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Reviewer: Llewee ( talk · contribs) 17:46, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
This is a decent quality article. I will suggest a few pointers about how it could be improved. Pease use the Done template or strikethrough to indicate that an issue has been dealt with. Add any questions or comments after each point.--
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I'll have a look to see if their are anymore issues once these have been dealt with.
I think I've had a go at this but not too sure that I've corrected everything
I'd not heard of these agreements before but I'm not so sure that it would be relevant on here unless they were official coalitions. I can add these though depending on what you think.
Thanks Michaeldble ( talk) 20:32, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
Michaeldble Thank you for responding to my suggestions. You have dealt with some of the issues with the formatting of sources. However, page numbers should not be included in a title of a source. There are page and pages sections in the form for editing the reference. For instance formatting that looks like this:
{{Cite web |last=Sharp |first=Caroline |date=1 November 2002 |title=School Starting Age: European Policy and Recent Research |url=https://www.nfer.ac.uk/media/1318/44414.pdf#:~:text=The%20official%20school%20starting%20age%20in%20England%20and,of%20the%20year%20in%20which%20they%20become%20five. |page=3 }}
Results in:
Sharp, Caroline (1 November 2002). "School Starting Age: European Policy and Recent Research" (PDF). p. 3.
On the question of the agreements, the Bute House Agreement, which is the Scottish one, seems to be effectively a coalition in all but name with the minor party having ministers in the government so I think should be included. In the Welsh cases, agreements seem to be fairly common and probably come with the territory of minority governments, perhaps just add foot notes referencing them?-- Llewee ( talk) 16:24, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
I have put the article through the earwig Copyvio detector (see results here https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Electoral_history_of_the_Labour_Party_%28UK%29&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0). The only source their was any concern about was https://researchbriefings.files.parliament.uk/documents/CBP-7529/CBP-7529.pdf#page=11 . I think it mainly picked up formal titles and phrasing which is fairly generic. However, you might want to look at rewording text to reduce crossover.-- Llewee ( talk) 00:32, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Llewee ( talk · contribs) 17:46, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
This is a decent quality article. I will suggest a few pointers about how it could be improved. Pease use the Done template or strikethrough to indicate that an issue has been dealt with. Add any questions or comments after each point.--
Llewee (
talk) 17:46, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
I'll have a look to see if their are anymore issues once these have been dealt with.
I think I've had a go at this but not too sure that I've corrected everything
I'd not heard of these agreements before but I'm not so sure that it would be relevant on here unless they were official coalitions. I can add these though depending on what you think.
Thanks Michaeldble ( talk) 20:32, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
Michaeldble Thank you for responding to my suggestions. You have dealt with some of the issues with the formatting of sources. However, page numbers should not be included in a title of a source. There are page and pages sections in the form for editing the reference. For instance formatting that looks like this:
{{Cite web |last=Sharp |first=Caroline |date=1 November 2002 |title=School Starting Age: European Policy and Recent Research |url=https://www.nfer.ac.uk/media/1318/44414.pdf#:~:text=The%20official%20school%20starting%20age%20in%20England%20and,of%20the%20year%20in%20which%20they%20become%20five. |page=3 }}
Results in:
Sharp, Caroline (1 November 2002). "School Starting Age: European Policy and Recent Research" (PDF). p. 3.
On the question of the agreements, the Bute House Agreement, which is the Scottish one, seems to be effectively a coalition in all but name with the minor party having ministers in the government so I think should be included. In the Welsh cases, agreements seem to be fairly common and probably come with the territory of minority governments, perhaps just add foot notes referencing them?-- Llewee ( talk) 16:24, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
I have put the article through the earwig Copyvio detector (see results here https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Electoral_history_of_the_Labour_Party_%28UK%29&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0). The only source their was any concern about was https://researchbriefings.files.parliament.uk/documents/CBP-7529/CBP-7529.pdf#page=11 . I think it mainly picked up formal titles and phrasing which is fairly generic. However, you might want to look at rewording text to reduce crossover.-- Llewee ( talk) 00:32, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria