template here for now in case the other article turns out to not be the source in which case we'll need a source.{{Unreferencedsection|date=Sept 2007}} 87.102.20.77 21:04, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
Decided to add the unreference bit - temporarily until the provenance is sorted out, it's better than the HUGE copyright notice, and it is applicable here. 87.102.20.77 21:52, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
I've added a link to "tolkien library" in that section and removed the template. Thanks to those who sorted it out and thanks to the person who wrote the original - which I have to say I really like the quality of his writing and the style he writes in - good work and very professional. 87.102.89.127 14:24, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
Almost every animail in The Hobbit can talk. Though this does not seem to be th ecase in The Lord Of The Rings. Though I have not read The Lord Of The Rings, only seen the films. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jackbergin ( talk • contribs) 00:22, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
Everyone, the plot in the hobbit article is way too long. that is probably why the article is rated on the b class instead of an a. lets shorten up the plot and make it not take up more than half the page. thank you. -- Cman7792 20:29, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
i fixed up the plot. in fact i fixed up the article and it is much better now. it will definitely be on the a scale now.-- Cman7792 23:42, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
I've added a tag to one section - as it is a direct copy , see Talk:The Hobbit#The Hobbit#editions copyvio - I'm not sure if it really needs rewriting - as the person whose work was copied seemed ok with it..
I'll leave the tag for someone else to take the correct action. 87.102.17.252 16:09, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
I've made a small trunaction of the plot summary - removing non-essentials - though not down to a four paragraph guidline - I think it's a little better, though shortening is difficult in what is a event rich story.. 87.102.21.91 13:30, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
The plot synopsis needs ruthless vigilance to keep it terse and coherent. Details like Elrond being an Elf-friend or Esgaroth being another name for Lake-town are useless in conveying the highlights of the story. Nothing that shows up in the description of characters in the Characters section should be repeated in the synopsis. If an incident does not powerfully contribute to plot development, it should not be mentioned in the synopsis.
How did Bilbo find himself on the quest? Because Gandalf wanted him to go and pressured him into it. Why did Gandalf want him to go? Because the dwarves had no plan and no real hope of succeeding. Gandalf understood he needed to inject a little benign chaos into the quest, and he seems to have had a premonition that Bilbo should be the source. He also knew the dwarves would resist. He overcame their resistance by revealing the secret door, which could be of use to a "burglar"... and Bilbo would be the burglar.
Hence it's important to mention: the council with the dwarves; the revelation of the map; the notion of a "burglar"; and the fact that Gandalf used good-natured deception to arrange both the council and the working relationship.
The fact that Gandalf needed to save the party early on is important because it shows they were incapable of even surviving the quest on their own. When Gandalf is gone they still need help, and Bilbo is the one who will step in.
Hence it's important to mention: the trolls and the goblins in the mountains, disasters from which Gandalf saves them; the ring and its acquisition, which are crucial to Bilbo saving first himself and then the others; the fact that Bilbo saved himself from the goblins; how Bilbo's account of his escape was received by the party; and how Bilbo goes on to save the dwarves.
Bilbo evolves into a character of competence, and the plot reaches its climax. What are the major elements of the climax? There is a dragon that needs to be disposed of. How did they get rid of the dragon? There is a treasure everyone wants. What happened to the treasure? And, finally, what happened to Bilbo?
Hence it's important to mention: Lake-town, which is instrumental in killing Smaug; how Smaug was killed; the fact that the treasure is claimed by elves, dwarves, and men, setting up conflict; Bilbo's ploy to avert war; the war itself and how it was won; how Bilbo's relationship with the dwarves resolves; and how Bilbo ends up.
Particular incidents which do not further the important elements of the plot: Elrond and the stay at Rivendell (merely a pleasant diversion); the goblin and Warg attack after the escape from the Misty Mountains (since the group was passively rescued); the stay at Beorn's domicile (merely a fantastic diversion); and details about any of the characters other than Bilbo.
Strebe 06:17, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
The literary themes and stylistic tone of the novel should be held separately from the story of it's conception and publication.. They simply aren't the same thing, and readers unfamiliar or newly familiar with the book will be looking for this kind of information with relative ease, rather than expecting it to be buried around other in other sections. Unless somebody has a compelling reason why this shouldn't be the case, and has to deviate from WP:NOVEL? -- Davémon 08:33, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
Can some one look at the section I've renamed 'introduction' the previous version had an awful link to a page that had factual errors and other problems.. We already have a plot summary - so what is needed is an introduction to the book. 87.102.10.190 16:36, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
Can someone do a complete rewrite of that section - it looks like the second half is a copvio from the referenced book. Preferably introducing the key facts before starting the analysis. 87.102.10.190 16:40, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
I've removed what was left to here
"Introduction The Hobbit, or There and Back Again is a children's book set in a western european fantasy setting known as Middle-earth and follows the quest of home-loving Bilbo Baggins on his adventure into more dangerous parts of the world in order to reach and win his share of Smaug the Dragon's hoard. Through accepting the nature of his " Tookish" half (a disrespectable, romantic, fey and adventurous side of his family tree) and utilising both his wits and common sense during the quest, Bilbo develops a level of maturity, competence and wisdom. [1] The events of The Hobbit take place during the " Third Age" of Middle-earth, [2]."
