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Sounds like an advertisement

I added the {{ advert}} template the other day, the first line of which says, "This article contains content that is written like an advertisement." User:Sampol327 removed the template without making any changes to the article, stating in the edit summary, "Removed advert template as this issue appears to be resolved." This edit summary appears despite no changes having been made to the article itself since the time I added the template. Here's the problem with this article: 5-10 sentences in it sound like advertising copy and/or contain Wikipedia:Weasel words. One example is the article's third sentence, which says, "His family foundation, Tusk Philanthropies, is leading the effort to bring mobile voting to the United States." The problem with this sentence is the phrase "leading the effort". That phraseology is intended to cast a positive glow. It's not an encyclopedic way of writing. It also is not substantiated by the linked source. And, even if it were substantiated by the linked source, we would normally want multiple reliable sources to establish the notability of a claim like that. Instead of adding the template, I could just whip through the article and remove all the (5-10) sentences that are like that. Novellasyes ( talk) 18:43, 8 February 2021 (UTC) reply

COI tag (November 2021)

Nothing proven, but see Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Mbc16 for some background on this. Whilst there probably won't be any action taken on sockpuppetry since it wasn't always overlapping or currently ongoing, the admin did opine that it was likely that User:Mbc16, User:Sampol327, User:Bb510c1 and User:Pvt928c were the same person. Mako001 ( talk) 00:51, 3 November 2021 (UTC) reply

"Deputy governor" ?

Anybody know what exactly the title "deputy governor" means in Illinois? I searched and couldn't really find anything official or authoritative to even prove that the office exists. Is it merely honorific? While there are plenty of sources backing up Tusk's position as "deputy governor," it certainly is not the same as the Lieutenant Governor of Illinois. Any help here would be appreciated. - Headphase ( talk) 03:26, 31 December 2021 (UTC) reply

COI addition requests

I have a few proposed additions to make in this article. I used the "edit COI" template due to my employment with Bradley Tusk.

  • Add "FanDuel" to a list of companies in this sentence in the Tusk Strategies subsection: The firm develops and runs campaigns for companies, including Comcast, Google, Walmart, AT&T, Pepsi, FanDuel... [1]
no Declined @ BasilAtTusk: I don't see Comcast in the article. Also, the URL is giving an application error. Please revise and/or resource. STEMinfo ( talk) 00:23, 23 September 2023 (UTC) reply
  • Add to the "Published works" section: Tusk is authoring a novel called "Obvious in Hindsight" that he called "slightly absurdist take" on his career working with Uber. The novel is about a campaign to legalize flying cars. [2]
no Declined See WP:CRYSTALBALL Is there a source that says the book was published? STEMinfo ( talk) 00:23, 23 September 2023 (UTC) reply
  • Add to the "Published works" section: Tusk also opened a bookstore on the Lower East Side called P&T Knitwear. [2] In addition to being a bookstore, P&T Knitwear also has a podcast studio and an 80-seat amphitheater. [3]
    • I suggest adding information on the bookstore to the "Published Works" section since this section deals with literature. However, editors may decide it fits better in the "Private sector" section; that's fine with me, too.
 Done Content matches source. Placed in private sector section. STEMinfo ( talk) 00:28, 23 September 2023 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ "Silicon Valley's favorite fixer: Bradley Tusk". TechCrunch. Retrieved 2020-08-10.
  2. ^ a b Barron, James (24 April 2023). "Writers Are Rewarded for Their Books About New York". The New York Times. Retrieved 26 July 2023.
  3. ^ Marcus, Ezra (11 August 2022). "The Independent Bookstore, as Imagined by a Corporate Lobbyist". The New York Times. Retrieved 26 July 2023.

If there are any questions, please feel free to message me. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 23:31, 22 September 2023 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review, STEMinfo. I reviewed the rules about "crystal ball" so I will wait to suggest this again for when the book comes out next month.
I would like to make this amended request :
  • Remove "Comcast" and add "FanDuel" to a list of companies in the first half of a sentence in the Tusk Strategies subsection: The firm develops and runs campaigns for companies, including Google, Walmart, AT&T, Pepsi, FanDuel... [1] [2]
 Done Content matches sources. STEMinfo ( talk) 20:43, 13 October 2023 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ "Silicon Valley's favorite fixer: Bradley Tusk". TechCrunch. Retrieved 2020-08-10.
  2. ^ Clancy, Heather; Lashinsky, Adam. "Data Sheet—Friday, February 10, 2017". Fortune. No. 10 February 2017. Archived from the original on 31 January 2023. Retrieved 3 October 2023.
Additionally, thank you for adding information on P&T Knitwear. I noticed in your addition, there seems to be a typo. The bookstore opened in 2022, not 2018. The New York Times source, which was published in 2023, says, "Last year, Tusk opened a bookstore…" Would you mind changing 2018 to 2022?
 Done Content matches sources. STEMinfo ( talk) 20:43, 13 October 2023 (UTC) reply
If more adjustments are needed, please let me know. Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 01:27, 12 October 2023 (UTC) reply
STEMinfo: Thank you for these updates. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 20:42, 20 October 2023 (UTC) reply

Private Sector section proposed updated

Hi, Basil at Tusk here again with a few more proposed additions to make in this article. I used the "edit COI" template due to my employment with Bradley Tusk.

The proposed edits I have are in the current "Private sector" section. These changes include things like:

  • Added "He formed IG Acquisition Corp, [1] [2] a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries. [3]"
  • Added the word "Partners" to the first sentence of "Tusk Ventures" subsection for accuracy.
  • Removed some broken wikilinks and inaccuracies in the list of startups in the "Tusk Ventures" subsection.
  • Removing the "Ivory Gaming Group" subsection due to out of date information

Here is the draft:

Private sector
After serving as Deputy Governor of Illinois, Tusk was hired as a senior vice president at Lehman Brothers, where he created the lottery monetization group and headed all of its efforts regarding U.S. based lotteries. [4] Combining his backgrounds in finance and politics, Tusk developed a successful framework to help states monetize their lotteries. [5]

In 2015, Tusk ran a public affairs campaign for Uber that included television, radio, and digital ads as well as direct mail and grassroots organizing in opposition to a cap on rideshare vehicles proposed by New York City Mayor Bill de Blasio. [6] The campaign argued that "the company was good for the city, providing jobs and transportation for less affluent residents in the outer boroughs." [7] The bill was dropped before it reached a vote. [8] After the campaign's success in New York City, Tusk moved onto other places like Boston, Philadelphia, Chicago, Miami, Los Angeles, Denver and Washington D.C. [9] For his representation of Uber, Tusk was compensated with equity in the company estimated to be worth $100 million. [10] The experience also provided him with exposure to the world of venture capital, [11] and Tusk Ventures was launched two weeks after the New York City victory. [12]

