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Wiki Education assignment: Research Process and Methodology - RPM SP 2022 - MASY1-GC 1260 200 Thu

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 27 February 2022 and 5 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aashima99 ( article contribs).

"Irrational and unjustified"

This claim is based on the second source, that describes Islamophobia as "irrational, unjustified, or excessive". Are we just going to cherrypick the adjectives that we like? We should either mention all three adjectives or not mention them at all. Bakbik1234 ( talk) 14:59, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

The lead summarizes the article. The sections discussing prejudice and racism indicate irrational and unjustified. I don't see anything that talks to excessive. Excessive suggests there is a reason for prejudice. Personally I prefer the three dictionary definitions given as cites in the lead. But then, we don't usually have cites in the lead and just summarize the body. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 18:37, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Article is currently Western-centric and heavily prejudiced against Muslims

Currently, this article is Western-centric and gives undue weight to the sentiments of right-wing political commentators in Western Europe and America.

The bigoted opinions of some irrelevant anti-Muslim political commentators in Western Europe and USA are given undue weight in the current version of this page. Rather than explaining how Muslims suffer heavily from anti-Muslim bigotry and American imperialist policies across the world, the current version of this overtly biased article primarily focuses on how some far-right bigots in USA and Western Europe are offended by the term "Islamophobia".

I have added some templates to this page. The extreme anti-Muslim prejudice displayed in the current version of this biased article is an example of the structural Anglo-American centric systemic bias in wikipedia. Shadowwarrior8 ( talk) 14:37, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply

So in order to combat "structural Anglo-American centric systemic bias" you want us to rewrite the page to focus on the United States? Horse Eye's Back ( talk) 14:41, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Strawman question. Dont deflect.
"English Wikipedia seems to have an Anglo-American focus. Is this contrary to NPOV?

Yes, it is, especially when dealing with articles that require an international perspective.
"
WP:NPOVFAQ Shadowwarrior8 ( talk) 14:55, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I don't disagree on the structural issues (Anglo-American bias is practically our original sin), I question whether your remedies to those issues are appropriate. I would suggest instead of making it more about the US we maybe expand the focus to Central, South, and Southeast Asia. The fact that we don't have a section for India isn't great. Horse Eye's Back ( talk) 15:00, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Horse Eye's BackI don't think an NPOV template is warranted given only one person is arguing for it. Unless you think it is. @ Shadowwarrior8 There is a more appropriate one, ": may not represent a worldwide view of the subject" which is what you seem to want. Doug Weller talk 16:02, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I would support the replacement of NPOV with Globalize, this article has gotten over-weighted with North American and European content but I don't think that there are significant NPOV issues beyond that. So in relation to the original complaints... Yes to "Article is currently Western-centric" and no to "heavily prejudiced against Muslims" Horse Eye's Back ( talk) 16:07, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Both templates can be inserted simultaneously. Shadowwarrior8 ( talk) 16:58, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I see no need for the article wide NPOV tag. The reason I removed the word "excessive" in the lead is that I thought it was not neutral. I'm not seeing a general problem. The globalize tag would be fine. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 18:46, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I also don't think the criticism tag is needed. This isn't an article about a person or organization who may face criticism. In this case I think it better to have a section on the academic debate and commentary as sprinkling it throughout the body would likely confuse. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 18:59, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The scope of the topic is undoubtedly broader than the information given in the current version of the article.
However, it is clear that the hysterical propaganda spread by Anglo-American military and political elites is one of the major instigators of Islamophobia across the world since the 1990s. There is no mention of this in the article. The current version of the article gives undue weight to American right-wing bigots who promulgate American war-propaganda and attempt to deny the existence of Islamophobia. Shadowwarrior8 ( talk) 17:16, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
But aren't Anglo-American military and political elites spreading hysterical propaganda typically American right-wing bigots? In which case this is due weight. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 18:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
"hysterical propaganda spread by Anglo-American military and political elites" The press has done an excellent job at spreading panic over the existential threat posed by Muslims, and the film and television industry has been dehumanising "foreigners" through its own propaganda. What makes you think that the military is calling the shots? Dimadick ( talk) 20:34, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • I do think that we currently devote perhaps a bit too much space to people saying "is this really a thing tho" or the like. It's useful to compare this article to Antisemitism (an article on a very similar term, which has similarly attracted controversy from people who feel that it has recently been, in some contexts, misused, but which has only brief mentions of that dispute and covers it in much more sedate manner.) In particular I would suggest trimming or rewording the second paragraph of the lead, especially the sentence starting with For some critics...; the Debate on the term and its limitations section (especially some of the excessive quotes); the Proposed alternatives section; the Identity politics section, and the Commentary section, all of which put undue weight on the opinion of just a few scholars or commentators. We should step back and rely more on secondary sources, rather than a smattering of random opinions with no clear rationale for why they were selected. -- Aquillion ( talk) 20:51, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Does anyone disagree that at least some of this article is covered by Discretionary sanctions?

