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As of writing, the lead has seven paragraphs, and I'm unsure if they benefit the article. The final sentence of MOS:LEAD's lead paragraph recommends four paragraphs. I'm leaning towards suggesting that the paragraphs on his presidency be seen if they can be consolidated into one or two, and maybe consider putting his civil and criminal lawsuits in the same paragraph as his impeachments. What I see as the main issue is that the paragraphs are almost niche focused, and overarching "themes" should be condensed as appropriate. Maybe even see if bits and pieces can be placed into the first sentence and turn it into a multi-sentence paragraph? Just an idea. InvadingInvader ( userpage, talk) 18:20, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
It says "He Three Supreme Court Justices." I don't imagine that is correct. Hairsonfire ( talk) 19:36, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
Hi, @ Bill Williams:. I saw that you reverted my edit. Dobbs v. Jackson has frequently been cited as the most enduring legacy of Trump's presidency.
Not mentioning it in the lead is a bit strange. KlayCax ( talk) 23:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
Should the lead of this article be changed to this rewritten version? This aligns with "current consensus" above.
DynaGuy00 ( talk) 01:30, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
Trump has been the subject of significant controversy and critique before, during, and after his presidency. Otherwise, it appears everything else was merely rearranged. However, I could have missed something; so I'll ask DynaGuy00: (1) What content, if any, is actually removed rather than just rearranged? and (2) What content is new? Iamreallygoodatcheckers talk 03:24, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
Is this change agreeable? Changing the statement that Trump became the only president to be twice impeached to the (sourced/verifiable) statement that he became the only officeholder to be twice impeached by the U.S. House.
There appears to be disagreement of the gist of consensus that the last discussion this talk page had on it. I believe that the last discussion largely accepted broadening the claim when that was substantively discussed, but objected to using the word "individuals" (hence why this latest edit used the term "officeholders"
By limiting the statement to "president", we leave it unclear whether other officeholders have been twice impeached federally in the U.S. In fact, by the deliberate language that limits the claim solely to "president" it might reasonably be falsely inferred by readers that this wording choice was due to the existence of other officeholder(s) that have been the subject of multiple impeachments. However, by wording it as "officeholder", there is no mistaking this, and its is understood that this means he was the first president as presidents are entirely encompassed by the word "officeholder" SecretName101 ( talk) 18:07, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
other officeholder(s) ... have been the subject of multiple impeachmentsinstead of being removed from office or care about them? The NBC source is about the House impeachment managers bringing it up "as an example of the Senate holding an impeachment trial for an official who's no longer in office." (It resulted in the Senate determining in 1799 that senators are not "civil officers" and therefore not subject to impeachment). How is this important for Trump's two impeachments? Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 11:24, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
I mean, the whole lead of this article just talks about how bad of a president he was. Memer15151 ( talk) 22:05, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
This is the standard. Would someone please fix this? Ramanujaner ( talk) 18:15, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
While this statement in the lead is technically accurate, I think that it could be confusing to others.
"making him the first former U.S. president to face criminal charges"
President Grant was arrested while in office. Could it be edited to say something like "the first US president to be arrested since Ulysses S. Grant in 1872. Making note to be the only president arrested after leaving office..." Not stuck on the wording but I think the information is important. Michael-Moates ( talk) 14:06, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
There is outdated information in the "Indictment" section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:4041:5A8F:2E00:AC72:D920:2091:FF73 ( talk) 20:32, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
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let's be better than stuff like this. anyone with even a passing familiarity with this talk page know such topics are time-sinks. ValarianB ( talk) 12:19, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
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There is a problem with the infobox, specifically on "Criminal charges". - Someone, please fix it. Felixsj ( talk) 14:35, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
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Szmenderowiecki (
talk) 14:45, 24 April 2023 (UTC)I have no problem with the consensus, but I want to add this correction as a second source. The consensus is based on this discussion. Two editors stated in that discussion that her mother was Austrian, based on information in Ivana Trump’s article at the time (I corrected it in this edit). That was disinformation the Trumps had fed to the press to hide the fact that Ivana had married Austrian skier Alfred Winkelmayr to obtain an Austrian passport and be allowed to legally leave communist Czechoslovakia. They officially admitted it in 1990 during the divorce proceedings. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:08, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
Moved to User talk:Szmenderowiecki Szmenderowiecki ( talk) 10:45, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
ping|Szmenderowiecki: You wrote that WP:ONUS dictates that it is up to those seeking to include content to rally consensus. As of the moment of writing, the sentence is included in the article. A discussion preceded this RfC.
Were you under the impression that the sentence was added recently since you mentioned the discussion that took place a month ago? The sentence was
added to the section almost three years ago.
WP:ONUS says that "[t]he responsibility for achieving consensus for inclusion is on those seeking to include disputed content." That's a bit vague but I read that to mean "those seeking to add disputed content." The proponents of the RfC were seeking to remove long-standing content. The RfC proposer's question "Should the sentence below be included in the article (as it is now)" may have led some readers to believe that it is recently added content. The proposer should have asked whether "the sentence below should be removed from the article." Also, this
cute move, u|Iamreallygoodatcheckers, really? I haven’t decided whether I want to do something about this or not, so for now I’m unarchiving the RfC to see what other editors think.
Space4Time3Continuum2x
(talk) 09:42, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
(This wasn't meant to be a private discussion, so copying my comment back to this page. Responses by Szmenderowiecki and Iamreallygoodatcheckers at User_talk:Szmenderowiecki#Mark_Milley_apology_close. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 14:47, 12 April 2023 (UTC))
...the burden of proof is on those who wish to retain, restore, or undelete the disputed material... If it is to be restored without significant change, consensus must be obtained first.WP:STATUSQUO is not a valid argument to keep because this is a BLP (it even mentions at STATUSQUO the BLP exemption). There should not be a push to include material that there is clearly no consensus for in this BLP. Iamreallygoodatcheckers talk 15:39, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
To ensure that material about living people is written neutrally to a high standard, and based on high-quality reliable sources, the burden of proof is on those who wish to retain, restore, or undelete the disputed material. When material about living persons has been deleted on good-faith BLP objections.WP:STATUSQUO: "unsourced and poorly sourced contentious material" in BLP's? Neither you nor any of the other supporters of your proposal questioned the neutrality and writing standard of the sentence or the reliability of its source. Your argument boiled down to "off-topic". Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 12:03, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
Reminder — As indicated in the message by Szmenderowiecki at the top of this section, there is a discussion at
User_talk:Szmenderowiecki#Mark_Milley_apology_close, where the closer has been responding to comments about the closing.
Bob K31416 (
talk) 01:14, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
Recommend taking the closure challenge to WP:AN, fwiw. GoodDay ( talk) 14:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
I haven’t decided whether I want to do something about this or not, so for now I’m unarchiving the RfC to see what other editors thinkwasn't a challenge. So now two weeks later we have a few evenly split opinions, three "bad close" and three "endorse close". Looks like a dead issue to me until the arrival of Milley's memoir. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:28, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
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In the lead section of the article there are at least 30 or 40 negative statements about Donald Trump, whereas in the lead section of the articles for Joe Biden or Barack Obama, there are no more than 2 negative statements about either president. This disparity in tone for encyclopedic articles about American presidents is highly problematic. 220.240.114.114 ( talk) 13:55, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
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Given Trump’s conviction yesterday, I think it would be appropriate to add him to Category:Rapists.
67.85.103.120 ( talk) 03:41, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
The current audio box on file is great (I was the one who sourced it afterall), however in hindsight the audio quality of Trumps voice is a bit lower quality compared to the other presidents. Given the purpose of the voice box is to make sure the person it represents voice is clear and properly articulated I think it might be best to replace it with another similar, short, non-partisan, and more clear voice box. As such, I have provided one below in both the .ogg format and with a link for listening on wikimedia in advance to publishment.
File:Donald Trump Ordering Missile Attacks in Retaliation for Syrian Chemical Strikes.ogg https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/4f/Donald_Trump_Ordering_Missile_Attacks_in_Retaliation_for_Syrian_Chemical_Strikes.ogg
I think if you compare the differences in audio quality between the two sources the one I am currently recommending does have a notable increase in audio quality overall largely due to the fact the current audio source was taken from an outside commencement address which unfortunately causes some tepid interference with optimal audio quality. The audio from this file in question is in reference to the Khan Shaykhun chemical attack and was recorded April 6, 2017 if that information is needed for proper audio replacement. Again, the audio I have presented here remains heavily neutral but more importantly provides a clearer quality of his voice for potential readers which I feel is more important overall and also is what the voice box was designed to do to begin with. LosPajaros ( talk) 01:29, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
representative of how he speaks with a teleprompter— no. Reading off the teleprompter: from Chili to the oranges of the investigation. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:28, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
is what the voice box was designed to do to begin with- is that explained anywhere (MOS, etc.)? Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 14:39, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
I proposed a Democratic backsliding section in January, which was not discussed in depth. I'm now presenting an improved version. This section is not about Trumpism, but about Trump's direct impact on America's democracy. It is sourced solely to scholarly sources, which is far better than most of our article. And it uses these sources to put forward an analytical appraisal, which our articles needs more of. I use two sources: a study by Yascha Mounk and Stefan Foa, published in the high-impact factor Policy Studies Journal. And a book written by two scholars, Steven Levitsky and Daniel Ziblatt, called How Democracies Die, which The Economist described as "the most important book of the Trump era", and which we don't currently use. The heading could be "Flouting of democratic norms", or "Abandonment of democratic norms".
Political scientists have analyzed Trump's presidency as both a cause and a consequence of America's increasing polarization. Levitszky and Ziblatt say that Trump benefited from a democracy weakened by "extreme partisan polarization", and was the first U.S. president in the last century to meet all four criteria of their "litmus test for autocrats": a weak commitment to democratic norms, delegitimization of political opponents, toleration and encouragement of political violence, and a willingness to curb the civil liberties of opponents and critics. [1] Foa and Mounk say Trump disregarded democratic norms through his tacit or active endorsement of vigilante groups, his lack of commitment to respecting electoral outcomes, and his lack of repudiation of political violence, which weakened the country's "institutional equilibrium", and may "prove to be his most damaging legacy". [2]
Please don't just treat this as an up-or-down vote, which would make it hard to reach a consensus.