He formed IG Acquisition Corp, [13] [14] a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries. [15]

Tusk Strategies
In 2011 Tusk founded Tusk Strategies, which is the first firm dedicated to helping startups navigate political issues and is based in New York City. [16] The firm develops and runs campaigns for companies, including Google, Walmart, AT&T, Pepsi, FanDuel, [17] and institutions including Stanford University, the Rockefeller Foundation and Texas A&M, and individuals including Michael Bloomberg and George Lucas. [18]

Tusk Strategies also conducts issue advocacy campaigns around education reform and government; campaigns to help political candidates, non-profits and trade associations. [19]

Tusk Ventures
In 2015, Tusk launched Tusk Ventures Partners, a venture capital fund that invests in startups facing political and regulatory challenges or pursuing political and governmental opportunities. His work with startups began in 2011, when he worked with transportation startup Uber, which was contesting with regulation proposed by the Taxi and Limousine Commission (CE) of New York City. [20]

Tusk Ventures has worked with over three dozen startups including Bird, FanDuel, Lemonade, Handy, Eaze, Nexar, Ripple, MainStreet, Nurx, Ro, Kodiak Robotics, and Care/Of, solving a variety of political, regulatory and media challenges solely in return for equity in each company and for investment rights in each company's next round of financing. [21] [22]

Tusk Venture Partners raised its first fund in 2016 and began deploying capital into startups including Lemonade, [23] Nexar, Care/Of, Circle, Coinbase, Bird, Ro and FanDuel. [24] [25]

References

  1. ^ Information, Kate Clark · 2020-09-08T22:02:35+00:00 · Source: The. "Briefing: Political Strategist and Tech Investor Bradley Tusk Forms SPAC". The Information. Retrieved 2020-11-18.{{ cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list ( link)
  2. ^ "Sponsor Team". IG Acquisition Corp. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  3. ^ "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION". www.sec.gov. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  4. ^ "Privatizing the Prize". The New York Times. Retrieved October 25, 2016.
  5. ^ "Bradley Tusk". Tpl.org. The Trust for Public Land. Retrieved July 30, 2015.
  6. ^ Flegenheimer, Matt (2015-07-22). "De Blasio Administration Dropping Plan for Uber Cap, for Now". The New York Times. ISSN  0362-4331. Retrieved 2017-03-30.
  7. ^ Kessler, Sarah (2016-10-24). "The Rise Of Bradley Tusk, Silicon Valley's Political Savior". Fast Company. Retrieved 2017-05-01.
  8. ^ Flegenheimer, Matt (2015-07-22). "De Blasio Administration Dropping Plan for Uber Cap, for Now". The New York Times. ISSN  0362-4331. Retrieved 2017-05-01.
  9. ^ Kessler, Sarah (2016-10-24). "The Rise Of Bradley Tusk, Silicon Valley's Political Savior". Fast Company. Retrieved 2017-05-30.
  10. ^ Rubinstein, Dana; Fitzsimmons, Emma (May 6, 2021). "The Wealthy Lobbyist Behind Andrew Yang's Campaign for Mayor". The New York Times. Retrieved 27 April 2024.
  11. ^ Grandoni, Dino (August 2, 2015). "Political Consultant for Uber to Advise Other Start-Ups". New York Times Bits Blog. Retrieved 2017-06-20.
  12. ^ Jorgensen, Jillian (2015-09-09). "How Bradley Tusk Is Helping Startups Like Uber Wage Campaign-Style War on City Hall". Observer. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  13. ^ Information, Kate Clark · 2020-09-08T22:02:35+00:00 · Source: The. "Briefing: Political Strategist and Tech Investor Bradley Tusk Forms SPAC". The Information. Retrieved 2020-11-18.{{ cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list ( link)
  14. ^ "Sponsor Team". IG Acquisition Corp. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  15. ^ "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION". www.sec.gov. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  16. ^ "Bradley Tusk | Chicago Ideas". www.chicagoideas.com. Retrieved 2022-01-26.
  17. ^ "Silicon Valley's favorite fixer: Bradley Tusk". TechCrunch. Retrieved 2020-08-10.
  18. ^ Loizos, Connie. "Silicon Valley's favorite fixer: Bradley Tusk". Retrieved 2017-05-29.
  19. ^ Gabriel, Trip; Medina, Jennifer (2010-05-09). "Hedge Funds' Leaders Rally for Charter Schools". The New York Times. ISSN  0362-4331. Retrieved 2017-05-29.
  20. ^ Grandoni, Dino (August 2, 2015). "Political Consultant for Uber to Advise Other Start-Ups". New York Times Bits Blog. Retrieved 2017-05-20.
  21. ^ Kessler, Sarah (2016-10-24). "The Rise Of Bradley Tusk, Silicon Valley's Political Savior". Fast Company. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  22. ^ "Tusk Ventures | Companies". tuskventures.com. Archived from the original on 2017-06-16. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  23. ^ Simpson, Andrew (2016-12-05). "Insurtech Lemonade Wins $34 Million in New Funding As It Readies for West Coast Expansion". Insurance Journal. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  24. ^ Loizos, Connie (April 4, 2017). "Tusk Ventures quietly held a first close on $25 million for its debut fund | TechCrunch". TechCrunch. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  25. ^ "Term Sheet -- Monday, December 17". Fortune. Retrieved 2019-03-11.

If there are any questions, please feel free to message me. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 18:29, 3 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Reply 3-NOV-2023

🔼  Clarification requested  

It's not clear what changes are requested to be made. You've placed a "draft" here on the talk page, but there are neither directions for any specific text's emplacement nor are any reasons provided for these changes. * To expedite your request, it would help if you could provide the following information:
  1. Please state each specific desired change and accompanying reference in the form of verbatim statements which can then be added to the article (if approved) by the reviewer.
  2. The exact location where the desired claims are to be placed should be given.
  3. Exact, verbatim descriptions of any text and/or references to be removed should also be given. [1]
  4. Reasons should be provided for each change. [2]
  • In the section of text below titled Sample edit request, the four required items are shown as an example:
Sample edit request

1. Please remove the third sentence from the second paragraph of the Sun section:

"The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 25 miles in length."


2. Please add the following claim as the third sentence of the second paragraph of the Sun section:

"The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 864,337 miles in length."


3. Using as the reference:

Prisha Harinath (2023). The Sun. Academic Press. p. 1.