We already have an introductory paragraph, and a plot summary - perhaps any useful bits could be moved to different sections. 87.102.10.190 16:42, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
I'd also like to suggest movinf the 'concept and creation' section to be the first section? 87.102.10.190 16:44, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
Some statements have been marked with {{fact}}:
Tolkien made other small changes in order to conform the narrative to events in The Lord of the Rings and in the ideas he was continually developing for the Quenta Silmarillion.
Tolkien introduced or mentioned characters and places that figured prominently in his legendarium, specifically Elrond and Gondolin, along with elements from Germanic legend.
{{ME-fact}} is better... also, this is probably common knowledge to many fans, but what book (or letter) states these? Carpenter's biography? A volume in the History of Middle-earth series? Uthanc 07:40, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
I've revised this section in light of Rateliff's work, eliminating the misstatement that Elaine Griffiths worked at A&U (she never did), and removing the Carpenter-derived misprision that the manuscript was unfinished. Solicitr ( talk) 16:02, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
On previous readings of revised text of The Hobbit, I had been curious about the original version of the chapter Riddles in the Dark — the preface states that the text was changed, claiming that the revision is the corrected version based on Gandalf later insisting that Bilbo's story/diary were not completely truthful. Gandalf manages to get the facts out of Bilbo. The preface goes on to suggest that Bilbo's desire to lie was itself an indication of the ring's evil nature.
Anyway, I do not know how or if this synopsis should be incorporated into the article. The "original" is based on the 1938 Houghton Mifflin Co. (Boston & New York) edition, pp. 80-96. I just read the chapter from a reference copy at my library. The "revised" is a Ballantine printing from the early 1970s.
I'll let others decide what to do with this synopsis. Perhaps it qualifies as original research.
Original | Revised |
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Bilbo (B) finds ring while searching for a way out. | Bilbo (B) finds ring while searching for a way out. |
B agrees to be eaten by Gollum (G) if G wins the riddle game. | B agrees to be eaten by Gollum (G) if G wins the riddle game. |
G agrees to give B a present if B wins the game. | G agrees to show B the way out of the mountain cave if B wins. |
When B wins, G goes to find the ring to give to B; because G treats the riddle game as sacrosanct. | When B wins, G goes to find the ring claiming he needs it to lead B out. G really intends to attack B while invisible. |
G cannot find ring, mutters to himself about its powers, apologizes to B for failing to live up to the game. | G cannot find the ring, realizes that B may have it, becomes furious. |
B does not admit to finding the ring. Suggests that G can redeem himself by showing B way out. | G runs up the tunnel to find B. |
While going behind G, B slips the ring on to test it. G realizes B is gone. B takes it off when G is not looking. G assumes he overlooked B. | While G is running up the tunnel, B slips the ring onto his finger. G runs past him unawares. B realizes the ring's power. |
G shows B a narrow opening to a side tunnel. G refuses to continue for fear of goblins. They depart politely. G never realizes that B has the ring. | G stops at the opening to a side tunnel and weeps. He smells B, and realizes he has the ring. B jumps over G and runs down tunnel. G tries to follow, but his fear of goblins prevents him. |
B happens upon the exit and goblins, they see him. By luck puts the ring on. Goblins look for him. | Still wearing the ring, B happens upon the goblin. The ring barely falls off momentarily. The goblins see B, but he soon disappears again. They look for him. |
B gets stuck in the door, but manages to escape. | B gets stuck in the door, but manages to escape. |
— Eoghanacht talk 17:59, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
since the hobbit movie is officially confirmed, a separate page for the hobbit must be made. -- Cman7792 ( talk) 21:49, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
Has their ever been any significant criticism over the fact that the main character is hired as a thief (even if he is stealing back what the dwarfs own)? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.10.127.241 ( talk) 01:56, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
didnt they mention it in a song or something? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.46.49.98 ( talk) 20:24, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
At the moment, this article is supported reasonably well with citations to sources that appear to be appropriate and reliable. However, a number of important statements remain unsourced, which will be a problem if this article is nominated as a featured article candidate (as I hope it eventually will be). I have marked some of these with the "citations" needed" template in hopes that those with the necessary knowledge can "fill-in" the needed references. Simmaren ( talk) 16:46, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
Following the original publication of The Hobbit in 1937, new editions in English were published in 1951, 1966, 1978 and 1995 and the novel has been reprinted frequently. [FN = Anderson, Douglas A., ed.The Annotated Hobbit. Revised Edition. Houghton Mifflin Company. Boston, 2002. ISBN 0-618-13470-0. pp. ___ ] In addition, The Hobbit has been translated into over forty languages. Some languages have seen multiple translations.[ FN = Anderson, The Annotated Hobbit p. 23]
The lead contains the following sentence at the end: "The novel influenced the development of the modern genre of Fantasy literature, has been republished and adapted many times since its first edition." While undoubtedly true, the first part of this statement is not supported by the body of the article, which does not have an "Influence" or "Significance" section. Such a section (appropriately sourced) is needed. In default of such a section, this part of the statement should be supported by a citation. Simmaren ( talk) 17:03, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
"The familiar form of the riddle-game allows Gollum and Bilbo to discourse, rather than the content of the riddles themselves. This idea of a superficial contrast in characters' linguistic styles leading to an understanding of the deeper unity is a constant recurring theme throughout The Hobbit."