DFlhb ( talk) 23:21, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
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normdoesn't appear in our article, despite plentiful sourcing. DFlhb ( talk) 00:08, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
"The expected prosecution of Trump shatters an unwritten American political norm and brings the United States more in line with dozens of other nations, including democracies such as South Korea, Brazil, France, Italy and Israel, that have criminally charged, convicted and in many cases jailed former leaders." [1]
unwritten norm. It's a cherry-picked quote from a long article citing legal scholars and historians on how and why this happened/had to happen (short version: because the U.S. is not a banana republic). Do you have any sources for the other "norms" you mention (not indicting a former president, not impeaching a sitting president more than once, and "marshaling the intelligence community")? Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 09:43, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
It's a cherry-picked quote from a long article citing legal scholars and historians on how and why this happened/had to happen (short version: because the U.S. is not a banana republic)is not an analyzation of the source (or at least not what I would consider a good one), and you provided no sources to stuff that disproves the point Anything is trying to make. Please actually prove your point instead of stating a point as if it's a fact into the air so we can move forward (the subsequent snarky comments after the inital cherrypicking comment affirm this claim; SPECIFICO, you literally state
...nobody was really expecting you to acknowledge that it was cherrypickedas if the fact that Anything's statement is cherrypicked is an undisputed truth). Speaking of the snark, SPECIFICO, I fully condemn it. Especially considering that you didn't actually justify your own point (neither did Space4T, who made the original cherrypicking accusation) and only put it out there in an 'my point is obviously correct' kind of way, and then used that false assertion that the cherrypicking performed by Anything is a fact rather than your opinion as a conduit into language that, best case scenario, is unnecessary/ill-timed, and, worst case scenario, lowers editor morale, causes unnecessary annoyance, incentivizes constant talk page screaming, and creates a hostile editing environment where people feel like !voting and RfCs are the only way to actualy get things done. This practice of yelling 'cherrypicked! cherrypicked!' without even an attempt to prove that statement needs to stop.
The expected prosecution of Trump shatters an unwritten American political norm and brings the United States more in line with dozens of other nations, including democracies such as South Korea, Brazil, France, Italy and Israel, that have criminally charged, convicted and in many cases jailed former leaders.
“Anyone who is worried that this will be the beginning of a pattern of indicting past presidents is right to be worried,” said Jill Lepore, a Harvard University historian and author.
“It’s the failure to indict Mr. Trump simply because he was once the president that would say we were well on the way to becoming a banana republic,” said Laurence Tribe, a Harvard University legal scholar.
“Part of it has also been an unfortunate view that ex-presidents deserve some kind of monarchical immunity that normal citizens do not,” [Michael Beschloss] said. “How do you explain to someone who steals toothpaste from a drugstore that they are more subject to American law than a president is?
Focusing on norms would be fine, but then it would be necessary to discuss other norms, like the norm of not indicting a former president, or repeatedly impeaching him, or marshaling the intelligence community in an effort to label him a foreign agent, etc etc. Norms work both ways.They then later contradicted Specifico's opinion that that sentence is nonsense with the article in question. I don’t even support adding DFlhb’s or your proposed text to the article but Anything turned DFlhb's
a weak commitment to democratic norms, delegitimization of political opponents, toleration and encouragement of political violence, and a willingness to curb the civil liberties of opponents and critics"exactly backwards and upside-down" - and that’s quoting Laurence Tribe as quoted in the WaPo article, the part you did not quote:
"It’s the failure to indict Mr. Trump simply because he was once the president that would say we were well on the way to becoming a banana republic," said Laurence Tribe, a Harvard University legal scholar who taught Barack Obama and advised his presidential campaign and administration. "Those who fear that indicting a former president would say that U.S. democracy is in trouble have it exactly backwards and upside-down."Here’s another "key quote" (now I'm snarking about your "key points") from the same article:
But many scholars of the Constitution and the executive branch say the charges demonstrate the strength of U.S. democracy, proving that not even a former president is above the law.My last point about the article: none of the quoted scholars and historians mention the word "norm". Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 11:11, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
...several said it was a moment that could open a new era of legal peril for former presidents, including the possibility of tit-for-tat, politically motivated prosecutions.It's just a chacterization of the two 'sides' of the argument. Maybe that weakens Anything's point, but it's definitely not cherrypicking. Right? Maybe I'm wrong. Cessaune [talk] 12:32, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
like the norm of not indicting a former president, or repeatedly impeaching him, or marshaling the intelligence community in an effort to label him a foreign agent, etc etc.—I don't necessarily agree with. Only the first phrase. And, as I thought was clear, the source provided by Anythin is only an attempt to justify the first part of the phrase, not the entire thing.
that’s history, an unwritten "norm" only because it hadn’t happened beforeare potentially true, but where's the RS to qualify it? Anything provided one. Cessaune [talk] 15:57, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
Michael Beschloss, a presidential historian and author, said the long U.S. tradition of not indicting former presidents is partly because "in general, presidents did not misbehave, in a criminal sense, to a degree that would have made that seem urgent." "Part of it has also been an unfortunate view that ex-presidents deserve some kind of monarchical immunity that normal citizens do not," he said. "How do you explain to someone who steals toothpaste from a drugstore that they are more subject to American law than a president is?"Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 16:36, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
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Several political scientists have analyzed Trump's presidency... Steven Levitszky and Daniel Ziblatt say that Trump benefited from a democracy weakened by "extreme partisan polarization"... [Person C] and [Person D] argue that Trump's practice of hiring far-right advocates and "often implicit, occasionally explicit" support for far-right causes "emblodened the far-right and alt-right to a degree unheard of in contemporary American politics, one that sets a dangerous precedent"... [Person E] argues that "[Trump's] systematic subversion of the traditional notions of American presidency, and the excessive amounts of lies, falsehoods and denials told to further his false narratives... may be the most damaging parts of his legacy"...
Well, I have to admit that Trump was the first US president (in my lifetime) to put up such a commotion to overturn a prez election result. So... whatever yas decide on this 'topic', is acceptable. GoodDay ( talk) 21:12, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
New proposal, improved based on Cessaune's suggestion:
Under Trump's presidency, scholarly assessments of the state of U.S. democracy have sharply declined (see the V-Dem and BLW surveys), [1] [2] with leading scholars arguing that America was experiencing democratic backsliding. [3] [4] [5] Steven Levitsky and Daniel Ziblatt say Trump was the first U.S. president in the last century to meet all four criteria of their "litmus test for autocrats": a weak commitment to electoral outcomes, delegitimization of political opponents, toleration and encouragement of political violence, and a willingness to curb the civil liberties of opponents and critics. [6] Robert R. Kaufman and Stephan Haggard contend that Trump deepened America's political polarization and tribalism, though he was limited by institutional safeguards. [7] According to Michael W. Bauer, Stefan Becker, and Charles T. Goodsell, Trump sabotaged the administrative state by delaying 1,200 political appointments, politicizing vital departments, nominating heads of the EPA and CFPB who openly opposed their agencies' mission, issuing new policies without consulting his cabinet, and attacking the independence of the Federal Reserve and the intelligence community. [8] [9] Roberto Foa and Yascha Mounk argue that Trump's tacit or active endorsement of vigilante groups may "prove to be his most damaging legacy", marking America's shift into a "dirty democracy" where "tit-for-tat partisan norm-breaking" is normalized. [10]
DFlhb ( talk) 20:10, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
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So Trump is an autocrat, but he was voted out of office, and his attempts to overturn the results were unsuccessful. I oppose adding a democratic backsliding section - there’s a Democratic backsliding in the United States article. Quoting one of the cited sources (Carey, Helmke, et al): "It is too early to say whether the long-term quality of democracy in the United States will suffer." It’s too early to assess whether and, if so, how much of this belongs in Trump’s personal bio - there are others involved, from the Federalist Society, McConnell’s Republican-majority Senate, the deep pockets of the Kochs, Mercers, Thiel, to Fox News. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:28, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
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I would like to share my perspective on how Donald Trump's presidency is depicted in this Wikipedia article. While Trump's presidency had very many undeniably significant flaws, I believe that his accomplishments should be given fair consideration in this article. It's worth noting that Joe Biden's Wikipedia page highlights his achievements prominently in the first paragraphs, but Trump's article provides little to no attention to his accomplishments. I believe that it is important to provide a balanced representation of Trump's record by acknowledging his few successes as president and not just his failures. F!reFlyer ( talk) 11:06, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
selected, overseen, supported and approved by the president. soibangla ( talk) 15:20, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
selected, overseen, supported and approvedeveryone is reminiscent of his false claim he personally selected every instructor for Trump University. It's hagiography. soibangla ( talk) 16:23, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
Actually he later canceled the invitation to the Taliban. The Capitalist forever ( talk) 21:31, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
That’s the neat part. Trump doesn’t have presidential accomplishments. 67.85.103.120 ( talk) 16:21, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
@ F!reFlyer: I totally agree with you. I think this article needs to put some of Trump's accomplishments from this in the article. Here it is: [1] This article does raise some NPOV concerns when compared to other president articles. The Capitalist forever ( talk) 21:21, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
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Regardless of it being an opinion or not, do you deny that some of those things are good things Trump did as president? It is quite sad that almost nothing good is said about him and whenever their is something good, it is downplayed. The Capitalist forever ( talk) 18:03, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
welcome to suggest policy-based improvements, backed up by reliable sources. So far, Firefly hasn't responded. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 18:43, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
@ ValarianB: You do realize Democratic sources will slander Trump. If Right-wing news outlets were used, this article would be different. But then I keep forgetting that the Wall Street Journal is the only right-wing source approved for politics so there isn't much of a choice since that Journal isn't used that much in this article. Also, based on some research on how many Democrats or Republicans edit Wikipedia, 1.5× more Democrats edit Wikipedia than Republicans. The Capitalist forever ( talk) 21:19, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
You do realize Democratic sources will slander Trump. This is an absurd generalization. Provide a list of successful slander suits against WP:RS. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 21:24, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
They have an article on it at the NY Post and other places, but since those places aren't deemed "reliable", I won't bother the links. I think no news outlet is willing to point out it own faults whether it's "right or left". The Capitalist forever ( talk) 21:43, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
@ Zaathras: Well, when I looked at the list, the only Right-wing site that had reliable for everything is Wall Street Journal. That's just all I'm saying.