4. Reason for change being made:

"The previously given diameter was incorrect."
  • Kindly open a new edit request at your earliest convenience when ready to proceed with all four items from your request. Thank you!


Regards,  Spintendo  23:52, 3 November 2023 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: Describe the requested changes in detail. This includes the exact proposed wording of the new material, the exact proposed location for it, and an explicit description of any wording to be removed, including removal for any substitution.
  2. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: If the rationale for a change is not obvious (particularly for proposed deletions), explain.

Updated request

Thanks Spintendo for the suggestions. Here is my modified request:

  • Add as the last sentence to the "Private sector" subsection the following sentence: "He formed IG Acquisition Corp, [1] [2] a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries. [3]"
  • Information on this is not in the article and it is a part of Bradley Tusk's involvement in the private sector.
  • Add the word "Partners" to the first sentence of "Tusk Ventures" subsection. Example: "In 2015, Tusk launched Tusk Ventures Partners, a venture capital fund that invests in startups facing political and regulatory challenges or pursuing political and governmental opportunities."
  • This is being requested for accuracy. FYI: Here is another article that verifies the proper name. I don't think it needs to be cited in the live article, but I wanted to share it here so reviewing editors can verify the name.
  • Remove the following sentence: "Ivory Gaming Group was co-founded by Bradley Tusk and Christian Goode in 2015 to develop and manage casinos, including their day-to-day operations which include food and beverage services, marketing and media."
  • This is sourced to a press release
  • Remove the subheading "Ivory Gaming Group"
  • With the removal of the above sentence due to being sourced to a press release, this subsection would have nothing in it and thus should be removed.

References

  1. ^ Information, Kate Clark · 2020-09-08T22:02:35+00:00 · Source: The. "Briefing: Political Strategist and Tech Investor Bradley Tusk Forms SPAC". The Information. Retrieved 2020-11-18.{{ cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list ( link)
  2. ^ "Sponsor Team". IG Acquisition Corp. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  3. ^ "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION". www.sec.gov. Retrieved 2020-11-18.

I am happy to answer any questions. Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 16:50, 10 November 2023 (UTC) reply

I'm suspicious about the desire to get rid of Ivory. There are other sources- techcrunch: "Somewhat astoundingly, Tusk oversees three other outfits, too: a casino management company called Ivory Gaming Group (it owns one casino in Fresno)", observer.com ( 2): Tusk bio from an op-ed written by him, "the founder and CEO of ... the Ivory Gaming Group", nytimes "In 2018, his casino management company, then called Ivory Gaming, mounted a bid for a casino site in Las Vegas... Ivory Gaming ultimately spawned IG Acquisition Corp., a gambling concern that reportedly raised $300 million in the public markets to invest in the industry." tedder ( talk) 20:40, 10 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Reply 11-NOV-2023

✅  Edit request partially implemented  

  1. Red XN The information concerning the IG Acquisition Corp. was not added, because it was not clear what is meant by the phrase "a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries". Wikipedia does not usually speak about the future plans of subjects in their articles.
  2. Green tickY The word "Partners" was added.
  3. Red XN The claims concerning Ivory were not removed, per the additional sources provided by tedder above. The claim is well referenced.

Regards,  Spintendo  00:16, 12 November 2023 (UTC) reply


Reply to Spintendo

@ Spintendo: let me clarify as I may have misspoken previously. The info about IG Acquisition Corp is included in the introduction, but is not in the body of the article. The current sentence in the intro is exactly as I had proposed, "He is also the chairman of IG Acquisition Corp, [1] [2] a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries. [3]"

I originally proposed adding the sentence to Private sector because I thought the intro was supposed to be a summary of content found in the article. With that said, I think you're right. IG Acquisition Corp has ended and the sentence does include "future plans", so I'm now wondering if it's best to simply remove that sentence from the article's introduction. If you and others decide IG Acquisition Corp does belong in the article, it would be best to move it from the intro to the Private sector section. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 22:04, 16 November 2023 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ Information, Kate Clark · 2020-09-08T22:02:35+00:00 · Source: The. "Briefing: Political Strategist and Tech Investor Bradley Tusk Forms SPAC". The Information. Retrieved 2020-11-18.{{ cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list ( link)
  2. ^ "Sponsor Team". IG Acquisition Corp. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  3. ^ "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION". www.sec.gov. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
Thank you for the clarification. I omitted the claims about "planning" and thought perhaps moving it to the Private sector section, but as its mostly a description of a job title, it can stay in the lead. Regards,  Spintendo  00:58, 17 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Formatting fixes

Hello, in my continuing effort to make this page better for all, I wanted to ask if editors would consider removing the red links to "Nexar", "GlamSquad", and "MainStreet" under the "Tusk Ventures" subsection. Since articles for Nexar and MainStreet have been deleted, and it's not clear if GlamSquad is yet notable for a Wikipedia article, those red links can be removed per Wikipedia:Red link.

Please let me know if there are any questions, BasilAtTusk ( talk) 20:36, 30 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Approved  Spintendo  03:52, 1 December 2023 (UTC) reply

Infobox updates

Hi all, it's Basil for Bradley Tusk here again.

I noticed the article has some information that should be included in the Infobox too, specifically Tusk's alma mater. Would edits be willing to add in this information per the Infobox person template?

My specific request is that editors add to the infobox his alma maters University of Pennsylvania [1] [2] and University of Chicago Law School [3] [2]. Two of the sources I included here are already cited in the body of the article to verify this information and I have additionally added the WSJ source, which also verifies it.

Let me know if there are any questions.

References

  1. ^ "Paths in Public Service Featuring Bradley Tusk". Roosevelt House. Retrieved July 30, 2015.
  2. ^ a b Wolfe, Alexandra (31 August 2018). "How Bradley Tusk Went from Political Insider to 'Making Politicians Crazy'". Wall Street Journal. Retrieved 11 December 2023.
  3. ^ "Bradley Tusk '99: A Big Name in the Big Apple, and Beyond". The University of Chicago. Archived from the original on July 2, 2015. Retrieved July 30, 2015. Tusk...is widely credited with spearheading the administration's most notable successes, such as broadly expanding medical insurance for children, and for effectively overseeing a massive proportion of the state's operations, including its $60 billion budget and its 57,000-person workforce.

Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 20:23, 13 December 2023 (UTC) reply

✅  Edit request accepted   

Lewcm 
Talk to me! 23:16, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
reply

Illinois subsection

Thanks very much Lewcm for making those Infobox updates! I have another suggestion, this time to the Illinois subsection:

  • Change "In the position, Tusk failed to file required financial disclosure reports on at least three occasions" to "Tusk had not filed financial disclosure reports after the Secretary of State’s office failed to certify and inform him of the requirement to file."