On the page, there's a huge gap between the intro and the table of contents. I would fix this, but I'm not sure how. Could someone please fix it? Flamingtorch372 ( talk) 00:44, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Strebe, I take it from your user page that you are the original author of much of this article. Whether my recent edits were an improvement or not I will leave for others to judge. Obviously, I think they were or I wouldn't have taken the time and trouble to make them. Is it possible that you are feeling a sense of ownership of the article? It would appear so, for you to reverse all of my edits summarily without any discussion, as if they were vandalism. I will not work on this page again -- I don't see that there is any point. Simmaren ( talk) 03:15, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Strebe ( talk) 08:05, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
There are only about four characters listed in the actual article. In the book there are several more. I think the list of characters should either be drastically extended or made into a new article to really do The Hobbit justice. - Kanogul ( talk) 16:47, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
Where it talks about The Hobbit movie, it says that an young director named John Bauwens will be directing it. However, the source link doesn't work, and I've been reading at alot of places that Guillermo del Toro (Read Here) will be directing it. Whats the deal? Flamingtorch372 ( talk) 23:22, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
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I've just overhauled the structure of the page a little, hopefully placed the 'inconsistencies' in the historical context of Tolkiens writing the LOTR, removed some non-NOP, flagged up the original research and downplayed the movie adaptation saga, as most of it is recounting rumour, if someone would like to create a Hobbit(movie) page... -- Davémon 18:15, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
Legendarium? This word doesn't make the Oxford English Dictionary. Any chance someone who knows what it supposedly means can replace it with a word that actually exists...
I love the word "legendarium," but it is not in common usage. Plus Mythology lets us link to that page. -- Cayzle
The Hobbit was not considered a children's book when it was first translated into Finnish, with a matching translation of names and an illustration by Tove Jansson. This version tends to cause either mirth or nausea in good amounts among Finnish fans of Tolkien. Would this warrant a mention in the article? -- Kizor
General comment about book synopses: is it really necessary to detail the entire plot? To me, it not only makes the article unwieldy, it opens the door to more error, inconsistencies, etc. User:Alcarillo
Under the "Novel" section yet another example is made depriving Tolkien of ever having Meaning in his work because he disliked allegory, mentioned in his forward to a later edition of LOTR. People conveniently omit what he goes on to say that he doesn't like allegory proper, but does not have a problem with applicability, the former is the author's direct desire to control your interpretation and the latter allows the reader freedom to interpret. Too many people tend to confuse allegory with any degree of moral quotient. An allegorical interpretation of the work includes making the ring stand in for nuclear bombs or a specific character representing a real life person, etc etc etc. It was this Tolkien presumably detested. Degrees of moral value, open to the interpretation of the reader- mythos, obligation, faith, socio-religious system (anarchic catholicism) are all there in spades, it is just up to the reader to interpret any meaning for themselves. The Lord of the Rings is a very spiritual work, it is just not dead on specific or heavy handed. Just what Tolkien intended at the time of writing The Hobbit, who knows, but tapping into the mythos of Heroism certainly seems manifest. But it is generic to say the least, Bilbo certainly doesn't represent anything specific, or Gollum or Smaug etc etc etc.