@ F!reFlyer: - repinging F!reFlyer. FYI - the ping won't work unless a new signature is added in the same edit as the ping. The oringinal ping misspelled the user's name, and the edit that fixed the spelling did not include a new signature. This edit should work to ping them. ~ ONUnicorn( Talk| Contribs) problem solving 19:06, 11 May 2023 (UTC) - at least, it would have if I hadn't spelled "ping" as "pnig". This one should work. ~ ONUnicorn( Talk| Contribs) problem solving 19:08, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
pats on the back all-around, because once again we have allowed someone ("F!reFlyer", a 2-post user), egged on by a regular or two, to stir the pot and run away. and the aftermath is just another stupid back-and-forth about a generically vague "why aren't we praising him enough".
no concrete proposals. no specific examples. Just arguing. Close this as "going nowhere", please." ValarianB ( talk) 19:08, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
There are four spacific [sic] events from his presidency that I think need coverage in this article.F!reFlyer goes on to list them. I think we should leave this open and let the discussion die down, as is common practice elsewhere. Cessaune [talk] 01:37, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
Mandruss, I'm directly challenging this revert. Rough consensus is an unnecessary sub-characterization of consensus, especially given the fact that no other consensus item contains anything of the sort. Even more especially since Space4T literally talks about this specific consensus on their user page (one which went against the opinion they !voted for in the lead-linking RfC, the opinion Space4T has advocated for for a while now) and is the editor who decided to include the rough consensus characterization initially. It's a completely fair characterization, no doubt, but one that has no real reason to exist, which is why it shouldn't. Cessaune [talk] 08:59, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
The initial version of item 60:A rough consensus has emerged to implement Option 1, which is to insert the 10-ish links described in the proposal. While Option 2 had substantial support, especially among later commenters, many suggested Option 1 as an alternative in case Option 2 failed to gain enough support. While proponents of Option 3 (de-linking) widely mentioned SEAOFBLUE, a rough consensus of editors have argued that, as paraphrased from Rhododendrites' comments, this is a wiki, and that links are what make Wikipedia unique among reference sources.
There is a consensus to include a reasonable number of links in the lead, especially for specific items such as the Iran nuclear deal and the Trans-Pacific Partnership.My version:
There is a rough consensus to insert the links described in the RfC January 2023. Current version:
Insert the links described in the RfC January 2023. (Rough consensus)It was a badly formulated RfC, and editors responded with opinions such as "Links are what makes Wikipedia stand out among reference works" (little-known reference works such as Britannica also use them, but meh). I think we should keep the qualifier. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:04, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
I rewrote the Response to claims of bias page:
User:Cessaune/Trump/Response to claims of bias
What do y'all think? Cessaune [talk] 20:09, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
Previous added major information to the article with multiple sources, which @ Space4Time3Continuum2x: removed and gave some commentary on.
As this is a Wikipedia article covering the topic of Donald Trump, and Wikipedia is not WP:CENSORED, all of the information is clearly critical and notable. Donald Trump article is not just a biography, but is also an encyclopedic article about a figure in world history. Further all the content relates biographically to Donald Trump and is cited to reliable sources (RS).
The following two passages were removed together.
By 2012, the Industrial and Commercial Bank of China was Trump Tower's largest office tenant. [1]
According to Forbes staff, by October 2020, Trump had received approximately $5.4 million from the China state-owned bank ICBC through its $1.9 million annual rent in Trump Tower. [2] Trump also maintained a Chinese bank account until 2018 which became a 2020 campaign issue. [3] [4] It was revealed that in 2016 and 2017, he paid more taxes to China ($188,561) than to the United States ($750). [3]
Mention and cites at Trump_Tower#Commercial_tenants. The bank has been a tenant at Trump Tower (not Trump Building) since 2008 and downsized its space in 2019. Conflict of interest/emoluments: moot after Trump’s term had ended, per SC decision.
This third passage was also removed.
Trump registered a new company in February 2021. Trump Media & Technology Group (TMTG) was formed for providing "social networking services" to "customers in the United States". [5] [6] In October 2021, Trump announced the planned merger of TMTG with Digital World Acquisition, [7] a special-purpose acquisition company (SPAC). A main backer of the SPAC is China-based financier ARC Group, who was reportedly involved in setting up the proposed merger. The transaction is under investigation by the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. [8] [9] Shanghai-based ARC also offered $2 million to get Digital World Acquisition off the ground. [10] The CEO of Digital World Acquisition, hired from Wuhan-based operation Yunhong Holdings, [11] [10] [12] [13] broke ties with China in December 2021. [14]
Moved newly added content to the umbrella brand, Trump Organization. Too much detail in Chinese company & personnel for top bio.
In summary, the above passages are major content to include on the Donald Trump article and both biographically important cited to reliable sources and also encyclopedically important in world history.
Thanks for reading. Feel free to comment below -- Rauisuchian ( talk) 20:56, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
The Chinese bank rented the offices in 2008, and they were only the third-largest tenant after Gucci and the Trump Organization. In 2008, Trump was a reality TV celebrity, and I doubt the bank had a clairvoyant on its payroll who predicted Trump's 2015 presidential announcement. Emoluments: why did the bank downsize its Trump Tower office in 2019 when he was in office and the tower had plenty of vacant space? Conflicts of interest: tenants tend to pay rent, unless your Clarence Thomas's mother and Harlan Crow is your landlord. The Forbes article doesn't say whether the rent was high, low, or average for a NY 5th Ave. location. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 11:43, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
Clarifying: you're proposing to add Shanghai-based ARC also offered $2 million to get Digital World Acquisition off the ground.[10] The CEO of Digital World Acquisition, hired from Wuhan-based operation Yunhong Holdings,[11][10][12][13] broke ties with China in December 2021.[14]
Too much detail for this top bio. The first four sentences of the paragraph are in the article. You mention additional info that RS's like Reuters and The Guardian discovered in 2023
. What are you talking about? The Reuters article you cite is dated February 10, 2022, and your sources don't include a Guardian article.
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I found the Guardian article, at Truth_Social#Russian_finance, which is where the mention belongs, for now. "According to [Guardian] sources familiar with the matter", NY prosecutors are investigating Trump Media for money laundering. The article mentions then-Trump Media CFO Philip Juhan, Trump Jr., and a few others, no mention of Trump. Until we know whether anything comes of this WP:NOTNEWS applies. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:07, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
Given there's a whole article (based on almost 70 reliable sources) and category, it looks like the majority of editors involved don't consider this redundant, that there is precedent for mentioning this, and that this forms a significant part of Trump's notability and impact on politics and public discourse (including before, during, and after his presidency), therefore meeting WP:SUSTAINED.
To name but two, his involvement as the figurehead of the birther movement is often described as the harbinger of his presidency and now going into the next election reports indicate roughly 70% of Republicans believe Trump's big lie. GhulamIslam ( talk) 14:20, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
Trump is microphone, willing to amplify whatever his supporters views are & possibly what some independents' views are. That's the premise that I'm seeing, but I'll go along with whatever write up, the rest of you can work out. GoodDay ( talk) 15:29, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
Trump has promoted conspiracy theories...more prominence or weight. Doing so would put the lead out of a rough chronological order and I reject the notion that his pre-political career is not important (see the reasons by DFlhb). Iamreallygoodatcheckers talk 15:00, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
I propose changing the lead sentence to "Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, businessman, and conspiracy theorist [1] who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021."
According to the Collins English Dictionary, a conspiracy theorist is
"someone who believes in or spreads conspiracy theories". As I've said before, if appropriately substantiated by extensive reliable sources, such a term may be included in the lead paragraph to describe Donald Trump without running afoul of WP:BLP. It's a description widely used by unbiased reliable sources both academic and journalistic.
Trump is beyond a WP:PUBLICFIGURE so there is a huge exception to the usual care taken to be careful to avoid negative info in BLPs. "In the case of public figures, there will be a multitude of reliable published sources, and BLPs should simply document what these sources say. If an allegation or incident is noteworthy, relevant, and well documented, it belongs in the article—even if it is negative and the subject dislikes all mention of it."
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Trump is beyond a WP:PUBLICFIGURE so there is a huge exception to the usual care taken to be careful to avoid negative info in BLPs—since he's an active, extremely prominent politician, not only in America but to a limited extent worldwide, I would err very far on the side of caution. There is no real benefit to characterizing Trump as a conspiracy theorist in my mind (we have a page devoted to the conpiracy theories he has promoted, so if people want to, they can still find the relevant info), and as I see it, the potential negatives are so much greater than any potential benefit.
I propose changing the lead sentence to "Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, businessman, and conspiracy theorist who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021."I'm confused. Cessaune [talk] 01:40, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
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Just an aside, why isn't the term conspiracy theory used to describe the claim that Trump secretly conspired with Russia to win the 2016 election and that Trump conspired secretly with law enforcement officials to clear protesters near the White House for a church photo op? Both were later debunked by official government investigations. Bob K31416 ( talk) 15:06, 9 May 2023 (UTC) |
Can this section be updated? All the info is now out-of-date. Prisoner of Zenda ( talk) 09:39, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
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After a discussion with Bob K31416 (permalink), I would like to try for a consensus on what I believe is the best way to handle bias complaints at this article. There were discussions about this a couple of years ago, but no explicit consensus. I figured the benefits were obvious enough that it would just "catch on", but I was apparently mistaken.