This adds needed context to the situation that is covered in the reference cited in the article. Happy to review any questions you have! BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:55, 19 December 2023 (UTC) reply

Reply 16-JAN-2024

This change of phrasing (which has not been given a reason) obviously benefits the subject while not substantively changing the meaning. Without a bonafide reason why for the change, it cannot be made. [1]

References

  1. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: If the rationale for a change is not obvious (particularly for proposed deletions), explain.

Regards,  Spintendo  16:40, 16 January 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the reply, Spintendo. I appreciate your insight here. The reasoning behind this proposed edit is that the suggested update more fully represents the cited source material. The reason for the proposed change is that the Secretary of State's involvement is important context in this instance.

Thanks for the consideration BasilAtTusk ( talk) 18:28, 19 January 2024 (UTC) reply

 Not done: The source does not quite say what you read it to say. It expressly says later in the article that as an attorney and employee, he should have known about the disclosure requirements even without notification. voorts ( talk/ contributions) 21:05, 20 January 2024 (UTC) reply
Understood, thank you both for the insight, I will stop seeking this change now that I understand. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:21, 25 January 2024 (UTC) reply

Tusk Philanthropies section

Hello editors, I wanted to propose some updates to the current Tusk Philanthropies section. This includes:

  • Remove "The services Tusk has backed so far are based on blockchain technology, but he has stated that he is open to other technologies"
    • The editor who added this seems to be conflating different claims in this article and so this summation is incorrect. The article states that, Voatz is the platform to use blockchain but that Bradley Tusk is not an investor of that platform.
  • Add: Tusk Philanthropies announced a $10 million grant in 2021 for the development of internet-based voting. [1]
    • This would add an update to this topic that has not yet been added
  • Add as the last paragraph: Tusk founded Tusk Philanthropies' Solving Hunger, which supports school meal efforts. [2]
    • This would add more information on a topic that has not yet been added

References

  1. ^ Parks, Miles (September 30, 2021). "The Push For Internet Voting Continues, Mostly Thanks To One Guy". NPR. Retrieved 23 January 2024.
  2. ^ Wilkes, Mackenzie (2022-12-31). "States put free school meals on the menu". POLITICO. Retrieved 2023-05-19.

Please let me know if there are any questions. Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:22, 25 January 2024 (UTC) reply

 Partly done: I've added both sections you requested, removing that first sentence would make further sentences not make sense, so I've instead reworded it - removing the blockchain bit as requested - to instead reference internet voting. The services Tusk has backed so far are for development of internet-based voting.

Hope this is alright, if you have any other suggestions for this bit please let me know :) Thanks, Encoded Talk to me! 15:44, 7 February 2024 (UTC) reply

Encoded, these changes are great. Thanks for being so thorough and improving my suggestion! BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:40, 13 February 2024 (UTC) reply

New book by Tusk

Hello editors. I previously made a suggestion for this page which was denied by STEMinfo due to it being too "crystal ball"-y since the book I was suggesting be added was not yet published. Good news, the book has now been published! Since this no longer is a crystal ball scenario, I would like to re-request this addition:

  • Add to the "Published works" section: Tusk authored a novel called "Obvious in Hindsight" that he called a "slightly absurdist take" on his career working with Uber. The novel was published in 2023 and is about a campaign to legalize flying cars. [1] [2]

References

  1. ^ Barron, James (24 April 2023). "Writers Are Rewarded for Their Books About New York". The New York Times. Retrieved 26 July 2023.
  2. ^ Matthews, Jessica (November 10, 2023). "Flying cars and politics combine in new novel by Bradley Tusk—the venture capitalist who made a name for himself as Uber's political fixer". Fortune. Retrieved 12 February 2024. His second book, Obvious in Hindsight, which was released to a handful of independent bookstores this week and will be more broadly available later this month

I'm happy to answer any questions. Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:42, 13 February 2024 (UTC) reply

 Done ARandomName123 ( talk)Ping me! 16:38, 13 February 2024 (UTC) reply
Thank you! BasilAtTusk ( talk) 22:01, 14 February 2024 (UTC) reply

New York subsection

Hello editors, I have some proposed updates to the New York Subsection:

  • Change "After referring to Yang as an 'empty vessel' in a March interview, critics warned that 'Tusk could essentially be the shadow mayor for New York, while he is representing the interests of big corporate clients.' Tusk responded to the allegations, declaring 'if we win, I will not lobby or talk with the new mayor — nor anyone in a Yang administration — on any matter that intersects with our work' in a statement. After Yang lost by an unexpectedly wide margin, Yang's former advisers criticized Tusk Strategies for avoiding freewheeling press conferences that were a feature of his Presidential campaign." to "One critic said that Tusk could be a shadow mayor for New York. Tusk responded to the allegations, and said he would not lobby a Yang administration. [1]"
    • This language change will help make the article more neutral and relies less on direct quotations

References

  1. ^ Rubinstein, Dana; Fitzsimmons, Emma (May 6, 2021). "The Wealthy Lobbyist Behind Andrew Yang's Campaign for Mayor". The New York Times. Retrieved 27 April 2024.

Thanks for the review BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:40, 20 February 2024 (UTC) reply

Undisclosed payments tag

Hello editors,

Back in November 2022, a tag was added to this article saying "This article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments."

In recent months, I have been working with volunteer editors in cleaning up this article in a neutral way. If editors agree, I think it is time to reconsider whether this tag is needed anymore.

After some research, I found this tag was added due to a sockpuppet investigation of other editors that has since been closed. Since that time, this article has been updated significantly to be brought in line with Wikipedia's content rules. Because of this, I do not think this tag is necessary any longer and am suggesting that it be removed.

Thanks for the review. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 21:25, 20 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Introduction

Hello, I have a suggestion for the Introduction to have it better reflect recent changes made to this article:

  • Remove, "He is also the chairman of IG Acquisition Corp."
    • This is outdated and no longer accurate.
  • Remove, "is the host of the podcast Firewall,"
    • This is not notable enough for the introduction. The podcast is not even mentioned in the body of the article
  • Add, "Tusk owns P&T Knitwear, a bookstore with a podcast studio and an 80-seat amphitheater."
    • This information was recently added to the body of this article but not the introduction and it seems important enough to add to the introduction as it is one of the things he is notable for.

