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When Envy is used as the catalist he resmebles the shape of an ouroboros (a serpent/dragon swallowing it's own tail). Should that be mentioned? Dmaster; ( talk) 07:12, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
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Originally released in theaters in Japan
DVD now available in the US from Funimation Entertainment
Limited edition DVD available November 2006 in the US from Funimation Entertainment.
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Prose concerns in Lede:
The second paragraph makes no mention of NA release date, much less before the CD release. "It has been edited in DVD twice in Japan, with the second being a limited edition." - Bad prose here.
Plot:
If you want me to continue through this I will - but a lot of prose issues could be tidied up. While not all that confusing, the concept of "fiction" here is probably needs to be better enforced. The film makes a lot of real-world references, but it is not the real world, it is not historically inspired, based on, or even remotely accurate.
The music section doesn't actually list the soundtrack, which would be appropriate here.
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I think this is a pretty good overview of my concerns. ChrisGualtieri ( talk) 00:05, 2 August 2013 (UTC)
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When Envy is used as the catalist he resmebles the shape of an ouroboros (a serpent/dragon swallowing it's own tail). Should that be mentioned? Dmaster; ( talk) 07:12, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
An editor seems to think that a reference that is not an inline reference is "not being used". Please note that the inline references are no more being used than any other reference that appears in an article and if "not being used" becomes a justification for the removal of a reference then any reference can be removed including inline references. – allen四 names 01:47, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
Originally released in theaters in Japan
DVD now available in the US from Funimation Entertainment
Limited edition DVD available November 2006 in the US from Funimation Entertainment.
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri ( talk · contribs) 02:49, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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Overall: |
· · · |
Prose concerns in Lede:
The second paragraph makes no mention of NA release date, much less before the CD release. "It has been edited in DVD twice in Japan, with the second being a limited edition." - Bad prose here.
Plot:
If you want me to continue through this I will - but a lot of prose issues could be tidied up. While not all that confusing, the concept of "fiction" here is probably needs to be better enforced. The film makes a lot of real-world references, but it is not the real world, it is not historically inspired, based on, or even remotely accurate.
The music section doesn't actually list the soundtrack, which would be appropriate here.
Links:
I think this is a pretty good overview of my concerns. ChrisGualtieri ( talk) 00:05, 2 August 2013 (UTC)
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