The key elements of this method are:
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/bot.If we can reach a consensus on this, I will create a new item in the consensus list. If not, I will drop the issue and abandon the method. ― Mandruss ☎ 22:36, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
Any user, including you.... But in all my years at this article I have yet to see a single one of these readers come back with the requisite suggestion for
a specific, policy-based improvement. They simply don't care to dig into the policy enough to know what "policy-based" means, exactly (nor would I, probably). That suggests that your suggestion would merely add unnecessary complication to the process. ― Mandruss ☎ 00:17, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
we need to give the visitor enough time to return to read the reply to their query. To not give a user that time at all isn't fair, regardless of whether or not the editor
simply [doesn't] care to dig into the policy enough to know what "policy-based" means. I went and looked through policies, when I made my first edits here, so when you say
I have yet to see a single one of these readers come back with the requisite suggestion for a specific, policy-based improvement—I tried to in the past, and continue to try to now. I definitely know I wouldn't be a Wikipedia editor at all if someone had shut down my first Trump talk page contribution without even giving me a chance to reply.
specific, policy-based improvements that we speak of, which was the whole point of my edits, and should be the whole point of the bias page. Our words should also reflect that when pointing the editor towards the bias page. Cessaune [talk] 00:36, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
It's not ultimately that disruptive to keep a discussion open for 24 hoursNot so much disruptive as a waste of time. Basically we're spending our time educating readers about Wikipedia policy, when the policy is already written down for them to read if they're interested (and they aren't, as I said). We're here to work on this article, not to educate readers who have no interest in being educated. Our responsibility ends after we point them to the policy pages.
as SPECIFICO says above, we need to give the visitor enough time to return to read the reply to their query. Exactly right, and this method gives them 24 hours to read the reply. If that wasn't considered enough time, consensus 13 wouldn't read as it does.Your proposed changes to the response page are a separate and independent issue. ― Mandruss ☎ 00:48, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
Basically we're spending our time educating readers about Wikipedia policy, when the policy is already written down for them to read if they're interested—I'm only suggesting two sentences or so. It wouldn't be that big of a deal. Cessaune [talk] 01:07, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
I would like it if we articulated that they are not only welcome to try again, but that we encourage them to try again.By all means, feel free to change "welcome to" to "encouraged to" on the response page. The whole point is that anything that needs to be said can be said on that page, and the thread itself should be kept to little more than is required to point them to it. In the example above, I added just a little extra just because that's how I roll. It wouldn't be a requirement under my method. Otherwise, I still think your extra steps add unnecessary complication, but that consensus would be better than none. ― Mandruss ☎ 03:04, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
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☎ 20:50, 30 April 2023 (UTC)I think we can mostly agree, that it can be a tricky situation to handle. We must take caution, not to be seen as 'anti-Trump', when shutting down discussions. GoodDay ( talk) 00:30, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
Freedom of discussion applies to anyone, not just Wikipedia editors, otherwise there would be no Wikipedia editors.So Wikipedia editors become editors so they can engage in discussions with non-editing readers? I was not aware of that. Are they trying to educate the population about Wikipedia policies? If not, they're violating WP:NOTFORUM. And neither is good.
pretense that discussion may be pointless and may waste editor timeSorry, no. The history of this article could not possibly be clearer: It is pointless and does waste editor time. No reader bias complaint has ever resulted in a change to the article. If that's not a waste of time, I don't know what is. If an editor sees the bias complaint and it stimulates him or her to think of a "specific, policy-based" suggestion, no problem — he or she may start a new thread about it. There's no benefit to doing it in the complaint thread.
Everyone deserves at least a chance to back up their statements, editor or not.I won't argue that point, but we are not denying them that chance. We are merely asking them to do it in a new thread, this time "specific, policy-based". The time required to start a new thread will be insignificant compared to the time required to read the policy and even attempt to put together something "specific, policy-based". As I've said previously, we have yet to see a complaining reader come back with something "specific, policy-based". The history of this article could not possibly be clearer: They have nothing further to say. But if they do, they may — within policy. ― Mandruss ☎ 04:20, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
We are merely asking them to do it in a new thread—my belief is that asking them to start a new thread with a new question has the effect, unintended or not, to stifle discussion completely.
Everyone deserves at least a chance to back up their statements, editor or not.In the same thread, I might add. While the closing of one thread and the opening of another might seem trivial to one who understands that the implications of doing so are next to nothing, it is not the same to a good faith user who doesn't understand it. Instantly shutting down their good faith opinions (because that's how closing is perceived when you aren't an established editor) disincentivizes new good faith and policy-based opinions.
If they want to become Wikipedia editors, they are welcome to come on board—becoming an editor is, at least in my limited experince, a gradual process that requires failure. To become an editor by saying "hey, I want to edit, time to read up on the rules to figure out what I should and shouldn't do"—that almost delves into a Citizendium or Nupedia-type formality, one that Wikipedia is directly against. This is why I believe it's important to actually help people instead of telling people to do stuff, and then claiming that we tried to help but they were unwilling to listen, when, in reality, we didn't really try to help at all. Cessaune [talk] 07:50, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
I understand that a lot of people are averse to organization—can you clarify the meaning of this? Thanks. Cessaune [talk] 08:26, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
[Bob's] reversions are almost exclusively focused on Specificois a true statement, but a statement that misses the bigger picture. Cessaune [talk] 16:44, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
The real problem (the monkey hiding under the bed, the lizard in the closet, etc.) is WP editors who pile on and use such inquiries -- good faith or not, well-formulated or not, specific or vague -- as an opportunity for a late-night college dorm debate. Once a reply has been given, WP editors need to step back and not continue to reply to OP, at least until OP has responded with some new addition. So I suggest, when we respond the first responder should use the green checkmark to show the issue has been addressed. And everyone else needs to start a new thread if they are inspired to share their thoughts. SPECIFICO talk 12:45, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
What about unspecific bias complaints from anti-Trumpers? These complaints are less common than the other kind, but they do occur and should not be given greater consideration merely because they are anti-Trump. To prevent them from being given greater consideration, they need to be covered by any consensus arising from this discussion.
Almost all of
the response page applies equally whether they are pro- or anti-Trump. The last sentence of the second paragraph does not: Since reliable sources are widely critical of Trump, this article must reflect that.
Should there be a separate response page for the anti-Trumpers, or will the existing one suffice — possibly with a slightly different reply in the thread? Or, should the existing response page be modified so that it works equally well for both camps? ― Mandruss ☎ 23:31, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
Can I close this and revert to status quo? Cessaune [talk] 01:24, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
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Examples of what I would call bad faith complaints that don't deserve a reply (actually snippets therefrom):
Unfortunately, there is no practical way to codify this in a consensus item. This means there would forever be disagreements about whether a given complaint is in good faith or bad faith. To a very significant degree, this would defeat the goals of the consensus to eliminate disruption and save editor time. I'm thinking it would be preferable to give undeserved replies, handling good-faith and bad-faith complaints the same way. This would be the lesser of two evils. I understand the aversion to giving such people anything but the online equivalent of a good punch in the gut, but that aversion is emotion-based and we should try to emulate Mister Spock. If they leave with the impression that they have our respect, so what? No skin off my back. ― Mandruss ☎ 09:16, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
The discussion has been open for 25 days and has been quiet for 15 days (22 days if you count only the first two subsections). The time for new ideas and back-and-forth debate is past, and I'm calling for a !vote. I recommend and request that you read the discussion before !voting here; it is not overly long, and I believe it has a relatively high signal-to-noise ratio.
The discussion yielded three alternative methods, with none of them receiving significantly more support than the others. If you prefer some other solution or approach, you have missed your opportunity to argue for it. Please participate in discussions of topics you care about.
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If you prefer some other solution or approach, you have missed your opportunity to argue for it.? Says who? Or, perhaps more accurately, says what policy? I understand the desire to streamline discussions, but as far as I'm concerned that kind of forced restriction might invalidate any consensus that's reached here. It appears to me that no consensus that emerged above, so now the solution is, evidently, to restrict the options, but, having reviewed that prior discussion, even the possibility of restriction wasn't discussed in advance. (And keep in mind that, though RFC's are generally preceded by RFCBEFOREs, there's no policy that says a user can't respond to an RFC with an alternative suggestion.)Second, I assume this approach would only apply to generic claims of bias. But, with the instant-close approach, what's the review process? If the OP disagrees with the closing editor, would the OP be allowed to revert the close and explain why? If so, would the same editor that first closed the discussion be allowed to claim, "Well my opinion counts for more than yours" and re-close the discussion? (A Wikipedia:Equality issue?) Or would a third-party editor have to agree? And, of course, if the OP isn't allowed to revert ... don't you still have the issue of the closing editor being allowed to claim "my opinion matters more" by concluding the OP's complaint is meritless and too generic, and not even allowing the OP to respond? Perhaps, as an alternative to reverting, the OP would be expected to modify a closed section ... or maybe visit the user talk pages of other editors and ask them to revert the closing editor? As I see it, there are way too many unanswered questions here.-- Jerome Frank Disciple 15:32, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
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Just want to edit the wording on the article. Is very biased and against Donald Trump, I want to make it with absolute facts as there are some lines which have no evidence or articles to back up such as where the article states he was racist and homophobic. Along with that it says "Trump claimed the election is rigged but is false." Again biased, as there is indeed evidence of deceased people somehow voting in the election. I don't want to make it "Pro-trump" by any means, just neutral since the article is clearly biased against Trump. Ruckers7 ( talk) 22:29, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
Hello! I'm not sure precisely where to place the content, but it seems to me that, though cited to different articles, this page repeats Forbes's estimates of Trump's wealth in the wealth section. Now, arguably, the first comment is more of a mini-lead, especially because the second mention gets more detail, but given how short the section is, overall, I think it might be worth it to only include the estimates once. First reference:
Records released by the FEC showed at least $1.4 billion in assets and $265 million in liabilities. Forbes estimated his net worth at $4.5 billion in 2015 and $3.1 billion in 2018.
The latter is cited to this Business Insider article.
Forbes estimated in October 2018 that his net worth declined from $4.5 billion in 2015 to $3.1 billion in 2017 and his product licensing income from $23 million to $3 million.
This sentence is cited to this Forbes article.
Just in case it concerns someone else: The identity of the dollar figures but variance in years here concerned me, though, upon further investigation ... I think it's okay? The second source (the Forbes article) was written in October 2018 and says:
His net worth, by our calculation, has dropped from $4.5 billion in 2015 to $3.1 billion the last two years, ....
I think the product-licensing info should be included, but I was wondering if anyone had thoughts about only including these numbers once. If we are using the first paragraph as a preview of the biggest points, we could perhaps phrase it differently? I.e. "Forbes estimated his net worth dropped by $1.4 billion between 2015 and 2018.
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Hello! At this point, I'm fairly used to @ SPECIFICO: reverting me with a generic edit summary and then not following up when I post here, but I'd like more input on this revert, where, amongst other moves, SPECIFICO added back an uncited claim.-- Jerome Frank Disciple 15:25, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
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As of writing, the lead has seven paragraphs, and I'm unsure if they benefit the article. The final sentence of MOS:LEAD's lead paragraph recommends four paragraphs. I'm leaning towards suggesting that the paragraphs on his presidency be seen if they can be consolidated into one or two, and maybe consider putting his civil and criminal lawsuits in the same paragraph as his impeachments. What I see as the main issue is that the paragraphs are almost niche focused, and overarching "themes" should be condensed as appropriate. Maybe even see if bits and pieces can be placed into the first sentence and turn it into a multi-sentence paragraph? Just an idea. InvadingInvader ( userpage, talk) 18:20, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
It says "He Three Supreme Court Justices." I don't imagine that is correct. Hairsonfire ( talk) 19:36, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
Hi, @ Bill Williams:. I saw that you reverted my edit. Dobbs v. Jackson has frequently been cited as the most enduring legacy of Trump's presidency.