Thanks for your review BasilAtTusk ( talk) 21:25, 20 March 2024 (UTC) reply

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Sounds like an advertisement

I added the {{ advert}} template the other day, the first line of which says, "This article contains content that is written like an advertisement." User:Sampol327 removed the template without making any changes to the article, stating in the edit summary, "Removed advert template as this issue appears to be resolved." This edit summary appears despite no changes having been made to the article itself since the time I added the template. Here's the problem with this article: 5-10 sentences in it sound like advertising copy and/or contain Wikipedia:Weasel words. One example is the article's third sentence, which says, "His family foundation, Tusk Philanthropies, is leading the effort to bring mobile voting to the United States." The problem with this sentence is the phrase "leading the effort". That phraseology is intended to cast a positive glow. It's not an encyclopedic way of writing. It also is not substantiated by the linked source. And, even if it were substantiated by the linked source, we would normally want multiple reliable sources to establish the notability of a claim like that. Instead of adding the template, I could just whip through the article and remove all the (5-10) sentences that are like that. Novellasyes ( talk) 18:43, 8 February 2021 (UTC) reply

COI tag (November 2021)

Nothing proven, but see Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Mbc16 for some background on this. Whilst there probably won't be any action taken on sockpuppetry since it wasn't always overlapping or currently ongoing, the admin did opine that it was likely that User:Mbc16, User:Sampol327, User:Bb510c1 and User:Pvt928c were the same person. Mako001 ( talk) 00:51, 3 November 2021 (UTC) reply

"Deputy governor" ?

Anybody know what exactly the title "deputy governor" means in Illinois? I searched and couldn't really find anything official or authoritative to even prove that the office exists. Is it merely honorific? While there are plenty of sources backing up Tusk's position as "deputy governor," it certainly is not the same as the Lieutenant Governor of Illinois. Any help here would be appreciated. - Headphase ( talk) 03:26, 31 December 2021 (UTC) reply

COI addition requests

I have a few proposed additions to make in this article. I used the "edit COI" template due to my employment with Bradley Tusk.

  • Add "FanDuel" to a list of companies in this sentence in the Tusk Strategies subsection: The firm develops and runs campaigns for companies, including Comcast, Google, Walmart, AT&T, Pepsi, FanDuel... [1]
no Declined @ BasilAtTusk: I don't see Comcast in the article. Also, the URL is giving an application error. Please revise and/or resource. STEMinfo ( talk) 00:23, 23 September 2023 (UTC) reply
  • Add to the "Published works" section: Tusk is authoring a novel called "Obvious in Hindsight" that he called "slightly absurdist take" on his career working with Uber. The novel is about a campaign to legalize flying cars. [2]
no Declined See WP:CRYSTALBALL Is there a source that says the book was published? STEMinfo ( talk) 00:23, 23 September 2023 (UTC) reply
  • Add to the "Published works" section: Tusk also opened a bookstore on the Lower East Side called P&T Knitwear. [2] In addition to being a bookstore, P&T Knitwear also has a podcast studio and an 80-seat amphitheater. [3]
    • I suggest adding information on the bookstore to the "Published Works" section since this section deals with literature. However, editors may decide it fits better in the "Private sector" section; that's fine with me, too.
 Done Content matches source. Placed in private sector section. STEMinfo ( talk) 00:28, 23 September 2023 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ "Silicon Valley's favorite fixer: Bradley Tusk". TechCrunch. Retrieved 2020-08-10.
  2. ^ a b Barron, James (24 April 2023). "Writers Are Rewarded for Their Books About New York". The New York Times. Retrieved 26 July 2023.
  3. ^ Marcus, Ezra (11 August 2022). "The Independent Bookstore, as Imagined by a Corporate Lobbyist". The New York Times. Retrieved 26 July 2023.

If there are any questions, please feel free to message me. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 23:31, 22 September 2023 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review, STEMinfo. I reviewed the rules about "crystal ball" so I will wait to suggest this again for when the book comes out next month.
I would like to make this amended request :
  • Remove "Comcast" and add "FanDuel" to a list of companies in the first half of a sentence in the Tusk Strategies subsection: The firm develops and runs campaigns for companies, including Google, Walmart, AT&T, Pepsi, FanDuel... [1] [2]
 Done Content matches sources. STEMinfo ( talk) 20:43, 13 October 2023 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ "Silicon Valley's favorite fixer: Bradley Tusk". TechCrunch. Retrieved 2020-08-10.
  2. ^ Clancy, Heather; Lashinsky, Adam. "Data Sheet—Friday, February 10, 2017". Fortune. No. 10 February 2017. Archived from the original on 31 January 2023. Retrieved 3 October 2023.
Additionally, thank you for adding information on P&T Knitwear. I noticed in your addition, there seems to be a typo. The bookstore opened in 2022, not 2018. The New York Times source, which was published in 2023, says, "Last year, Tusk opened a bookstore…" Would you mind changing 2018 to 2022?
 Done Content matches sources. STEMinfo ( talk) 20:43, 13 October 2023 (UTC) reply
If more adjustments are needed, please let me know. Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 01:27, 12 October 2023 (UTC) reply
STEMinfo: Thank you for these updates. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 20:42, 20 October 2023 (UTC) reply

Private Sector section proposed updated

Hi, Basil at Tusk here again with a few more proposed additions to make in this article. I used the "edit COI" template due to my employment with Bradley Tusk.

The proposed edits I have are in the current "Private sector" section. These changes include things like:

  • Added "He formed IG Acquisition Corp, [1] [2] a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries. [3]"
  • Added the word "Partners" to the first sentence of "Tusk Ventures" subsection for accuracy.
  • Removed some broken wikilinks and inaccuracies in the list of startups in the "Tusk Ventures" subsection.
  • Removing the "Ivory Gaming Group" subsection due to out of date information

Here is the draft:

Private sector
After serving as Deputy Governor of Illinois, Tusk was hired as a senior vice president at Lehman Brothers, where he created the lottery monetization group and headed all of its efforts regarding U.S. based lotteries. [4] Combining his backgrounds in finance and politics, Tusk developed a successful framework to help states monetize their lotteries. [5]

In 2015, Tusk ran a public affairs campaign for Uber that included television, radio, and digital ads as well as direct mail and grassroots organizing in opposition to a cap on rideshare vehicles proposed by New York City Mayor Bill de Blasio. [6] The campaign argued that "the company was good for the city, providing jobs and transportation for less affluent residents in the outer boroughs." [7] The bill was dropped before it reached a vote. [8] After the campaign's success in New York City, Tusk moved onto other places like Boston, Philadelphia, Chicago, Miami, Los Angeles, Denver and Washington D.C. [9] For his representation of Uber, Tusk was compensated with equity in the company estimated to be worth $100 million. [10] The experience also provided him with exposure to the world of venture capital, [11] and Tusk Ventures was launched two weeks after the New York City victory. [12]

