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Reviewer: • ɔ ʃ → 22:01, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Because of these issues, I'm placing this article on hold. However, I would prefer if you took this time to work on any specific comments I leave you, as this article seems far from GA at the moment. The idea of rushing through 7 days just to promote this would likely cause a drop in overall quality, but you might surprise me... I'll leave a few more comments here until the week's up. • ɔ ʃ → 22:13, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
This seems to be one of the major items needing improvement, so I'll make this a separate pseudo-section.
The intro is a lot of short sentences, maybe combine them? "The race began at 3 p.m. EST on February 28, 2010. It was 276 laps, or 400.5 miles (644.5 km) long, and was broadcast on both Fox Sports and PRN radio. The race had ten different leaders, twenty lead changes, and seven cautions, with Jimmie Johnson emerging as the overall winner." • ɔ ʃ → 16:04, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: • ɔ ʃ → 22:01, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Because of these issues, I'm placing this article on hold. However, I would prefer if you took this time to work on any specific comments I leave you, as this article seems far from GA at the moment. The idea of rushing through 7 days just to promote this would likely cause a drop in overall quality, but you might surprise me... I'll leave a few more comments here until the week's up. • ɔ ʃ → 22:13, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
This seems to be one of the major items needing improvement, so I'll make this a separate pseudo-section.
The intro is a lot of short sentences, maybe combine them? "The race began at 3 p.m. EST on February 28, 2010. It was 276 laps, or 400.5 miles (644.5 km) long, and was broadcast on both Fox Sports and PRN radio. The race had ten different leaders, twenty lead changes, and seven cautions, with Jimmie Johnson emerging as the overall winner." • ɔ ʃ → 16:04, 4 May 2010 (UTC)