Not mentioning it in the lead is a bit strange. KlayCax ( talk) 23:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
Should the lead of this article be changed to this rewritten version? This aligns with "current consensus" above.
DynaGuy00 ( talk) 01:30, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
Trump has been the subject of significant controversy and critique before, during, and after his presidency. Otherwise, it appears everything else was merely rearranged. However, I could have missed something; so I'll ask DynaGuy00: (1) What content, if any, is actually removed rather than just rearranged? and (2) What content is new? Iamreallygoodatcheckers talk 03:24, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
Is this change agreeable? Changing the statement that Trump became the only president to be twice impeached to the (sourced/verifiable) statement that he became the only officeholder to be twice impeached by the U.S. House.
There appears to be disagreement of the gist of consensus that the last discussion this talk page had on it. I believe that the last discussion largely accepted broadening the claim when that was substantively discussed, but objected to using the word "individuals" (hence why this latest edit used the term "officeholders"
By limiting the statement to "president", we leave it unclear whether other officeholders have been twice impeached federally in the U.S. In fact, by the deliberate language that limits the claim solely to "president" it might reasonably be falsely inferred by readers that this wording choice was due to the existence of other officeholder(s) that have been the subject of multiple impeachments. However, by wording it as "officeholder", there is no mistaking this, and its is understood that this means he was the first president as presidents are entirely encompassed by the word "officeholder" SecretName101 ( talk) 18:07, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
other officeholder(s) ... have been the subject of multiple impeachmentsinstead of being removed from office or care about them? The NBC source is about the House impeachment managers bringing it up "as an example of the Senate holding an impeachment trial for an official who's no longer in office." (It resulted in the Senate determining in 1799 that senators are not "civil officers" and therefore not subject to impeachment). How is this important for Trump's two impeachments? Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 11:24, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
I mean, the whole lead of this article just talks about how bad of a president he was. Memer15151 ( talk) 22:05, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
This is the standard. Would someone please fix this? Ramanujaner ( talk) 18:15, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
While this statement in the lead is technically accurate, I think that it could be confusing to others.
"making him the first former U.S. president to face criminal charges"
President Grant was arrested while in office. Could it be edited to say something like "the first US president to be arrested since Ulysses S. Grant in 1872. Making note to be the only president arrested after leaving office..." Not stuck on the wording but I think the information is important. Michael-Moates ( talk) 14:06, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
There is outdated information in the "Indictment" section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:4041:5A8F:2E00:AC72:D920:2091:FF73 ( talk) 20:32, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
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let's be better than stuff like this. anyone with even a passing familiarity with this talk page know such topics are time-sinks. ValarianB ( talk) 12:19, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
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There is a problem with the infobox, specifically on "Criminal charges". - Someone, please fix it. Felixsj ( talk) 14:35, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
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Szmenderowiecki (
talk) 14:45, 24 April 2023 (UTC)I have no problem with the consensus, but I want to add this correction as a second source. The consensus is based on this discussion. Two editors stated in that discussion that her mother was Austrian, based on information in Ivana Trump’s article at the time (I corrected it in this edit). That was disinformation the Trumps had fed to the press to hide the fact that Ivana had married Austrian skier Alfred Winkelmayr to obtain an Austrian passport and be allowed to legally leave communist Czechoslovakia. They officially admitted it in 1990 during the divorce proceedings. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:08, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
Moved to User talk:Szmenderowiecki Szmenderowiecki ( talk) 10:45, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
ping|Szmenderowiecki: You wrote that WP:ONUS dictates that it is up to those seeking to include content to rally consensus. As of the moment of writing, the sentence is included in the article. A discussion preceded this RfC.
Were you under the impression that the sentence was added recently since you mentioned the discussion that took place a month ago? The sentence was
added to the section almost three years ago.
WP:ONUS says that "[t]he responsibility for achieving consensus for inclusion is on those seeking to include disputed content." That's a bit vague but I read that to mean "those seeking to add disputed content." The proponents of the RfC were seeking to remove long-standing content. The RfC proposer's question "Should the sentence below be included in the article (as it is now)" may have led some readers to believe that it is recently added content. The proposer should have asked whether "the sentence below should be removed from the article." Also, this
cute move, u|Iamreallygoodatcheckers, really? I haven’t decided whether I want to do something about this or not, so for now I’m unarchiving the RfC to see what other editors think.
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(This wasn't meant to be a private discussion, so copying my comment back to this page. Responses by Szmenderowiecki and Iamreallygoodatcheckers at User_talk:Szmenderowiecki#Mark_Milley_apology_close. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 14:47, 12 April 2023 (UTC))
...the burden of proof is on those who wish to retain, restore, or undelete the disputed material... If it is to be restored without significant change, consensus must be obtained first.WP:STATUSQUO is not a valid argument to keep because this is a BLP (it even mentions at STATUSQUO the BLP exemption). There should not be a push to include material that there is clearly no consensus for in this BLP. Iamreallygoodatcheckers talk 15:39, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
To ensure that material about living people is written neutrally to a high standard, and based on high-quality reliable sources, the burden of proof is on those who wish to retain, restore, or undelete the disputed material. When material about living persons has been deleted on good-faith BLP objections.WP:STATUSQUO: "unsourced and poorly sourced contentious material" in BLP's? Neither you nor any of the other supporters of your proposal questioned the neutrality and writing standard of the sentence or the reliability of its source. Your argument boiled down to "off-topic". Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 12:03, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
Reminder — As indicated in the message by Szmenderowiecki at the top of this section, there is a discussion at
User_talk:Szmenderowiecki#Mark_Milley_apology_close, where the closer has been responding to comments about the closing.
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Recommend taking the closure challenge to WP:AN, fwiw. GoodDay ( talk) 14:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
I haven’t decided whether I want to do something about this or not, so for now I’m unarchiving the RfC to see what other editors thinkwasn't a challenge. So now two weeks later we have a few evenly split opinions, three "bad close" and three "endorse close". Looks like a dead issue to me until the arrival of Milley's memoir. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:28, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
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In the lead section of the article there are at least 30 or 40 negative statements about Donald Trump, whereas in the lead section of the articles for Joe Biden or Barack Obama, there are no more than 2 negative statements about either president. This disparity in tone for encyclopedic articles about American presidents is highly problematic. 220.240.114.114 ( talk) 13:55, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
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Given Trump’s conviction yesterday, I think it would be appropriate to add him to Category:Rapists.
67.85.103.120 ( talk) 03:41, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
The current audio box on file is great (I was the one who sourced it afterall), however in hindsight the audio quality of Trumps voice is a bit lower quality compared to the other presidents. Given the purpose of the voice box is to make sure the person it represents voice is clear and properly articulated I think it might be best to replace it with another similar, short, non-partisan, and more clear voice box. As such, I have provided one below in both the .ogg format and with a link for listening on wikimedia in advance to publishment.
File:Donald Trump Ordering Missile Attacks in Retaliation for Syrian Chemical Strikes.ogg https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/4f/Donald_Trump_Ordering_Missile_Attacks_in_Retaliation_for_Syrian_Chemical_Strikes.ogg
I think if you compare the differences in audio quality between the two sources the one I am currently recommending does have a notable increase in audio quality overall largely due to the fact the current audio source was taken from an outside commencement address which unfortunately causes some tepid interference with optimal audio quality. The audio from this file in question is in reference to the Khan Shaykhun chemical attack and was recorded April 6, 2017 if that information is needed for proper audio replacement. Again, the audio I have presented here remains heavily neutral but more importantly provides a clearer quality of his voice for potential readers which I feel is more important overall and also is what the voice box was designed to do to begin with. LosPajaros ( talk) 01:29, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
representative of how he speaks with a teleprompter— no. Reading off the teleprompter: from Chili to the oranges of the investigation. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:28, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
is what the voice box was designed to do to begin with- is that explained anywhere (MOS, etc.)? Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 14:39, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
I proposed a Democratic backsliding section in January, which was not discussed in depth. I'm now presenting an improved version. This section is not about Trumpism, but about Trump's direct impact on America's democracy. It is sourced solely to scholarly sources, which is far better than most of our article. And it uses these sources to put forward an analytical appraisal, which our articles needs more of. I use two sources: a study by Yascha Mounk and Stefan Foa, published in the high-impact factor Policy Studies Journal. And a book written by two scholars, Steven Levitsky and Daniel Ziblatt, called How Democracies Die, which The Economist described as "the most important book of the Trump era", and which we don't currently use. The heading could be "Flouting of democratic norms", or "Abandonment of democratic norms".
Political scientists have analyzed Trump's presidency as both a cause and a consequence of America's increasing polarization. Levitszky and Ziblatt say that Trump benefited from a democracy weakened by "extreme partisan polarization", and was the first U.S. president in the last century to meet all four criteria of their "litmus test for autocrats": a weak commitment to democratic norms, delegitimization of political opponents, toleration and encouragement of political violence, and a willingness to curb the civil liberties of opponents and critics. [1] Foa and Mounk say Trump disregarded democratic norms through his tacit or active endorsement of vigilante groups, his lack of commitment to respecting electoral outcomes, and his lack of repudiation of political violence, which weakened the country's "institutional equilibrium", and may "prove to be his most damaging legacy". [2]
Please don't just treat this as an up-or-down vote, which would make it hard to reach a consensus.