He formed IG Acquisition Corp, [13] [14] a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries. [15]

Tusk Strategies
In 2011 Tusk founded Tusk Strategies, which is the first firm dedicated to helping startups navigate political issues and is based in New York City. [16] The firm develops and runs campaigns for companies, including Google, Walmart, AT&T, Pepsi, FanDuel, [17] and institutions including Stanford University, the Rockefeller Foundation and Texas A&M, and individuals including Michael Bloomberg and George Lucas. [18]

Tusk Strategies also conducts issue advocacy campaigns around education reform and government; campaigns to help political candidates, non-profits and trade associations. [19]

Tusk Ventures
In 2015, Tusk launched Tusk Ventures Partners, a venture capital fund that invests in startups facing political and regulatory challenges or pursuing political and governmental opportunities. His work with startups began in 2011, when he worked with transportation startup Uber, which was contesting with regulation proposed by the Taxi and Limousine Commission (CE) of New York City. [20]

Tusk Ventures has worked with over three dozen startups including Bird, FanDuel, Lemonade, Handy, Eaze, Nexar, Ripple, MainStreet, Nurx, Ro, Kodiak Robotics, and Care/Of, solving a variety of political, regulatory and media challenges solely in return for equity in each company and for investment rights in each company's next round of financing. [21] [22]

Tusk Venture Partners raised its first fund in 2016 and began deploying capital into startups including Lemonade, [23] Nexar, Care/Of, Circle, Coinbase, Bird, Ro and FanDuel. [24] [25]

References

  1. ^ Information, Kate Clark · 2020-09-08T22:02:35+00:00 · Source: The. "Briefing: Political Strategist and Tech Investor Bradley Tusk Forms SPAC". The Information. Retrieved 2020-11-18.{{ cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list ( link)
  2. ^ "Sponsor Team". IG Acquisition Corp. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  3. ^ "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION". www.sec.gov. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  4. ^ "Privatizing the Prize". The New York Times. Retrieved October 25, 2016.
  5. ^ "Bradley Tusk". Tpl.org. The Trust for Public Land. Retrieved July 30, 2015.
  6. ^ Flegenheimer, Matt (2015-07-22). "De Blasio Administration Dropping Plan for Uber Cap, for Now". The New York Times. ISSN  0362-4331. Retrieved 2017-03-30.
  7. ^ Kessler, Sarah (2016-10-24). "The Rise Of Bradley Tusk, Silicon Valley's Political Savior". Fast Company. Retrieved 2017-05-01.
  8. ^ Flegenheimer, Matt (2015-07-22). "De Blasio Administration Dropping Plan for Uber Cap, for Now". The New York Times. ISSN  0362-4331. Retrieved 2017-05-01.
  9. ^ Kessler, Sarah (2016-10-24). "The Rise Of Bradley Tusk, Silicon Valley's Political Savior". Fast Company. Retrieved 2017-05-30.
  10. ^ Rubinstein, Dana; Fitzsimmons, Emma (May 6, 2021). "The Wealthy Lobbyist Behind Andrew Yang's Campaign for Mayor". The New York Times. Retrieved 27 April 2024.
  11. ^ Grandoni, Dino (August 2, 2015). "Political Consultant for Uber to Advise Other Start-Ups". New York Times Bits Blog. Retrieved 2017-06-20.
  12. ^ Jorgensen, Jillian (2015-09-09). "How Bradley Tusk Is Helping Startups Like Uber Wage Campaign-Style War on City Hall". Observer. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  13. ^ Information, Kate Clark · 2020-09-08T22:02:35+00:00 · Source: The. "Briefing: Political Strategist and Tech Investor Bradley Tusk Forms SPAC". The Information. Retrieved 2020-11-18.{{ cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list ( link)
  14. ^ "Sponsor Team". IG Acquisition Corp. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  15. ^ "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION". www.sec.gov. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  16. ^ "Bradley Tusk | Chicago Ideas". www.chicagoideas.com. Retrieved 2022-01-26.
  17. ^ "Silicon Valley's favorite fixer: Bradley Tusk". TechCrunch. Retrieved 2020-08-10.
  18. ^ Loizos, Connie. "Silicon Valley's favorite fixer: Bradley Tusk". Retrieved 2017-05-29.
  19. ^ Gabriel, Trip; Medina, Jennifer (2010-05-09). "Hedge Funds' Leaders Rally for Charter Schools". The New York Times. ISSN  0362-4331. Retrieved 2017-05-29.
  20. ^ Grandoni, Dino (August 2, 2015). "Political Consultant for Uber to Advise Other Start-Ups". New York Times Bits Blog. Retrieved 2017-05-20.
  21. ^ Kessler, Sarah (2016-10-24). "The Rise Of Bradley Tusk, Silicon Valley's Political Savior". Fast Company. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  22. ^ "Tusk Ventures | Companies". tuskventures.com. Archived from the original on 2017-06-16. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  23. ^ Simpson, Andrew (2016-12-05). "Insurtech Lemonade Wins $34 Million in New Funding As It Readies for West Coast Expansion". Insurance Journal. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  24. ^ Loizos, Connie (April 4, 2017). "Tusk Ventures quietly held a first close on $25 million for its debut fund | TechCrunch". TechCrunch. Retrieved 2017-05-31.
  25. ^ "Term Sheet -- Monday, December 17". Fortune. Retrieved 2019-03-11.

If there are any questions, please feel free to message me. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 18:29, 3 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Reply 3-NOV-2023

🔼  Clarification requested  

It's not clear what changes are requested to be made. You've placed a "draft" here on the talk page, but there are neither directions for any specific text's emplacement nor are any reasons provided for these changes. * To expedite your request, it would help if you could provide the following information:
  1. Please state each specific desired change and accompanying reference in the form of verbatim statements which can then be added to the article (if approved) by the reviewer.
  2. The exact location where the desired claims are to be placed should be given.
  3. Exact, verbatim descriptions of any text and/or references to be removed should also be given. [1]
  4. Reasons should be provided for each change. [2]
  • In the section of text below titled Sample edit request, the four required items are shown as an example:
Sample edit request

1. Please remove the third sentence from the second paragraph of the Sun section:

"The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 25 miles in length."


2. Please add the following claim as the third sentence of the second paragraph of the Sun section:

"The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 864,337 miles in length."


3. Using as the reference:

Prisha Harinath (2023). The Sun. Academic Press. p. 1.


4. Reason for change being made:

"The previously given diameter was incorrect."
  • Kindly open a new edit request at your earliest convenience when ready to proceed with all four items from your request. Thank you!