Does the "Preview of Sequel" section really belong? The format of the article led me to believe that allusions to the beginning of The Lord of the Rings were featured at the end of the book, but upon reaching it I found no such references. This is misleading; we needn't a whole paragraph "previewing" LotR if no such preview is in The Hobbit itself. - [[User:Furrykef| furrykef ( Talk at me)]] 23:04, 21 Dec 2004 (UTC)
Wouldn't it be worth mentioning how much Tolkien was influenced by Beowulf when writing the Hobbit? Perhaps even the parallels could be drawn out. If you guys want me to, I can do it... Matthias
The only parallel to Beowulf I can think of is the Dragon, Smaug. And that may just be a coincidence. Dragons are a recurring theme in fantasy tales. Do you have any other examples? Ereinion File:RAHSymbol.JPG
A party of 13 sets out for satisfaction or revenge. In both parties there is a thief, who steals a cup from a dragon by using a secret passage. So far about the story. Singing is very important in the hobbit, poems presented by scoppes were important for Anglo Saxons and two are found in Beowulf. The dwarfish culture also has elements of Anglo Saxon culture, e.g. where Anglo Saxon names are often alliterated if they people are from the same family, the names of the dwarfes rhyme. Loyalty to their leader and kin is also very important to the dwarfes and they have bloodfeuds with the goblins(orcs) of moria. Also both Bilbo and Beowulf are pretty typical tragic heroes, e.g. supernatural ability (ring/strentgh), supernatural help(Gandalf/God,fate), reluctant to accept task(obvious wth Bilbo/Beowulf consults wise men berfore leaving to kill Grendel) and both are separated(Bilbo in the mountain/Beowulf when he faces Grendels mother), as well as both have honor and follow the heroic code(Bilbo gives smaragds to elves king/obvious with Beowulf). I know that some points are very common in fantasy, but since Tolkien studied Beowulf, I think it had a big influence on him and on The Hobbit and this is worth mentioning as an own point. Sorry for my bad english by the way. Matthias
Interesting...perhaps there is a greater correlation between the two. You've made several interesting points and have given good examples -- many of which seem more than just genre-related coincidence. I think you have something, and until someone reasonably disputes it, I say go ahead and add it to the main article. Ereinion File:RAHSymbol.JPG 23:10, Mar 3, 2005 (UTC)
I'm working at a paper for school for this and at the same time trying to recover my account, so I'll guess you'll see something this weekend. Matthias
I'd be interested in reading anything else you could find. Ereinion File:RAHSymbol.JPG
Try google, here something I found: http://faculty.uca.edu/~jona/second/hobbeow.htm http://www.unm.edu/~medinst/resources/weblinks/tolkienweb.htm
Some are rather profound though and I don't know if they have a place in the article except in further reading. Matthias
See "Beowulf: The Monsters and the Critics". Tolkien published an essay on Beowulf in 1936 - a year before the Hobbit. The copy I'm reading is included in "Beowulf: A Verse Translation"
ISBN
0-393-97580-0. Validation, anyone?
I made a few edits, might come back and do more when I have more time. I cut out a few things from the "Similarities to Beowulf" heading, here's why:
"While Beowulf has the help of God, Bilbo often prevails because of his sheer luck which may or may not be due to some kind of divine providence."
Redundant. Also the Christian references in Beowulf are edits by the monk(s) that made the surviving copy, which Tolkien knew and probably wouldn't have incorporated.
"Both get separated from their group, Bilbo in the mountains, Beowulf when he is captured by Grendel's mother."
Beowulf's encounter with Grendel's dam predates his encounter with the dragon by 50 years. I can't think of any parallels from Beowulf from the first two monsters, if anyone can this might bear editing & reinserting.
Edited reference to Beowulf as an "epic poem" to just "poem". Its status as an epic is highly questionable, and Tolkien himself considered it not to be one. Any "is or is not it an epic" coverage can go in a different section, here I'll stick to Tolkien's writings. 71.32.91.112 22:50, 14 February 2006 (UTC)
I'd like to merge the articles on the 12 minor dwarf companions to create a collected Dwarves of The Hobbit (or similar) article. Each is a minor character that will never have more than a few sentences or paragraphs written about them. I think that by collecting them in one place it would make it easier to learn more about the minor dwarves. Any objections? -- Mrwojo 21:19, 18 Mar 2005 (UTC)
I can't help but feel that many of these comparisons are misapplied. There's more a general similarity with other legends of northwest Europe than Beowulf as such. A direct comparison between Bilbo and Beowulf himself is extremely strained, as Bilbo is very much not an heroic character. Much of the humor in the book comes from the contrast between Bilbo's bourgeoise mannerisms and the heroic behavior of the other characters. Besides, there is a direct parallel to Beowulf in TH: Beorn. Their names even mean the same thing. For the moment I confine myself to correcting some of the more glaring errors in this section, but I really question whether it's useful at all. TCC (talk) (contribs) 21:51, 29 October 2005 (UTC)
I agree, the "Beowulf hypothesis" doesn't really warrant inclusion.
This is a messy section. I've removed 2 references to Led Zepplin songs that were influenced by the Lord of the Rings - not The Hobbit, they rightfully belong in the LOTR section. I can't find Enya actually doing a song influenced by The Hobbit itself, but absence of evidence is not evidence of absence, if someone more into Enya could list actual Hobbit songs, or remove her. Leonard Nimoys "The Ballad of Bilbo Baggins" - isn't this more of an adaptation than an influence?
Also shoudln't Adaptations come after Editions? seems more logical to me to talk about the book first, and secondary versions after? The only reason I didn't do it was I'm not sure how!-- Davémon 18:02, 2 February 2006 (UTC)
For influences, the album by Pink Floyd, the Piper at the Gates of Dawn, was largely influenced by the Hobbit.