Looking at it seems pretty clear that Indian related material is part of the article. Doug Weller talk 08:08, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Doug Weller: Which parts of this article are covered by discretionary sanctions? This talk page displays a warning about the Arab-Israeli conflict, but this conflict isn't mentioned in the article. Jarble ( talk) 15:04, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Maajid Nawaz who has the same template. Quilliam (think tank) which clearly needs an alert. "Philosopher Michael Walzer says that fear of religious militancy, such as "of Hindutva zealots in India, of messianic Zionists in Israel," the source "The Islamophobia Industry and the Demonization of Palestine: Implications for American Studies". The mention of Counter-jihadist outfits. I'm sure you could find more. Doug Weller talk 15:52, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Wouldn't that be true of many articles? In recent years, Russia has been accused of interfering in the elections of many countries. Does that mean that all those articles now come under discretionary sanctions for Eastern European politics? TFD ( talk) 16:51, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply
If the article involves “Eastern Europe and the Balkans” yes. But obviously not countries outside that area, I believe you misunderstand that sanction area. Doug Weller talk 18:55, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Wiki Education assignment: Race, Law, and Politics

This article is currently the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 January 2024 and 10 May 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): 21hroush ( article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Lindabyamungl ( talk) 03:23, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Wiki Education assignment: Research Process and Methodology - RPM SP 2022 - MASY1-GC 1260 200 Thu

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 27 February 2022 and 5 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aashima99 ( article contribs).

"Irrational and unjustified"

This claim is based on the second source, that describes Islamophobia as "irrational, unjustified, or excessive". Are we just going to cherrypick the adjectives that we like? We should either mention all three adjectives or not mention them at all. Bakbik1234 ( talk) 14:59, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

The lead summarizes the article. The sections discussing prejudice and racism indicate irrational and unjustified. I don't see anything that talks to excessive. Excessive suggests there is a reason for prejudice. Personally I prefer the three dictionary definitions given as cites in the lead. But then, we don't usually have cites in the lead and just summarize the body. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 18:37, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Article is currently Western-centric and heavily prejudiced against Muslims

Currently, this article is Western-centric and gives undue weight to the sentiments of right-wing political commentators in Western Europe and America.

The bigoted opinions of some irrelevant anti-Muslim political commentators in Western Europe and USA are given undue weight in the current version of this page. Rather than explaining how Muslims suffer heavily from anti-Muslim bigotry and American imperialist policies across the world, the current version of this overtly biased article primarily focuses on how some far-right bigots in USA and Western Europe are offended by the term "Islamophobia".

I have added some templates to this page. The extreme anti-Muslim prejudice displayed in the current version of this biased article is an example of the structural Anglo-American centric systemic bias in wikipedia. Shadowwarrior8 ( talk) 14:37, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply

So in order to combat "structural Anglo-American centric systemic bias" you want us to rewrite the page to focus on the United States? Horse Eye's Back ( talk) 14:41, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Strawman question. Dont deflect.
"English Wikipedia seems to have an Anglo-American focus. Is this contrary to NPOV?

