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G'day, I've only had a quick look but this looks like quite a well developed article, which would probably only need a little more work to take it up to B or GA class. Good work so far! Anyway, one thing that lept out at me is that there is a repeated section: "Lineage of the United States Air Force" appears as both the first and eighth sections. I don't think that this is necessary. I'd remove one of them myself, but I'm not sure where it is best included. Would one of the article's more established contributors please take a look and adjust accordingly? Cheers, AustralianRupert ( talk) 09:14, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
I notice this name apparently listed as a fatality in a Curtiss F on Nov. 27, 1912. Is it a different Chandler than Charles DeF. Chandler, the first head of the Aero Division? His dates are shown as 1878-1939. If someone different (as I presume), a first name or other identifying term would clear any confusion. DonFB ( talk) 23:24, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
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G'day, I've only had a quick look but this looks like quite a well developed article, which would probably only need a little more work to take it up to B or GA class. Good work so far! Anyway, one thing that lept out at me is that there is a repeated section: "Lineage of the United States Air Force" appears as both the first and eighth sections. I don't think that this is necessary. I'd remove one of them myself, but I'm not sure where it is best included. Would one of the article's more established contributors please take a look and adjust accordingly? Cheers, AustralianRupert ( talk) 09:14, 25 June 2012 (UTC)
I notice this name apparently listed as a fatality in a Curtiss F on Nov. 27, 1912. Is it a different Chandler than Charles DeF. Chandler, the first head of the Aero Division? His dates are shown as 1878-1939. If someone different (as I presume), a first name or other identifying term would clear any confusion. DonFB ( talk) 23:24, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
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