Peter Jackson adapted The Lord of the Rings into films. So why didn't he do The Hobbit as well? Scorpionman 19:38, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
That hobbit picture is awful. Could someone replace it with something a bit more professional? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.72.130.134 ( talk • contribs)
Peter Jackson, Director of the Lord of the Rings trilogy has expressed interest in filming The Hobbit with some of his former cast returning to reprise their roles (i.e., Ian McKellan and Andy Serkis, but likely Ian Holm would not return to play Bilbo, due to the age difference.) Jackson has spoken publicly on the subject:
(Moved this here because it's a rumour, and not appropriate for an encyclopedia entry - yet! -- Davémon 18:59, 25 May 2006 (UTC))
how about we move the dust jacket image to the infobox and junk the image of the actual book - it seems a bit silly to have that frankly? Although it is quite interesting with the dragon motif and stuff, maybe swap them? Morwen - Talk 20:59, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
Not really a difference in tone: Bilbo loses his dark green hood and cloak (borrowed from Dwalin) after falling into Gollum's cave, yet puts them on before leaving Bag End. Readers of The Hobbit will recognize that these are his old clothes (contrary to what is asserted above), since the color is the same and they're "weather-stained". Uthanc 07:46, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
He could possibly obtain similar new clothes during his first journey. 84.3.249.242 09:33, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
We need to be more explicit about the differences with LoTR. For example, we currently list this as an inconsistency:
There is lighthearted use of "magic"; Gandalf is said to have given the Old Took a pair of diamond studs that "fastened themselves and never came undone till ordered", and when Bilbo tries to steal a purse from the trolls, the purse shouts.
What is the inconsistency here? We need to be clear about how this differs from LoTR.
Same goes for all the others. -- Doradus 20:18, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
Is the use of matches in the Hobbit really an inconsistancy? In Out of the Frying-Pan into the Fire the narrator comments in an aside that "dwarves have never taken to matches even yet" (The Hobbit 102, London: HarperCollins, 1996). In the Hobbit, the narrator in general uses a more playful tone and more directly involves the reader and references modern times, whereas the LOTR is written in a much more high and serious style. Couldn't it just be that dwarves (and maybe other species as well) continue to prefer not to use matches in LOTR? Correct me if I am wrong, but the LOTR doesn't specifically say matches weren't invented yet, it just choses not to mention them. I don't really see this as a legitimate inconsistancy. Mllefantine 04:53, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
This is the first time I have encountered this claim. Tolkien's biography very clearly states that a family friend named Elaine Griffiths was shown a typescript of the story in the early 1930s. When she later went to work for George Allen & Unwin, she revealed the existence of the story to a staffmember named Susan Dagnall, who in turn asked Tolkien if she could look at the (still incomplete) manuscript. He complied and Ms. Dagnall, impressed by it, urged him to complete the book. Once this was done in late 1936, she then showed the book to Stanley Unwin, who then asked his son Rayner's opinion. It is possible that Tolkien showed the book to this Reverend Mother (although the incident is not mentioned in either Carpener nor, as I recall, White), but she was not responsible for the book's publication.-- Werthead 23:17, 5 October 2006 (UTC)
Can you please ammend the text to follow the Biographical version. I'm not sure where the Reverend Mother story comes from, as no sources have been cited, as such it's not really fitting for an encyclopedia entry. I've re-outlined the story as per the biography as best as I see fit, but admit it could be clearer. -- Davémon 14:00, 24 December 2006 (UTC)
I reverted this to the previous version - the current that I saw had been deleted. I apologise for not putting any comments in to that fact
I noticed another inconsistency while reading The Hobbit. On page 33: "Some said...they have seldom ever heard of the king round here..." Which king? Gondor's kings are gone, Arnor is ruined, the dwarves are scattered and have no king, the elves have nothing to do with dwarves, and they obviously don't mean Sauron. So who is this mysterious king? -- Imp88 08:29, 15 January 2007 (UTC)
The current rule of thumb with regards to novels infoboxes is to only list ISBN numbers for books published after the system came into use in 1967-68, so I changed the one here to NA (not applicable). I'm curious, though, that the infobox indicated an ISBN number ( ISBN 1-131-37105-4) for a "UK first hardback edition". Was The Hobbit never published in hardback in the UK prior to 1967? 23skidoo 17:18, 20 January 2007 (UTC)
I have amended this this slightly. SmokeyTheCat 10:37, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
This section has been flagged as Original Research. All these statements need to be attributable to a reliable secondary source (ie. not The Hobbit or The Lord of the Rings). At the moment the only way for someone to check them is to read both primary sources. Unless these statements are given proper attribution they will eventually all be deleted. I'm sure there are sources out there, but unfortunately not in my Tolkien related collection, so if someone can add proper attribution to them... -- Davémon 19:08, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
File:The hobbit ced.jpg I have not even read its license ... but ... just so you know its there exit2dos2000 05:48, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
The Rankin-Bass Hobbit is mentioned under Adaptations [The Hobbit#TV] and has it's own article The Hobbit (film). If you'd like to add the laserdisc release and the image it to the The Hobbit (film) page, it should be welcome. -- Davémon 08:42, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
In the version of The Hobbit that I read, Fili, Kili, Oin, and Gloin did not have accents on the 'i' (Fili and Kili) and the 'o' (Oin and Gloin). Can someone explain this to me? ---Signed By: KoЯnfan71 ( User Page — My Talk — Contribs) 01:00, 4 May 2007 (UTC) P.S. The letters in question are in italics.