DFlhb ( talk) 23:21, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
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normdoesn't appear in our article, despite plentiful sourcing. DFlhb ( talk) 00:08, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
"The expected prosecution of Trump shatters an unwritten American political norm and brings the United States more in line with dozens of other nations, including democracies such as South Korea, Brazil, France, Italy and Israel, that have criminally charged, convicted and in many cases jailed former leaders." [1]
unwritten norm. It's a cherry-picked quote from a long article citing legal scholars and historians on how and why this happened/had to happen (short version: because the U.S. is not a banana republic). Do you have any sources for the other "norms" you mention (not indicting a former president, not impeaching a sitting president more than once, and "marshaling the intelligence community")? Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 09:43, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
It's a cherry-picked quote from a long article citing legal scholars and historians on how and why this happened/had to happen (short version: because the U.S. is not a banana republic)is not an analyzation of the source (or at least not what I would consider a good one), and you provided no sources to stuff that disproves the point Anything is trying to make. Please actually prove your point instead of stating a point as if it's a fact into the air so we can move forward (the subsequent snarky comments after the inital cherrypicking comment affirm this claim; SPECIFICO, you literally state
...nobody was really expecting you to acknowledge that it was cherrypickedas if the fact that Anything's statement is cherrypicked is an undisputed truth). Speaking of the snark, SPECIFICO, I fully condemn it. Especially considering that you didn't actually justify your own point (neither did Space4T, who made the original cherrypicking accusation) and only put it out there in an 'my point is obviously correct' kind of way, and then used that false assertion that the cherrypicking performed by Anything is a fact rather than your opinion as a conduit into language that, best case scenario, is unnecessary/ill-timed, and, worst case scenario, lowers editor morale, causes unnecessary annoyance, incentivizes constant talk page screaming, and creates a hostile editing environment where people feel like !voting and RfCs are the only way to actualy get things done. This practice of yelling 'cherrypicked! cherrypicked!' without even an attempt to prove that statement needs to stop.
The expected prosecution of Trump shatters an unwritten American political norm and brings the United States more in line with dozens of other nations, including democracies such as South Korea, Brazil, France, Italy and Israel, that have criminally charged, convicted and in many cases jailed former leaders.
“Anyone who is worried that this will be the beginning of a pattern of indicting past presidents is right to be worried,” said Jill Lepore, a Harvard University historian and author.
“It’s the failure to indict Mr. Trump simply because he was once the president that would say we were well on the way to becoming a banana republic,” said Laurence Tribe, a Harvard University legal scholar.
“Part of it has also been an unfortunate view that ex-presidents deserve some kind of monarchical immunity that normal citizens do not,” [Michael Beschloss] said. “How do you explain to someone who steals toothpaste from a drugstore that they are more subject to American law than a president is?
Focusing on norms would be fine, but then it would be necessary to discuss other norms, like the norm of not indicting a former president, or repeatedly impeaching him, or marshaling the intelligence community in an effort to label him a foreign agent, etc etc. Norms work both ways.They then later contradicted Specifico's opinion that that sentence is nonsense with the article in question. I don’t even support adding DFlhb’s or your proposed text to the article but Anything turned DFlhb's
a weak commitment to democratic norms, delegitimization of political opponents, toleration and encouragement of political violence, and a willingness to curb the civil liberties of opponents and critics"exactly backwards and upside-down" - and that’s quoting Laurence Tribe as quoted in the WaPo article, the part you did not quote:
"It’s the failure to indict Mr. Trump simply because he was once the president that would say we were well on the way to becoming a banana republic," said Laurence Tribe, a Harvard University legal scholar who taught Barack Obama and advised his presidential campaign and administration. "Those who fear that indicting a former president would say that U.S. democracy is in trouble have it exactly backwards and upside-down."Here’s another "key quote" (now I'm snarking about your "key points") from the same article:
But many scholars of the Constitution and the executive branch say the charges demonstrate the strength of U.S. democracy, proving that not even a former president is above the law.My last point about the article: none of the quoted scholars and historians mention the word "norm". Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 11:11, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
...several said it was a moment that could open a new era of legal peril for former presidents, including the possibility of tit-for-tat, politically motivated prosecutions.It's just a chacterization of the two 'sides' of the argument. Maybe that weakens Anything's point, but it's definitely not cherrypicking. Right? Maybe I'm wrong. Cessaune [talk] 12:32, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
like the norm of not indicting a former president, or repeatedly impeaching him, or marshaling the intelligence community in an effort to label him a foreign agent, etc etc.—I don't necessarily agree with. Only the first phrase. And, as I thought was clear, the source provided by Anythin is only an attempt to justify the first part of the phrase, not the entire thing.
that’s history, an unwritten "norm" only because it hadn’t happened beforeare potentially true, but where's the RS to qualify it? Anything provided one. Cessaune [talk] 15:57, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
Michael Beschloss, a presidential historian and author, said the long U.S. tradition of not indicting former presidents is partly because "in general, presidents did not misbehave, in a criminal sense, to a degree that would have made that seem urgent." "Part of it has also been an unfortunate view that ex-presidents deserve some kind of monarchical immunity that normal citizens do not," he said. "How do you explain to someone who steals toothpaste from a drugstore that they are more subject to American law than a president is?"Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 16:36, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
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Several political scientists have analyzed Trump's presidency... Steven Levitszky and Daniel Ziblatt say that Trump benefited from a democracy weakened by "extreme partisan polarization"... [Person C] and [Person D] argue that Trump's practice of hiring far-right advocates and "often implicit, occasionally explicit" support for far-right causes "emblodened the far-right and alt-right to a degree unheard of in contemporary American politics, one that sets a dangerous precedent"... [Person E] argues that "[Trump's] systematic subversion of the traditional notions of American presidency, and the excessive amounts of lies, falsehoods and denials told to further his false narratives... may be the most damaging parts of his legacy"...
Well, I have to admit that Trump was the first US president (in my lifetime) to put up such a commotion to overturn a prez election result. So... whatever yas decide on this 'topic', is acceptable. GoodDay ( talk) 21:12, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
New proposal, improved based on Cessaune's suggestion:
Under Trump's presidency, scholarly assessments of the state of U.S. democracy have sharply declined (see the V-Dem and BLW surveys), [1] [2] with leading scholars arguing that America was experiencing democratic backsliding. [3] [4] [5] Steven Levitsky and Daniel Ziblatt say Trump was the first U.S. president in the last century to meet all four criteria of their "litmus test for autocrats": a weak commitment to electoral outcomes, delegitimization of political opponents, toleration and encouragement of political violence, and a willingness to curb the civil liberties of opponents and critics. [6] Robert R. Kaufman and Stephan Haggard contend that Trump deepened America's political polarization and tribalism, though he was limited by institutional safeguards. [7] According to Michael W. Bauer, Stefan Becker, and Charles T. Goodsell, Trump sabotaged the administrative state by delaying 1,200 political appointments, politicizing vital departments, nominating heads of the EPA and CFPB who openly opposed their agencies' mission, issuing new policies without consulting his cabinet, and attacking the independence of the Federal Reserve and the intelligence community. [8] [9] Roberto Foa and Yascha Mounk argue that Trump's tacit or active endorsement of vigilante groups may "prove to be his most damaging legacy", marking America's shift into a "dirty democracy" where "tit-for-tat partisan norm-breaking" is normalized. [10]
DFlhb ( talk) 20:10, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
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So Trump is an autocrat, but he was voted out of office, and his attempts to overturn the results were unsuccessful. I oppose adding a democratic backsliding section - there’s a Democratic backsliding in the United States article. Quoting one of the cited sources (Carey, Helmke, et al): "It is too early to say whether the long-term quality of democracy in the United States will suffer." It’s too early to assess whether and, if so, how much of this belongs in Trump’s personal bio - there are others involved, from the Federalist Society, McConnell’s Republican-majority Senate, the deep pockets of the Kochs, Mercers, Thiel, to Fox News. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:28, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
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I would like to share my perspective on how Donald Trump's presidency is depicted in this Wikipedia article. While Trump's presidency had very many undeniably significant flaws, I believe that his accomplishments should be given fair consideration in this article. It's worth noting that Joe Biden's Wikipedia page highlights his achievements prominently in the first paragraphs, but Trump's article provides little to no attention to his accomplishments. I believe that it is important to provide a balanced representation of Trump's record by acknowledging his few successes as president and not just his failures. F!reFlyer ( talk) 11:06, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
selected, overseen, supported and approved by the president. soibangla ( talk) 15:20, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
selected, overseen, supported and approvedeveryone is reminiscent of his false claim he personally selected every instructor for Trump University. It's hagiography. soibangla ( talk) 16:23, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
Actually he later canceled the invitation to the Taliban. The Capitalist forever ( talk) 21:31, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
That’s the neat part. Trump doesn’t have presidential accomplishments. 67.85.103.120 ( talk) 16:21, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
@ F!reFlyer: I totally agree with you. I think this article needs to put some of Trump's accomplishments from this in the article. Here it is: [1] This article does raise some NPOV concerns when compared to other president articles. The Capitalist forever ( talk) 21:21, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
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Regardless of it being an opinion or not, do you deny that some of those things are good things Trump did as president? It is quite sad that almost nothing good is said about him and whenever their is something good, it is downplayed. The Capitalist forever ( talk) 18:03, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
welcome to suggest policy-based improvements, backed up by reliable sources. So far, Firefly hasn't responded. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 18:43, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
@ ValarianB: You do realize Democratic sources will slander Trump. If Right-wing news outlets were used, this article would be different. But then I keep forgetting that the Wall Street Journal is the only right-wing source approved for politics so there isn't much of a choice since that Journal isn't used that much in this article. Also, based on some research on how many Democrats or Republicans edit Wikipedia, 1.5× more Democrats edit Wikipedia than Republicans. The Capitalist forever ( talk) 21:19, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
You do realize Democratic sources will slander Trump. This is an absurd generalization. Provide a list of successful slander suits against WP:RS. O3000, Ret. ( talk) 21:24, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
They have an article on it at the NY Post and other places, but since those places aren't deemed "reliable", I won't bother the links. I think no news outlet is willing to point out it own faults whether it's "right or left". The Capitalist forever ( talk) 21:43, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
@ Zaathras: Well, when I looked at the list, the only Right-wing site that had reliable for everything is Wall Street Journal. That's just all I'm saying.
