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Level of English poor throughout, including lead. To the point I can barely understand it, and don't understand what some parts are trying to say.
Lead about the right length
On structure:
'Nominations' is a very vague header and should be written sentence style, i.e. Nominations for PDI chairman (same goes for 'Opening', 'Candidates', 'Announcement')
'Reaction' should be its own section, of which 'Formation of CEC' would presumably a subsection
Fail things to work on from a structural perspective - detailed comments on writing would be too long and unnecessary, as it needs completely rewriting
Coverage
Lots of background detail, maybe too much?
On the other hand, there seem to be some acronyms and people mentioned with no introduction - what are these things?
Probably a good amount of detail on the event, though hard to tell
Needs work
Illustration
Suitable image of new chairman, and table
I can't find any context for the Sabam Sirait image, so I don't know
Both photos PD
?
Neutrality
No idea
Stability
History fine
Pass
Verifiability
I don't know of the reliability of Indonesian sources, nor do I speak the language. I've asked for help at the Indonesia project
here.
There are inline citations
?
Copyright
Two PD images
Can't check offline foreign language text myself
?
Overall
The level of English gives this a quick fail - it can't be understood, if I were reviewing this as a new page I would suggest it goes to Draft or at least tag it with a translation template.
Kingsif (
talk) 22:23, 15 January 2020 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Indonesia, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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Indonesia-related topics on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Politics, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
politics on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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Level of English poor throughout, including lead. To the point I can barely understand it, and don't understand what some parts are trying to say.
Lead about the right length
On structure:
'Nominations' is a very vague header and should be written sentence style, i.e. Nominations for PDI chairman (same goes for 'Opening', 'Candidates', 'Announcement')
'Reaction' should be its own section, of which 'Formation of CEC' would presumably a subsection
Fail things to work on from a structural perspective - detailed comments on writing would be too long and unnecessary, as it needs completely rewriting
Coverage
Lots of background detail, maybe too much?
On the other hand, there seem to be some acronyms and people mentioned with no introduction - what are these things?
Probably a good amount of detail on the event, though hard to tell
Needs work
Illustration
Suitable image of new chairman, and table
I can't find any context for the Sabam Sirait image, so I don't know
Both photos PD
?
Neutrality
No idea
Stability
History fine
Pass
Verifiability
I don't know of the reliability of Indonesian sources, nor do I speak the language. I've asked for help at the Indonesia project
here.
There are inline citations
?
Copyright
Two PD images
Can't check offline foreign language text myself
?
Overall
The level of English gives this a quick fail - it can't be understood, if I were reviewing this as a new page I would suggest it goes to Draft or at least tag it with a translation template.
Kingsif (
talk) 22:23, 15 January 2020 (UTC)reply
The level of English gives this a quick fail - it can't be understood, if I were reviewing this as a new page I would suggest it goes to Draft or at least tag it with a translation template.
Kingsif (
talk) 22:23, 15 January 2020 (UTC)