Perhaps it schould be mentionend, that a German translation and publication of the "Hobbit" was already destined for 1938. But for Nazi-Germany he had to give a certificate, that he is pure aryan (Arier-Nachweis). But Tolkien refused and so the German translation took time until 1957. 91.12.103.79 13:58, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
I don't remember where I read it, but I distinctly remember reading about the "history" of Tolkien's dragons, which stated that their wings were made of metal (as opposed to bat-hide, like most Western dragons). I was sure I'd read it either in the Silmarillion or in The Lost Road and Other Tales (I think that's what it's called--it's kind of a making-of type thing), but I've gone over both numerous times and it just doesn't seem to be there. Does anyone know where I might have heard it, and/or if it's true? 71.217.102.196 04:59, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
The statement
cites the 12-volume History of Middle-earth as its source. I think this could be improved by converting it to a footnote describing HoMe or by citing a more specific source. -- Mrwojo 03:18, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
The designation of The Hobbit as a children's book keeps getting edited-out of the intro paragraph and changed to "Fantasy Novel" or something-or-other. Whilst the Hobbit may be enjoyed by many adults it is most certainly a children's story, and is listed as such on Children's Literature Canon, the US publishers website Houghton Mifflin, and the " Mythopoeic Fantasy Award for Children’s Literature honors books for younger readers (from “Young Adults” to picture books for beginning readers), in the tradition of The Hobbit...", W. H Auden calls it a children's story in his review of FoTR in the New York Times | link - even the original decision to publish the book was largely influenced on the favorable review of a child. -- Davémon 17:39, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
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Nomination this article should be nominated for an award. -- Cman7792 14:05, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
The Hobbit (2009 film) is so messy, and I feel what little that has happened of the production so far should be accumulated here. Alientraveller 09:11, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
This merge is innapropriate. The Hobbit book and The Hobbit film are 2 completely things. The Hobbit book article should be about the book work; including book plot, author, work it has infuenced, games made from it, and other info. The Hobbit film has alot of info about the hobbit movies, there will be 2 movies, and stuff people actually care about. You can't just take an article, crumble it up into a paragraph, and scram it into another article. That only ruins the quality of what you are reading. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cman7792 ( talk • contribs)
First two paragraphs are remarkably similar to that found here http://www.tolkienlibrary.com/booksbytolkien/hobbit/description.htm ( copyvio)
See http://www.tolkienlibrary.com/disclaimer.htm
Though I don't know if permission has been sought etc.. 87.102.81.184 17:07, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
3rd and 4th paragraphs are also too similar for comfort. (possible copyvio) 87.102.81.184 17:09, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
Also
The_Hobbit#Writing_the_Book compare http://www.tolkienlibrary.com/press/69thanniversary.htm
I can't say that this page is the one at fault - but it needs looking into. 87.102.81.184 17:16, 4 September 2007 (UTC) This revision http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=The_Hobbit&oldid=155663023
Actually, I've been ferreting through the page history, and I think that the text starting with the Auden letter in 1955 is definitely not a problem, it goes back a lot further than the August 2006 date of that website article. Given that, I'm going to give the benefit of the doubt to the other bit of text, at least until Hyarion hears back from the author of that site. Thanks for reminding me about the listing at Copyright Problems. I'll remove it from there, but we must all keep an eye on this until it is resolved one way or the other. Carcharoth 20:11, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
I'll leave this template here for now in case the other article turns out to not be the source in which case we'll need a source.{{Unreferencedsection|date=Sept 2007}} 87.102.20.77 21:04, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
Decided to add the unreference bit - temporarily until the provenance is sorted out, it's better than the HUGE copyright notice, and it is applicable here. 87.102.20.77 21:52, 4 September 2007 (UTC)
I've added a link to "tolkien library" in that section and removed the template. Thanks to those who sorted it out and thanks to the person who wrote the original - which I have to say I really like the quality of his writing and the style he writes in - good work and very professional. 87.102.89.127 14:24, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
Almost every animail in The Hobbit can talk. Though this does not seem to be th ecase in The Lord Of The Rings. Though I have not read The Lord Of The Rings, only seen the films. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jackbergin ( talk • contribs) 00:22, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
Everyone, the plot in the hobbit article is way too long. that is probably why the article is rated on the b class instead of an a. lets shorten up the plot and make it not take up more than half the page. thank you. -- Cman7792 20:29, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
i fixed up the plot. in fact i fixed up the article and it is much better now. it will definitely be on the a scale now.-- Cman7792 23:42, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
I've added a tag to one section - as it is a direct copy , see Talk:The Hobbit#The Hobbit#editions copyvio - I'm not sure if it really needs rewriting - as the person whose work was copied seemed ok with it..
I'll leave the tag for someone else to take the correct action. 87.102.17.252 16:09, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
I've made a small trunaction of the plot summary - removing non-essentials - though not down to a four paragraph guidline - I think it's a little better, though shortening is difficult in what is a event rich story.. 87.102.21.91 13:30, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
The plot synopsis needs ruthless vigilance to keep it terse and coherent. Details like Elrond being an Elf-friend or Esgaroth being another name for Lake-town are useless in conveying the highlights of the story. Nothing that shows up in the description of characters in the Characters section should be repeated in the synopsis. If an incident does not powerfully contribute to plot development, it should not be mentioned in the synopsis.