@ F!reFlyer: - repinging F!reFlyer. FYI - the ping won't work unless a new signature is added in the same edit as the ping. The oringinal ping misspelled the user's name, and the edit that fixed the spelling did not include a new signature. This edit should work to ping them. ~ ONUnicorn( Talk| Contribs) problem solving 19:06, 11 May 2023 (UTC) - at least, it would have if I hadn't spelled "ping" as "pnig". This one should work. ~ ONUnicorn( Talk| Contribs) problem solving 19:08, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
pats on the back all-around, because once again we have allowed someone ("F!reFlyer", a 2-post user), egged on by a regular or two, to stir the pot and run away. and the aftermath is just another stupid back-and-forth about a generically vague "why aren't we praising him enough".
no concrete proposals. no specific examples. Just arguing. Close this as "going nowhere", please." ValarianB ( talk) 19:08, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
There are four spacific [sic] events from his presidency that I think need coverage in this article.F!reFlyer goes on to list them. I think we should leave this open and let the discussion die down, as is common practice elsewhere. Cessaune [talk] 01:37, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
Mandruss, I'm directly challenging this revert. Rough consensus is an unnecessary sub-characterization of consensus, especially given the fact that no other consensus item contains anything of the sort. Even more especially since Space4T literally talks about this specific consensus on their user page (one which went against the opinion they !voted for in the lead-linking RfC, the opinion Space4T has advocated for for a while now) and is the editor who decided to include the rough consensus characterization initially. It's a completely fair characterization, no doubt, but one that has no real reason to exist, which is why it shouldn't. Cessaune [talk] 08:59, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
The initial version of item 60:A rough consensus has emerged to implement Option 1, which is to insert the 10-ish links described in the proposal. While Option 2 had substantial support, especially among later commenters, many suggested Option 1 as an alternative in case Option 2 failed to gain enough support. While proponents of Option 3 (de-linking) widely mentioned SEAOFBLUE, a rough consensus of editors have argued that, as paraphrased from Rhododendrites' comments, this is a wiki, and that links are what make Wikipedia unique among reference sources.
There is a consensus to include a reasonable number of links in the lead, especially for specific items such as the Iran nuclear deal and the Trans-Pacific Partnership.My version:
There is a rough consensus to insert the links described in the RfC January 2023. Current version:
Insert the links described in the RfC January 2023. (Rough consensus)It was a badly formulated RfC, and editors responded with opinions such as "Links are what makes Wikipedia stand out among reference works" (little-known reference works such as Britannica also use them, but meh). I think we should keep the qualifier. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:04, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
I rewrote the Response to claims of bias page:
User:Cessaune/Trump/Response to claims of bias
What do y'all think? Cessaune [talk] 20:09, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
Previous added major information to the article with multiple sources, which @ Space4Time3Continuum2x: removed and gave some commentary on.
As this is a Wikipedia article covering the topic of Donald Trump, and Wikipedia is not WP:CENSORED, all of the information is clearly critical and notable. Donald Trump article is not just a biography, but is also an encyclopedic article about a figure in world history. Further all the content relates biographically to Donald Trump and is cited to reliable sources (RS).
The following two passages were removed together.
By 2012, the Industrial and Commercial Bank of China was Trump Tower's largest office tenant. [1]
According to Forbes staff, by October 2020, Trump had received approximately $5.4 million from the China state-owned bank ICBC through its $1.9 million annual rent in Trump Tower. [2] Trump also maintained a Chinese bank account until 2018 which became a 2020 campaign issue. [3] [4] It was revealed that in 2016 and 2017, he paid more taxes to China ($188,561) than to the United States ($750). [3]
Mention and cites at Trump_Tower#Commercial_tenants. The bank has been a tenant at Trump Tower (not Trump Building) since 2008 and downsized its space in 2019. Conflict of interest/emoluments: moot after Trump’s term had ended, per SC decision.
This third passage was also removed.
Trump registered a new company in February 2021. Trump Media & Technology Group (TMTG) was formed for providing "social networking services" to "customers in the United States". [5] [6] In October 2021, Trump announced the planned merger of TMTG with Digital World Acquisition, [7] a special-purpose acquisition company (SPAC). A main backer of the SPAC is China-based financier ARC Group, who was reportedly involved in setting up the proposed merger. The transaction is under investigation by the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. [8] [9] Shanghai-based ARC also offered $2 million to get Digital World Acquisition off the ground. [10] The CEO of Digital World Acquisition, hired from Wuhan-based operation Yunhong Holdings, [11] [10] [12] [13] broke ties with China in December 2021. [14]
Moved newly added content to the umbrella brand, Trump Organization. Too much detail in Chinese company & personnel for top bio.
In summary, the above passages are major content to include on the Donald Trump article and both biographically important cited to reliable sources and also encyclopedically important in world history.
Thanks for reading. Feel free to comment below -- Rauisuchian ( talk) 20:56, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
The Chinese bank rented the offices in 2008, and they were only the third-largest tenant after Gucci and the Trump Organization. In 2008, Trump was a reality TV celebrity, and I doubt the bank had a clairvoyant on its payroll who predicted Trump's 2015 presidential announcement. Emoluments: why did the bank downsize its Trump Tower office in 2019 when he was in office and the tower had plenty of vacant space? Conflicts of interest: tenants tend to pay rent, unless your Clarence Thomas's mother and Harlan Crow is your landlord. The Forbes article doesn't say whether the rent was high, low, or average for a NY 5th Ave. location. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 11:43, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
Clarifying: you're proposing to add Shanghai-based ARC also offered $2 million to get Digital World Acquisition off the ground.[10] The CEO of Digital World Acquisition, hired from Wuhan-based operation Yunhong Holdings,[11][10][12][13] broke ties with China in December 2021.[14]
Too much detail for this top bio. The first four sentences of the paragraph are in the article. You mention additional info that RS's like Reuters and The Guardian discovered in 2023
. What are you talking about? The Reuters article you cite is dated February 10, 2022, and your sources don't include a Guardian article.
Space4Time3Continuum2x
(talk) 11:30, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
I found the Guardian article, at Truth_Social#Russian_finance, which is where the mention belongs, for now. "According to [Guardian] sources familiar with the matter", NY prosecutors are investigating Trump Media for money laundering. The article mentions then-Trump Media CFO Philip Juhan, Trump Jr., and a few others, no mention of Trump. Until we know whether anything comes of this WP:NOTNEWS applies. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:07, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
Given there's a whole article (based on almost 70 reliable sources) and category, it looks like the majority of editors involved don't consider this redundant, that there is precedent for mentioning this, and that this forms a significant part of Trump's notability and impact on politics and public discourse (including before, during, and after his presidency), therefore meeting WP:SUSTAINED.
To name but two, his involvement as the figurehead of the birther movement is often described as the harbinger of his presidency and now going into the next election reports indicate roughly 70% of Republicans believe Trump's big lie. GhulamIslam ( talk) 14:20, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
Trump is microphone, willing to amplify whatever his supporters views are & possibly what some independents' views are. That's the premise that I'm seeing, but I'll go along with whatever write up, the rest of you can work out. GoodDay ( talk) 15:29, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
Trump has promoted conspiracy theories...more prominence or weight. Doing so would put the lead out of a rough chronological order and I reject the notion that his pre-political career is not important (see the reasons by DFlhb). Iamreallygoodatcheckers talk 15:00, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
I propose changing the lead sentence to "Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, businessman, and conspiracy theorist [1] who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021."
According to the Collins English Dictionary, a conspiracy theorist is
"someone who believes in or spreads conspiracy theories". As I've said before, if appropriately substantiated by extensive reliable sources, such a term may be included in the lead paragraph to describe Donald Trump without running afoul of WP:BLP. It's a description widely used by unbiased reliable sources both academic and journalistic.
Trump is beyond a WP:PUBLICFIGURE so there is a huge exception to the usual care taken to be careful to avoid negative info in BLPs. "In the case of public figures, there will be a multitude of reliable published sources, and BLPs should simply document what these sources say. If an allegation or incident is noteworthy, relevant, and well documented, it belongs in the article—even if it is negative and the subject dislikes all mention of it."
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Trump is beyond a WP:PUBLICFIGURE so there is a huge exception to the usual care taken to be careful to avoid negative info in BLPs—since he's an active, extremely prominent politician, not only in America but to a limited extent worldwide, I would err very far on the side of caution. There is no real benefit to characterizing Trump as a conspiracy theorist in my mind (we have a page devoted to the conpiracy theories he has promoted, so if people want to, they can still find the relevant info), and as I see it, the potential negatives are so much greater than any potential benefit.
I propose changing the lead sentence to "Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, businessman, and conspiracy theorist who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021."I'm confused. Cessaune [talk] 01:40, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
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Just an aside, why isn't the term conspiracy theory used to describe the claim that Trump secretly conspired with Russia to win the 2016 election and that Trump conspired secretly with law enforcement officials to clear protesters near the White House for a church photo op? Both were later debunked by official government investigations. Bob K31416 ( talk) 15:06, 9 May 2023 (UTC) |
Can this section be updated? All the info is now out-of-date. Prisoner of Zenda ( talk) 09:39, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
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After a discussion with Bob K31416 (permalink), I would like to try for a consensus on what I believe is the best way to handle bias complaints at this article. There were discussions about this a couple of years ago, but no explicit consensus. I figured the benefits were obvious enough that it would just "catch on", but I was apparently mistaken.