Yes, it is, especially when dealing with articles that require an international perspective.
"
WP:NPOVFAQ Shadowwarrior8 ( talk) 14:55, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I don't disagree on the structural issues (Anglo-American bias is practically our original sin), I question whether your remedies to those issues are appropriate. I would suggest instead of making it more about the US we maybe expand the focus to Central, South, and Southeast Asia. The fact that we don't have a section for India isn't great. Horse Eye's Back ( talk) 15:00, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Horse Eye's BackI don't think an NPOV template is warranted given only one person is arguing for it. Unless you think it is. @ Shadowwarrior8 There is a more appropriate one, ": may not represent a worldwide view of the subject" which is what you seem to want. Doug Weller talk 16:02, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I would support the replacement of NPOV with Globalize, this article has gotten over-weighted with North American and European content but I don't think that there are significant NPOV issues beyond that. So in relation to the original complaints... Yes to "Article is currently Western-centric" and no to "heavily prejudiced against Muslims" Horse Eye's Back ( talk) 16:07, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Both templates can be inserted simultaneously. Shadowwarrior8 ( talk) 16:58, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I see no need for the article wide NPOV tag. The reason I removed the word "excessive" in the lead is that I thought it was not neutral. I'm not seeing a general problem. The globalize tag would be fine. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 18:46, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I also don't think the criticism tag is needed. This isn't an article about a person or organization who may face criticism. In this case I think it better to have a section on the academic debate and commentary as sprinkling it throughout the body would likely confuse. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 18:59, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The scope of the topic is undoubtedly broader than the information given in the current version of the article.
However, it is clear that the hysterical propaganda spread by Anglo-American military and political elites is one of the major instigators of Islamophobia across the world since the 1990s. There is no mention of this in the article. The current version of the article gives undue weight to American right-wing bigots who promulgate American war-propaganda and attempt to deny the existence of Islamophobia. Shadowwarrior8 ( talk) 17:16, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
But aren't Anglo-American military and political elites spreading hysterical propaganda typically American right-wing bigots? In which case this is due weight. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 18:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
"hysterical propaganda spread by Anglo-American military and political elites" The press has done an excellent job at spreading panic over the existential threat posed by Muslims, and the film and television industry has been dehumanising "foreigners" through its own propaganda. What makes you think that the military is calling the shots? Dimadick ( talk) 20:34, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • I do think that we currently devote perhaps a bit too much space to people saying "is this really a thing tho" or the like. It's useful to compare this article to Antisemitism (an article on a very similar term, which has similarly attracted controversy from people who feel that it has recently been, in some contexts, misused, but which has only brief mentions of that dispute and covers it in much more sedate manner.) In particular I would suggest trimming or rewording the second paragraph of the lead, especially the sentence starting with For some critics...; the Debate on the term and its limitations section (especially some of the excessive quotes); the Proposed alternatives section; the Identity politics section, and the Commentary section, all of which put undue weight on the opinion of just a few scholars or commentators. We should step back and rely more on secondary sources, rather than a smattering of random opinions with no clear rationale for why they were selected. -- Aquillion ( talk) 20:51, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Does anyone disagree that at least some of this article is covered by Discretionary sanctions?

Looking at it seems pretty clear that Indian related material is part of the article. Doug Weller talk 08:08, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Doug Weller: Which parts of this article are covered by discretionary sanctions? This talk page displays a warning about the Arab-Israeli conflict, but this conflict isn't mentioned in the article. Jarble ( talk) 15:04, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Maajid Nawaz who has the same template. Quilliam (think tank) which clearly needs an alert. "Philosopher Michael Walzer says that fear of religious militancy, such as "of Hindutva zealots in India, of messianic Zionists in Israel," the source "The Islamophobia Industry and the Demonization of Palestine: Implications for American Studies". The mention of Counter-jihadist outfits. I'm sure you could find more. Doug Weller talk 15:52, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Wouldn't that be true of many articles? In recent years, Russia has been accused of interfering in the elections of many countries. Does that mean that all those articles now come under discretionary sanctions for Eastern European politics? TFD ( talk) 16:51, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply
If the article involves “Eastern Europe and the Balkans” yes. But obviously not countries outside that area, I believe you misunderstand that sanction area. Doug Weller talk 18:55, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Wiki Education assignment: Race, Law, and Politics

This article is currently the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 January 2024 and 10 May 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): 21hroush ( article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Lindabyamungl ( talk) 03:23, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply


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