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Looks good at a first glance. I should finish this by tomorrow. JAGUAR 19:01, 19 February 2017 (UTC)reply
It might be worth mentioning in the lead that the trilogy is recorded in Japanese only, or at least released only in Japan
Done
It might also be worth mentioning that Gamma got an English translation in the lead
Done
Link
light novel both in the lead and reception section. I didn't know what they were until now
Light novel is already linked in the production/release section
"He discovers that he in this world line is a Rounder" - He discovers that in this world line, he is a Rounder partnered with...
Done
"but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that undoes the world line shift" - how about but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that prevents the world line from shifting?
Well, Okabe shifts to gamma in the beginning of the drama. In the end, Moeka undoes that shift, returning the world to the previous attractor field. I don't think "prevents" is quite right, as the original shift has already happened. I changed it to but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that causes a world line shift, away from the gamma attractor field. - is this okay?
Ah, I see! Like I said, I don't know anything about the story so your suggestion sounds much better. Thanks. JAGUAR 21:17, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
"and distributed by Media Factory as three CD albums in 2010" - and distributed by Media Factory as three separate CD albums in 2010
Done
No dead links. I've checked what I could translate as I'm hopeless with Japanese
This is impressive work. It is compact, well written, and comprehensive for the subject. I couldn't find many issues with it at all, so once all of the above are clarified then this should be good to go. JAGUAR 20:54, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
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Jaguar: Thanks! I think I have fixed everything, with the possible exception of the "Moeka manages to..." sentence, which might require further feedback.--
IDVtalk 21:15, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
Thanks for addressing them all! This article meets the GA criteria, so I'll promote this without further ado. Well done—this one was an interesting read. JAGUAR 21:17, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
Thank you. I hope to have the Wipeout review done tonight or tomorrow, by the way.--
IDVtalk 21:20, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
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project page, where you can join the project and/or contribute to the
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Video games, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
video games on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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Looks good at a first glance. I should finish this by tomorrow. JAGUAR 19:01, 19 February 2017 (UTC)reply
It might be worth mentioning in the lead that the trilogy is recorded in Japanese only, or at least released only in Japan
Done
It might also be worth mentioning that Gamma got an English translation in the lead
Done
Link
light novel both in the lead and reception section. I didn't know what they were until now
Light novel is already linked in the production/release section
"He discovers that he in this world line is a Rounder" - He discovers that in this world line, he is a Rounder partnered with...
Done
"but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that undoes the world line shift" - how about but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that prevents the world line from shifting?
Well, Okabe shifts to gamma in the beginning of the drama. In the end, Moeka undoes that shift, returning the world to the previous attractor field. I don't think "prevents" is quite right, as the original shift has already happened. I changed it to but Moeka manages to send a D-mail that causes a world line shift, away from the gamma attractor field. - is this okay?
Ah, I see! Like I said, I don't know anything about the story so your suggestion sounds much better. Thanks. JAGUAR 21:17, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
"and distributed by Media Factory as three CD albums in 2010" - and distributed by Media Factory as three separate CD albums in 2010
Done
No dead links. I've checked what I could translate as I'm hopeless with Japanese
This is impressive work. It is compact, well written, and comprehensive for the subject. I couldn't find many issues with it at all, so once all of the above are clarified then this should be good to go. JAGUAR 20:54, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
@
Jaguar: Thanks! I think I have fixed everything, with the possible exception of the "Moeka manages to..." sentence, which might require further feedback.--
IDVtalk 21:15, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
Thanks for addressing them all! This article meets the GA criteria, so I'll promote this without further ado. Well done—this one was an interesting read. JAGUAR 21:17, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply
Thank you. I hope to have the Wipeout review done tonight or tomorrow, by the way.--
IDVtalk 21:20, 20 February 2017 (UTC)reply