Regards,  Spintendo  23:52, 3 November 2023 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: Describe the requested changes in detail. This includes the exact proposed wording of the new material, the exact proposed location for it, and an explicit description of any wording to be removed, including removal for any substitution.
  2. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: If the rationale for a change is not obvious (particularly for proposed deletions), explain.

Updated request

Thanks Spintendo for the suggestions. Here is my modified request:

  • Add as the last sentence to the "Private sector" subsection the following sentence: "He formed IG Acquisition Corp, [1] [2] a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries. [3]"
  • Information on this is not in the article and it is a part of Bradley Tusk's involvement in the private sector.
  • Add the word "Partners" to the first sentence of "Tusk Ventures" subsection. Example: "In 2015, Tusk launched Tusk Ventures Partners, a venture capital fund that invests in startups facing political and regulatory challenges or pursuing political and governmental opportunities."
  • This is being requested for accuracy. FYI: Here is another article that verifies the proper name. I don't think it needs to be cited in the live article, but I wanted to share it here so reviewing editors can verify the name.
  • Remove the following sentence: "Ivory Gaming Group was co-founded by Bradley Tusk and Christian Goode in 2015 to develop and manage casinos, including their day-to-day operations which include food and beverage services, marketing and media."
  • This is sourced to a press release
  • Remove the subheading "Ivory Gaming Group"
  • With the removal of the above sentence due to being sourced to a press release, this subsection would have nothing in it and thus should be removed.

References

  1. ^ Information, Kate Clark · 2020-09-08T22:02:35+00:00 · Source: The. "Briefing: Political Strategist and Tech Investor Bradley Tusk Forms SPAC". The Information. Retrieved 2020-11-18.{{ cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list ( link)
  2. ^ "Sponsor Team". IG Acquisition Corp. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  3. ^ "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION". www.sec.gov. Retrieved 2020-11-18.

I am happy to answer any questions. Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 16:50, 10 November 2023 (UTC) reply

I'm suspicious about the desire to get rid of Ivory. There are other sources- techcrunch: "Somewhat astoundingly, Tusk oversees three other outfits, too: a casino management company called Ivory Gaming Group (it owns one casino in Fresno)", observer.com ( 2): Tusk bio from an op-ed written by him, "the founder and CEO of ... the Ivory Gaming Group", nytimes "In 2018, his casino management company, then called Ivory Gaming, mounted a bid for a casino site in Las Vegas... Ivory Gaming ultimately spawned IG Acquisition Corp., a gambling concern that reportedly raised $300 million in the public markets to invest in the industry." tedder ( talk) 20:40, 10 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Reply 11-NOV-2023

✅  Edit request partially implemented  

  1. Red XN The information concerning the IG Acquisition Corp. was not added, because it was not clear what is meant by the phrase "a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries". Wikipedia does not usually speak about the future plans of subjects in their articles.
  2. Green tickY The word "Partners" was added.
  3. Red XN The claims concerning Ivory were not removed, per the additional sources provided by tedder above. The claim is well referenced.

Regards,  Spintendo  00:16, 12 November 2023 (UTC) reply


Reply to Spintendo

@ Spintendo: let me clarify as I may have misspoken previously. The info about IG Acquisition Corp is included in the introduction, but is not in the body of the article. The current sentence in the intro is exactly as I had proposed, "He is also the chairman of IG Acquisition Corp, [1] [2] a SPAC planning to acquire a business in the leisure, gaming and hospitality industries. [3]"

I originally proposed adding the sentence to Private sector because I thought the intro was supposed to be a summary of content found in the article. With that said, I think you're right. IG Acquisition Corp has ended and the sentence does include "future plans", so I'm now wondering if it's best to simply remove that sentence from the article's introduction. If you and others decide IG Acquisition Corp does belong in the article, it would be best to move it from the intro to the Private sector section. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 22:04, 16 November 2023 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ Information, Kate Clark · 2020-09-08T22:02:35+00:00 · Source: The. "Briefing: Political Strategist and Tech Investor Bradley Tusk Forms SPAC". The Information. Retrieved 2020-11-18.{{ cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list ( link)
  2. ^ "Sponsor Team". IG Acquisition Corp. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
  3. ^ "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION". www.sec.gov. Retrieved 2020-11-18.
Thank you for the clarification. I omitted the claims about "planning" and thought perhaps moving it to the Private sector section, but as its mostly a description of a job title, it can stay in the lead. Regards,  Spintendo  00:58, 17 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Formatting fixes

Hello, in my continuing effort to make this page better for all, I wanted to ask if editors would consider removing the red links to "Nexar", "GlamSquad", and "MainStreet" under the "Tusk Ventures" subsection. Since articles for Nexar and MainStreet have been deleted, and it's not clear if GlamSquad is yet notable for a Wikipedia article, those red links can be removed per Wikipedia:Red link.

Please let me know if there are any questions, BasilAtTusk ( talk) 20:36, 30 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Approved  Spintendo  03:52, 1 December 2023 (UTC) reply

Infobox updates

Hi all, it's Basil for Bradley Tusk here again.

I noticed the article has some information that should be included in the Infobox too, specifically Tusk's alma mater. Would edits be willing to add in this information per the Infobox person template?

My specific request is that editors add to the infobox his alma maters University of Pennsylvania [1] [2] and University of Chicago Law School [3] [2]. Two of the sources I included here are already cited in the body of the article to verify this information and I have additionally added the WSJ source, which also verifies it.

Let me know if there are any questions.

References

  1. ^ "Paths in Public Service Featuring Bradley Tusk". Roosevelt House. Retrieved July 30, 2015.
  2. ^ a b Wolfe, Alexandra (31 August 2018). "How Bradley Tusk Went from Political Insider to 'Making Politicians Crazy'". Wall Street Journal. Retrieved 11 December 2023.
  3. ^ "Bradley Tusk '99: A Big Name in the Big Apple, and Beyond". The University of Chicago. Archived from the original on July 2, 2015. Retrieved July 30, 2015. Tusk...is widely credited with spearheading the administration's most notable successes, such as broadly expanding medical insurance for children, and for effectively overseeing a massive proportion of the state's operations, including its $60 billion budget and its 57,000-person workforce.

Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 20:23, 13 December 2023 (UTC) reply

✅  Edit request accepted   

Lewcm 
Talk to me! 23:16, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
reply

Illinois subsection

Thanks very much Lewcm for making those Infobox updates! I have another suggestion, this time to the Illinois subsection:

  • Change "In the position, Tusk failed to file required financial disclosure reports on at least three occasions" to "Tusk had not filed financial disclosure reports after the Secretary of State’s office failed to certify and inform him of the requirement to file."