How did Bilbo find himself on the quest? Because Gandalf wanted him to go and pressured him into it. Why did Gandalf want him to go? Because the dwarves had no plan and no real hope of succeeding. Gandalf understood he needed to inject a little benign chaos into the quest, and he seems to have had a premonition that Bilbo should be the source. He also knew the dwarves would resist. He overcame their resistance by revealing the secret door, which could be of use to a "burglar"... and Bilbo would be the burglar.
Hence it's important to mention: the council with the dwarves; the revelation of the map; the notion of a "burglar"; and the fact that Gandalf used good-natured deception to arrange both the council and the working relationship.
The fact that Gandalf needed to save the party early on is important because it shows they were incapable of even surviving the quest on their own. When Gandalf is gone they still need help, and Bilbo is the one who will step in.
Hence it's important to mention: the trolls and the goblins in the mountains, disasters from which Gandalf saves them; the ring and its acquisition, which are crucial to Bilbo saving first himself and then the others; the fact that Bilbo saved himself from the goblins; how Bilbo's account of his escape was received by the party; and how Bilbo goes on to save the dwarves.
Bilbo evolves into a character of competence, and the plot reaches its climax. What are the major elements of the climax? There is a dragon that needs to be disposed of. How did they get rid of the dragon? There is a treasure everyone wants. What happened to the treasure? And, finally, what happened to Bilbo?
Hence it's important to mention: Lake-town, which is instrumental in killing Smaug; how Smaug was killed; the fact that the treasure is claimed by elves, dwarves, and men, setting up conflict; Bilbo's ploy to avert war; the war itself and how it was won; how Bilbo's relationship with the dwarves resolves; and how Bilbo ends up.
Particular incidents which do not further the important elements of the plot: Elrond and the stay at Rivendell (merely a pleasant diversion); the goblin and Warg attack after the escape from the Misty Mountains (since the group was passively rescued); the stay at Beorn's domicile (merely a fantastic diversion); and details about any of the characters other than Bilbo.
Strebe 06:17, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
The literary themes and stylistic tone of the novel should be held separately from the story of it's conception and publication.. They simply aren't the same thing, and readers unfamiliar or newly familiar with the book will be looking for this kind of information with relative ease, rather than expecting it to be buried around other in other sections. Unless somebody has a compelling reason why this shouldn't be the case, and has to deviate from WP:NOVEL? -- Davémon 08:33, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
Can some one look at the section I've renamed 'introduction' the previous version had an awful link to a page that had factual errors and other problems.. We already have a plot summary - so what is needed is an introduction to the book. 87.102.10.190 16:36, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
Can someone do a complete rewrite of that section - it looks like the second half is a copvio from the referenced book. Preferably introducing the key facts before starting the analysis. 87.102.10.190 16:40, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
I've removed what was left to here
"Introduction The Hobbit, or There and Back Again is a children's book set in a western european fantasy setting known as Middle-earth and follows the quest of home-loving Bilbo Baggins on his adventure into more dangerous parts of the world in order to reach and win his share of Smaug the Dragon's hoard. Through accepting the nature of his " Tookish" half (a disrespectable, romantic, fey and adventurous side of his family tree) and utilising both his wits and common sense during the quest, Bilbo develops a level of maturity, competence and wisdom. [1] The events of The Hobbit take place during the " Third Age" of Middle-earth, [2]."
We already have an introductory paragraph, and a plot summary - perhaps any useful bits could be moved to different sections. 87.102.10.190 16:42, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
I'd also like to suggest movinf the 'concept and creation' section to be the first section? 87.102.10.190 16:44, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
Some statements have been marked with {{fact}}:
Tolkien made other small changes in order to conform the narrative to events in The Lord of the Rings and in the ideas he was continually developing for the Quenta Silmarillion.
Tolkien introduced or mentioned characters and places that figured prominently in his legendarium, specifically Elrond and Gondolin, along with elements from Germanic legend.
{{ME-fact}} is better... also, this is probably common knowledge to many fans, but what book (or letter) states these? Carpenter's biography? A volume in the History of Middle-earth series? Uthanc 07:40, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
I've revised this section in light of Rateliff's work, eliminating the misstatement that Elaine Griffiths worked at A&U (she never did), and removing the Carpenter-derived misprision that the manuscript was unfinished. Solicitr ( talk) 16:02, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
On previous readings of revised text of The Hobbit, I had been curious about the original version of the chapter Riddles in the Dark — the preface states that the text was changed, claiming that the revision is the corrected version based on Gandalf later insisting that Bilbo's story/diary were not completely truthful. Gandalf manages to get the facts out of Bilbo. The preface goes on to suggest that Bilbo's desire to lie was itself an indication of the ring's evil nature.