The key elements of this method are:
The method is as follows:
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/bot.If we can reach a consensus on this, I will create a new item in the consensus list. If not, I will drop the issue and abandon the method. ― Mandruss ☎ 22:36, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
Any user, including you.... But in all my years at this article I have yet to see a single one of these readers come back with the requisite suggestion for
a specific, policy-based improvement. They simply don't care to dig into the policy enough to know what "policy-based" means, exactly (nor would I, probably). That suggests that your suggestion would merely add unnecessary complication to the process. ― Mandruss ☎ 00:17, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
we need to give the visitor enough time to return to read the reply to their query. To not give a user that time at all isn't fair, regardless of whether or not the editor
simply [doesn't] care to dig into the policy enough to know what "policy-based" means. I went and looked through policies, when I made my first edits here, so when you say
I have yet to see a single one of these readers come back with the requisite suggestion for a specific, policy-based improvement—I tried to in the past, and continue to try to now. I definitely know I wouldn't be a Wikipedia editor at all if someone had shut down my first Trump talk page contribution without even giving me a chance to reply.
specific, policy-based improvements that we speak of, which was the whole point of my edits, and should be the whole point of the bias page. Our words should also reflect that when pointing the editor towards the bias page. Cessaune [talk] 00:36, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
It's not ultimately that disruptive to keep a discussion open for 24 hoursNot so much disruptive as a waste of time. Basically we're spending our time educating readers about Wikipedia policy, when the policy is already written down for them to read if they're interested (and they aren't, as I said). We're here to work on this article, not to educate readers who have no interest in being educated. Our responsibility ends after we point them to the policy pages.
as SPECIFICO says above, we need to give the visitor enough time to return to read the reply to their query. Exactly right, and this method gives them 24 hours to read the reply. If that wasn't considered enough time, consensus 13 wouldn't read as it does.Your proposed changes to the response page are a separate and independent issue. ― Mandruss ☎ 00:48, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
Basically we're spending our time educating readers about Wikipedia policy, when the policy is already written down for them to read if they're interested—I'm only suggesting two sentences or so. It wouldn't be that big of a deal. Cessaune [talk] 01:07, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
I would like it if we articulated that they are not only welcome to try again, but that we encourage them to try again.By all means, feel free to change "welcome to" to "encouraged to" on the response page. The whole point is that anything that needs to be said can be said on that page, and the thread itself should be kept to little more than is required to point them to it. In the example above, I added just a little extra just because that's how I roll. It wouldn't be a requirement under my method. Otherwise, I still think your extra steps add unnecessary complication, but that consensus would be better than none. ― Mandruss ☎ 03:04, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
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/bot, the latter being more common at that time than it is these days at this article. Collapse is not closure, but it was being used that way a lot.The argument for 24 hours is that it's ample time for the OP to read the reply, if the OP is interested in reading it. (It's 24 hours after the close, not 24 hours after the opening comment, just to be clear.) It's a concession being asked of the editors who would prefer to shoot on sight, without acknowledgement or reply, as we saw the other day. Maybe you could meet them halfway.It is not unimportant that item 13 has gone unchanged since Nov 2019 without a challenge. ―
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☎ 20:50, 30 April 2023 (UTC)I think we can mostly agree, that it can be a tricky situation to handle. We must take caution, not to be seen as 'anti-Trump', when shutting down discussions. GoodDay ( talk) 00:30, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
Freedom of discussion applies to anyone, not just Wikipedia editors, otherwise there would be no Wikipedia editors.So Wikipedia editors become editors so they can engage in discussions with non-editing readers? I was not aware of that. Are they trying to educate the population about Wikipedia policies? If not, they're violating WP:NOTFORUM. And neither is good.
pretense that discussion may be pointless and may waste editor timeSorry, no. The history of this article could not possibly be clearer: It is pointless and does waste editor time. No reader bias complaint has ever resulted in a change to the article. If that's not a waste of time, I don't know what is. If an editor sees the bias complaint and it stimulates him or her to think of a "specific, policy-based" suggestion, no problem — he or she may start a new thread about it. There's no benefit to doing it in the complaint thread.
Everyone deserves at least a chance to back up their statements, editor or not.I won't argue that point, but we are not denying them that chance. We are merely asking them to do it in a new thread, this time "specific, policy-based". The time required to start a new thread will be insignificant compared to the time required to read the policy and even attempt to put together something "specific, policy-based". As I've said previously, we have yet to see a complaining reader come back with something "specific, policy-based". The history of this article could not possibly be clearer: They have nothing further to say. But if they do, they may — within policy. ― Mandruss ☎ 04:20, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
We are merely asking them to do it in a new thread—my belief is that asking them to start a new thread with a new question has the effect, unintended or not, to stifle discussion completely.
Everyone deserves at least a chance to back up their statements, editor or not.In the same thread, I might add. While the closing of one thread and the opening of another might seem trivial to one who understands that the implications of doing so are next to nothing, it is not the same to a good faith user who doesn't understand it. Instantly shutting down their good faith opinions (because that's how closing is perceived when you aren't an established editor) disincentivizes new good faith and policy-based opinions.
If they want to become Wikipedia editors, they are welcome to come on board—becoming an editor is, at least in my limited experince, a gradual process that requires failure. To become an editor by saying "hey, I want to edit, time to read up on the rules to figure out what I should and shouldn't do"—that almost delves into a Citizendium or Nupedia-type formality, one that Wikipedia is directly against. This is why I believe it's important to actually help people instead of telling people to do stuff, and then claiming that we tried to help but they were unwilling to listen, when, in reality, we didn't really try to help at all. Cessaune [talk] 07:50, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
I understand that a lot of people are averse to organization—can you clarify the meaning of this? Thanks. Cessaune [talk] 08:26, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
[Bob's] reversions are almost exclusively focused on Specificois a true statement, but a statement that misses the bigger picture. Cessaune [talk] 16:44, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
The real problem (the monkey hiding under the bed, the lizard in the closet, etc.) is WP editors who pile on and use such inquiries -- good faith or not, well-formulated or not, specific or vague -- as an opportunity for a late-night college dorm debate. Once a reply has been given, WP editors need to step back and not continue to reply to OP, at least until OP has responded with some new addition. So I suggest, when we respond the first responder should use the green checkmark to show the issue has been addressed. And everyone else needs to start a new thread if they are inspired to share their thoughts. SPECIFICO talk 12:45, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
What about unspecific bias complaints from anti-Trumpers? These complaints are less common than the other kind, but they do occur and should not be given greater consideration merely because they are anti-Trump. To prevent them from being given greater consideration, they need to be covered by any consensus arising from this discussion.
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the response page applies equally whether they are pro- or anti-Trump. The last sentence of the second paragraph does not: Since reliable sources are widely critical of Trump, this article must reflect that.
Should there be a separate response page for the anti-Trumpers, or will the existing one suffice — possibly with a slightly different reply in the thread? Or, should the existing response page be modified so that it works equally well for both camps? ― Mandruss ☎ 23:31, 5 May 2023 (UTC)
Can I close this and revert to status quo? Cessaune [talk] 01:24, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
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Examples of what I would call bad faith complaints that don't deserve a reply (actually snippets therefrom):
Unfortunately, there is no practical way to codify this in a consensus item. This means there would forever be disagreements about whether a given complaint is in good faith or bad faith. To a very significant degree, this would defeat the goals of the consensus to eliminate disruption and save editor time. I'm thinking it would be preferable to give undeserved replies, handling good-faith and bad-faith complaints the same way. This would be the lesser of two evils. I understand the aversion to giving such people anything but the online equivalent of a good punch in the gut, but that aversion is emotion-based and we should try to emulate Mister Spock. If they leave with the impression that they have our respect, so what? No skin off my back. ― Mandruss ☎ 09:16, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
The discussion has been open for 25 days and has been quiet for 15 days (22 days if you count only the first two subsections). The time for new ideas and back-and-forth debate is past, and I'm calling for a !vote. I recommend and request that you read the discussion before !voting here; it is not overly long, and I believe it has a relatively high signal-to-noise ratio.
The discussion yielded three alternative methods, with none of them receiving significantly more support than the others. If you prefer some other solution or approach, you have missed your opportunity to argue for it. Please participate in discussions of topics you care about.
If you can't support any of the options 1 through 3, please !vote 0.
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If you prefer some other solution or approach, you have missed your opportunity to argue for it.? Says who? Or, perhaps more accurately, says what policy? I understand the desire to streamline discussions, but as far as I'm concerned that kind of forced restriction might invalidate any consensus that's reached here. It appears to me that no consensus that emerged above, so now the solution is, evidently, to restrict the options, but, having reviewed that prior discussion, even the possibility of restriction wasn't discussed in advance. (And keep in mind that, though RFC's are generally preceded by RFCBEFOREs, there's no policy that says a user can't respond to an RFC with an alternative suggestion.)Second, I assume this approach would only apply to generic claims of bias. But, with the instant-close approach, what's the review process? If the OP disagrees with the closing editor, would the OP be allowed to revert the close and explain why? If so, would the same editor that first closed the discussion be allowed to claim, "Well my opinion counts for more than yours" and re-close the discussion? (A Wikipedia:Equality issue?) Or would a third-party editor have to agree? And, of course, if the OP isn't allowed to revert ... don't you still have the issue of the closing editor being allowed to claim "my opinion matters more" by concluding the OP's complaint is meritless and too generic, and not even allowing the OP to respond? Perhaps, as an alternative to reverting, the OP would be expected to modify a closed section ... or maybe visit the user talk pages of other editors and ask them to revert the closing editor? As I see it, there are way too many unanswered questions here.-- Jerome Frank Disciple 15:32, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
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Just want to edit the wording on the article. Is very biased and against Donald Trump, I want to make it with absolute facts as there are some lines which have no evidence or articles to back up such as where the article states he was racist and homophobic. Along with that it says "Trump claimed the election is rigged but is false." Again biased, as there is indeed evidence of deceased people somehow voting in the election. I don't want to make it "Pro-trump" by any means, just neutral since the article is clearly biased against Trump. Ruckers7 ( talk) 22:29, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
Hello! I'm not sure precisely where to place the content, but it seems to me that, though cited to different articles, this page repeats Forbes's estimates of Trump's wealth in the wealth section. Now, arguably, the first comment is more of a mini-lead, especially because the second mention gets more detail, but given how short the section is, overall, I think it might be worth it to only include the estimates once. First reference:
Records released by the FEC showed at least $1.4 billion in assets and $265 million in liabilities. Forbes estimated his net worth at $4.5 billion in 2015 and $3.1 billion in 2018.
The latter is cited to this Business Insider article.
Forbes estimated in October 2018 that his net worth declined from $4.5 billion in 2015 to $3.1 billion in 2017 and his product licensing income from $23 million to $3 million.
This sentence is cited to this Forbes article.
Just in case it concerns someone else: The identity of the dollar figures but variance in years here concerned me, though, upon further investigation ... I think it's okay? The second source (the Forbes article) was written in October 2018 and says:
His net worth, by our calculation, has dropped from $4.5 billion in 2015 to $3.1 billion the last two years, ....
I think the product-licensing info should be included, but I was wondering if anyone had thoughts about only including these numbers once. If we are using the first paragraph as a preview of the biggest points, we could perhaps phrase it differently? I.e. "Forbes estimated his net worth dropped by $1.4 billion between 2015 and 2018.
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Jerome Frank Disciple 18:40, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
Hello! At this point, I'm fairly used to @ SPECIFICO: reverting me with a generic edit summary and then not following up when I post here, but I'd like more input on this revert, where, amongst other moves, SPECIFICO added back an uncited claim.-- Jerome Frank Disciple 15:25, 15 May 2023 (UTC)