This adds needed context to the situation that is covered in the reference cited in the article. Happy to review any questions you have! BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:55, 19 December 2023 (UTC) reply

Reply 16-JAN-2024

This change of phrasing (which has not been given a reason) obviously benefits the subject while not substantively changing the meaning. Without a bonafide reason why for the change, it cannot be made. [1]

References

  1. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: If the rationale for a change is not obvious (particularly for proposed deletions), explain.

Regards,  Spintendo  16:40, 16 January 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the reply, Spintendo. I appreciate your insight here. The reasoning behind this proposed edit is that the suggested update more fully represents the cited source material. The reason for the proposed change is that the Secretary of State's involvement is important context in this instance.

Thanks for the consideration BasilAtTusk ( talk) 18:28, 19 January 2024 (UTC) reply

 Not done: The source does not quite say what you read it to say. It expressly says later in the article that as an attorney and employee, he should have known about the disclosure requirements even without notification. voorts ( talk/ contributions) 21:05, 20 January 2024 (UTC) reply
Understood, thank you both for the insight, I will stop seeking this change now that I understand. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:21, 25 January 2024 (UTC) reply

Tusk Philanthropies section

Hello editors, I wanted to propose some updates to the current Tusk Philanthropies section. This includes:

  • Remove "The services Tusk has backed so far are based on blockchain technology, but he has stated that he is open to other technologies"
    • The editor who added this seems to be conflating different claims in this article and so this summation is incorrect. The article states that, Voatz is the platform to use blockchain but that Bradley Tusk is not an investor of that platform.
  • Add: Tusk Philanthropies announced a $10 million grant in 2021 for the development of internet-based voting. [1]
    • This would add an update to this topic that has not yet been added
  • Add as the last paragraph: Tusk founded Tusk Philanthropies' Solving Hunger, which supports school meal efforts. [2]
    • This would add more information on a topic that has not yet been added

References

  1. ^ Parks, Miles (September 30, 2021). "The Push For Internet Voting Continues, Mostly Thanks To One Guy". NPR. Retrieved 23 January 2024.
  2. ^ Wilkes, Mackenzie (2022-12-31). "States put free school meals on the menu". POLITICO. Retrieved 2023-05-19.

Please let me know if there are any questions. Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:22, 25 January 2024 (UTC) reply

 Partly done: I've added both sections you requested, removing that first sentence would make further sentences not make sense, so I've instead reworded it - removing the blockchain bit as requested - to instead reference internet voting. The services Tusk has backed so far are for development of internet-based voting.

Hope this is alright, if you have any other suggestions for this bit please let me know :) Thanks, Encoded Talk to me! 15:44, 7 February 2024 (UTC) reply

Encoded, these changes are great. Thanks for being so thorough and improving my suggestion! BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:40, 13 February 2024 (UTC) reply

New book by Tusk

Hello editors. I previously made a suggestion for this page which was denied by STEMinfo due to it being too "crystal ball"-y since the book I was suggesting be added was not yet published. Good news, the book has now been published! Since this no longer is a crystal ball scenario, I would like to re-request this addition:

  • Add to the "Published works" section: Tusk authored a novel called "Obvious in Hindsight" that he called a "slightly absurdist take" on his career working with Uber. The novel was published in 2023 and is about a campaign to legalize flying cars. [1] [2]

References

  1. ^ Barron, James (24 April 2023). "Writers Are Rewarded for Their Books About New York". The New York Times. Retrieved 26 July 2023.
  2. ^ Matthews, Jessica (November 10, 2023). "Flying cars and politics combine in new novel by Bradley Tusk—the venture capitalist who made a name for himself as Uber's political fixer". Fortune. Retrieved 12 February 2024. His second book, Obvious in Hindsight, which was released to a handful of independent bookstores this week and will be more broadly available later this month

I'm happy to answer any questions. Thanks BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:42, 13 February 2024 (UTC) reply

 Done ARandomName123 ( talk)Ping me! 16:38, 13 February 2024 (UTC) reply
Thank you! BasilAtTusk ( talk) 22:01, 14 February 2024 (UTC) reply

New York subsection

Hello editors, I have some proposed updates to the New York Subsection:

  • Change "After referring to Yang as an 'empty vessel' in a March interview, critics warned that 'Tusk could essentially be the shadow mayor for New York, while he is representing the interests of big corporate clients.' Tusk responded to the allegations, declaring 'if we win, I will not lobby or talk with the new mayor — nor anyone in a Yang administration — on any matter that intersects with our work' in a statement. After Yang lost by an unexpectedly wide margin, Yang's former advisers criticized Tusk Strategies for avoiding freewheeling press conferences that were a feature of his Presidential campaign." to "One critic said that Tusk could be a shadow mayor for New York. Tusk responded to the allegations, and said he would not lobby a Yang administration. [1]"
    • This language change will help make the article more neutral and relies less on direct quotations

References

  1. ^ Rubinstein, Dana; Fitzsimmons, Emma (May 6, 2021). "The Wealthy Lobbyist Behind Andrew Yang's Campaign for Mayor". The New York Times. Retrieved 27 April 2024.

Thanks for the review BasilAtTusk ( talk) 15:40, 20 February 2024 (UTC) reply

Undisclosed payments tag

Hello editors,

Back in November 2022, a tag was added to this article saying "This article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments."

In recent months, I have been working with volunteer editors in cleaning up this article in a neutral way. If editors agree, I think it is time to reconsider whether this tag is needed anymore.

After some research, I found this tag was added due to a sockpuppet investigation of other editors that has since been closed. Since that time, this article has been updated significantly to be brought in line with Wikipedia's content rules. Because of this, I do not think this tag is necessary any longer and am suggesting that it be removed.

Thanks for the review. BasilAtTusk ( talk) 21:25, 20 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Introduction

Hello, I have a suggestion for the Introduction to have it better reflect recent changes made to this article:

  • Remove, "He is also the chairman of IG Acquisition Corp."
    • This is outdated and no longer accurate.
  • Remove, "is the host of the podcast Firewall,"
    • This is not notable enough for the introduction. The podcast is not even mentioned in the body of the article
  • Add, "Tusk owns P&T Knitwear, a bookstore with a podcast studio and an 80-seat amphitheater."
    • This information was recently added to the body of this article but not the introduction and it seems important enough to add to the introduction as it is one of the things he is notable for.

Thanks for your review BasilAtTusk ( talk) 21:25, 20 March 2024 (UTC) reply

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