Anyway, I do not know how or if this synopsis should be incorporated into the article. The "original" is based on the 1938 Houghton Mifflin Co. (Boston & New York) edition, pp. 80-96. I just read the chapter from a reference copy at my library. The "revised" is a Ballantine printing from the early 1970s.
I'll let others decide what to do with this synopsis. Perhaps it qualifies as original research.
Original | Revised |
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Bilbo (B) finds ring while searching for a way out. | Bilbo (B) finds ring while searching for a way out. |
B agrees to be eaten by Gollum (G) if G wins the riddle game. | B agrees to be eaten by Gollum (G) if G wins the riddle game. |
G agrees to give B a present if B wins the game. | G agrees to show B the way out of the mountain cave if B wins. |
When B wins, G goes to find the ring to give to B; because G treats the riddle game as sacrosanct. | When B wins, G goes to find the ring claiming he needs it to lead B out. G really intends to attack B while invisible. |
G cannot find ring, mutters to himself about its powers, apologizes to B for failing to live up to the game. | G cannot find the ring, realizes that B may have it, becomes furious. |
B does not admit to finding the ring. Suggests that G can redeem himself by showing B way out. | G runs up the tunnel to find B. |
While going behind G, B slips the ring on to test it. G realizes B is gone. B takes it off when G is not looking. G assumes he overlooked B. | While G is running up the tunnel, B slips the ring onto his finger. G runs past him unawares. B realizes the ring's power. |
G shows B a narrow opening to a side tunnel. G refuses to continue for fear of goblins. They depart politely. G never realizes that B has the ring. | G stops at the opening to a side tunnel and weeps. He smells B, and realizes he has the ring. B jumps over G and runs down tunnel. G tries to follow, but his fear of goblins prevents him. |
B happens upon the exit and goblins, they see him. By luck puts the ring on. Goblins look for him. | Still wearing the ring, B happens upon the goblin. The ring barely falls off momentarily. The goblins see B, but he soon disappears again. They look for him. |
B gets stuck in the door, but manages to escape. | B gets stuck in the door, but manages to escape. |
— Eoghanacht talk 17:59, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
since the hobbit movie is officially confirmed, a separate page for the hobbit must be made. -- Cman7792 ( talk) 21:49, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
Has their ever been any significant criticism over the fact that the main character is hired as a thief (even if he is stealing back what the dwarfs own)? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.10.127.241 ( talk) 01:56, 6 January 2008 (UTC)
didnt they mention it in a song or something? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.46.49.98 ( talk) 20:24, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
At the moment, this article is supported reasonably well with citations to sources that appear to be appropriate and reliable. However, a number of important statements remain unsourced, which will be a problem if this article is nominated as a featured article candidate (as I hope it eventually will be). I have marked some of these with the "citations" needed" template in hopes that those with the necessary knowledge can "fill-in" the needed references. Simmaren ( talk) 16:46, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
Following the original publication of The Hobbit in 1937, new editions in English were published in 1951, 1966, 1978 and 1995 and the novel has been reprinted frequently. [FN = Anderson, Douglas A., ed.The Annotated Hobbit. Revised Edition. Houghton Mifflin Company. Boston, 2002. ISBN 0-618-13470-0. pp. ___ ] In addition, The Hobbit has been translated into over forty languages. Some languages have seen multiple translations.[ FN = Anderson, The Annotated Hobbit p. 23]
The lead contains the following sentence at the end: "The novel influenced the development of the modern genre of Fantasy literature, has been republished and adapted many times since its first edition." While undoubtedly true, the first part of this statement is not supported by the body of the article, which does not have an "Influence" or "Significance" section. Such a section (appropriately sourced) is needed. In default of such a section, this part of the statement should be supported by a citation. Simmaren ( talk) 17:03, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
"The familiar form of the riddle-game allows Gollum and Bilbo to discourse, rather than the content of the riddles themselves. This idea of a superficial contrast in characters' linguistic styles leading to an understanding of the deeper unity is a constant recurring theme throughout The Hobbit."
On the page, there's a huge gap between the intro and the table of contents. I would fix this, but I'm not sure how. Could someone please fix it? Flamingtorch372 ( talk) 00:44, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Strebe, I take it from your user page that you are the original author of much of this article. Whether my recent edits were an improvement or not I will leave for others to judge. Obviously, I think they were or I wouldn't have taken the time and trouble to make them. Is it possible that you are feeling a sense of ownership of the article? It would appear so, for you to reverse all of my edits summarily without any discussion, as if they were vandalism. I will not work on this page again -- I don't see that there is any point. Simmaren ( talk) 03:15, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Strebe ( talk) 08:05, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
There are only about four characters listed in the actual article. In the book there are several more. I think the list of characters should either be drastically extended or made into a new article to really do The Hobbit justice. - Kanogul ( talk) 16:47, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
Where it talks about The Hobbit movie, it says that an young director named John Bauwens will be directing it. However, the source link doesn't work, and I've been reading at alot of places that Guillermo del Toro (Read Here) will be directing it. Whats the deal? Flamingtorch372 ( talk) 23:22, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
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