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The libelous bit about Julian Frank is unsupported by any facts and out to be sourced or deleted. Remember the highly-publicized bit about the guy who helped shoot JFK? Sure, Frank may be dead, but it would be nice to source this. I'll come back in a few days and remove that part.
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Reviewer: MusikAnimal ( talk · contribs) 18:58, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this good article nomination. The article is a bit sizable, so it may take me a little while. I'll keep you posted! — MusikAnimal talk 18:58, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
Thank for your patience! I have completed the review, as follows:
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south from of New York, to Wilmington, NC …I'm not sure about the grammar and punctuation here. I think you mean something like "Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south of New York to Wilmington, NC, where it could veer east over the Atlantic Ocean".
The crew checked in with Wilmington Airport at 2:07 a.m,Missing the period after the "m" in a.m. I would also put "a.m." next to the 2:31. Finally, per MOS:TIME we should either use a hard space with "
2:07 a.m.
" or use {{nowrap|2:07 a.m.}}
so that the time and the a.m. don't end up on different lines, depending on screen size. Sorry for being picky on these little things!He called Wilmington airport to report…here we don't capitalize the "a" in airport when we do in the last paragraph of the Flight history section. I think in this context it is still a proper noun and should be capitalized.
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)That concludes my review. Overall this article is pretty well-written, I think, and we should have no problem addressing the above concerns. I'll place the article on hold for now. — MusikAnimal talk 04:02, 21 November 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for taking the time to review the article. I know it's a bit longer than the usual GA candidate.
Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south from New York to Wilmington, NC, where it would veer east over the Atlantic Ocean.Does that make more sense?
The other suggested changes were made as well. Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû ( blah?) 22:38, 22 November 2014 (UTC)
Great work! With all GA criteria met, I am passing this nomination. Congratulations! — MusikAnimal talk 20:43, 23 November 2014 (UTC)
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The libelous bit about Julian Frank is unsupported by any facts and out to be sourced or deleted. Remember the highly-publicized bit about the guy who helped shoot JFK? Sure, Frank may be dead, but it would be nice to source this. I'll come back in a few days and remove that part.
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Reviewer: MusikAnimal ( talk · contribs) 18:58, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this good article nomination. The article is a bit sizable, so it may take me a little while. I'll keep you posted! — MusikAnimal talk 18:58, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
Thank for your patience! I have completed the review, as follows:
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south from of New York, to Wilmington, NC …I'm not sure about the grammar and punctuation here. I think you mean something like "Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south of New York to Wilmington, NC, where it could veer east over the Atlantic Ocean".
The crew checked in with Wilmington Airport at 2:07 a.m,Missing the period after the "m" in a.m. I would also put "a.m." next to the 2:31. Finally, per MOS:TIME we should either use a hard space with "
2:07 a.m.
" or use {{nowrap|2:07 a.m.}}
so that the time and the a.m. don't end up on different lines, depending on screen size. Sorry for being picky on these little things!He called Wilmington airport to report…here we don't capitalize the "a" in airport when we do in the last paragraph of the Flight history section. I think in this context it is still a proper noun and should be capitalized.
{{nowrap}}
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)That concludes my review. Overall this article is pretty well-written, I think, and we should have no problem addressing the above concerns. I'll place the article on hold for now. — MusikAnimal talk 04:02, 21 November 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for taking the time to review the article. I know it's a bit longer than the usual GA candidate.
Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south from New York to Wilmington, NC, where it would veer east over the Atlantic Ocean.Does that make more sense?
The other suggested changes were made as well. Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû ( blah?) 22:38, 22 November 2014 (UTC)
Great work! With all GA criteria met, I am passing this nomination. Congratulations! — MusikAnimal talk 20:43, 23 November 2014 (UTC)