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Some maps might be in order, just for Africa. Contributions/70.29.212.226 ( talk) 13:14, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
Done
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Leave a message on my talk page if you have any questions. I'm glad this article could fall within our scope, and I hope to see it grow large! Many thanks! Renaissancee (talk) 02:08, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
Please add a section for Cap Verde and link it from Template:2009 flu pandemic table. Thanks | FHessel ( talk) 11:08, 24 June 2009 (UTC) Please add a section for Cote d'Ivoire and link it from Template:2009 flu pandemic table. Thanks | FHessel ( talk) 11:18, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
I disagree with a split, since the current section is not long enough to support a split. Perhaps if someone were to expand it to beyond a screen length in size first... 70.29.212.226 ( talk) 04:17, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
I disagree too because there are not enough comfirmed cases in Egypt at the moment. -- 82.112.149.178 ( talk) 14:17, 28 June 2009 (UTC)
Can someone update the table to reflect the first death in Egypt. K.L.Riley 17.34, 21 July 2009 (UTC) Now, the egypt section is long enough to support a split, and I have just updated the count of confirmed cases and deaths, so this might be a reasonable option. Anyone interested? Immunize ( talk) 19:21, 11 February 2010 (UTC)
A proposal is afoot to move the 'country' article to a more appropriate location. Thoughts? Bosonic dressing ( talk) 10:44, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
in Mauritius as at 17 August,out of 40 detected cases,5 confirmed death! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 196.20.154.41 ( talk) 20:03, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
why do this fracture appears — Preceding unsigned comment added by 43.228.92.197 ( talk) 11:39, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
Hi u guysCite error: There are <ref>
tags on this page without content in them (see the
help page). — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
2602:306:BDEC:4A50:DDD:8890:2E4A:FCD9 (
talk) 22:17, 14 September 2017 (UTC)
The lead does not include a description of the article's major sections. The lead includes information about symptoms, which is not included elsewhere in the article. Additionally, it would be clearer if each section followed a similar style. For example, each country's section could explain when the first case arose, how many people died, and how the flu impacted the country in that order. That way, each section feels concise and easier to read. Overall, I think this article has potential, but it needs some work. Tayyy123 ( talk) 20:28, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
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Some maps might be in order, just for Africa. Contributions/70.29.212.226 ( talk) 13:14, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
Done
Hello. I am a member of WikiProject Medicine, a Wikipedia wide project that maintains and improves articles that fall under the scope of medicine. Since your article has fallen under our scope, I have placed the correct template(s) on this talk page for verification. Upon reviewed of the article, I'd like to make a few points, as shown below:
Leave a message on my talk page if you have any questions. I'm glad this article could fall within our scope, and I hope to see it grow large! Many thanks! Renaissancee (talk) 02:08, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
Please add a section for Cap Verde and link it from Template:2009 flu pandemic table. Thanks | FHessel ( talk) 11:08, 24 June 2009 (UTC) Please add a section for Cote d'Ivoire and link it from Template:2009 flu pandemic table. Thanks | FHessel ( talk) 11:18, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
I disagree with a split, since the current section is not long enough to support a split. Perhaps if someone were to expand it to beyond a screen length in size first... 70.29.212.226 ( talk) 04:17, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
I disagree too because there are not enough comfirmed cases in Egypt at the moment. -- 82.112.149.178 ( talk) 14:17, 28 June 2009 (UTC)
Can someone update the table to reflect the first death in Egypt. K.L.Riley 17.34, 21 July 2009 (UTC) Now, the egypt section is long enough to support a split, and I have just updated the count of confirmed cases and deaths, so this might be a reasonable option. Anyone interested? Immunize ( talk) 19:21, 11 February 2010 (UTC)
A proposal is afoot to move the 'country' article to a more appropriate location. Thoughts? Bosonic dressing ( talk) 10:44, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
in Mauritius as at 17 August,out of 40 detected cases,5 confirmed death! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 196.20.154.41 ( talk) 20:03, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
why do this fracture appears — Preceding unsigned comment added by 43.228.92.197 ( talk) 11:39, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
Hi u guysCite error: There are <ref>
tags on this page without content in them (see the
help page). — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
2602:306:BDEC:4A50:DDD:8890:2E4A:FCD9 (
talk) 22:17, 14 September 2017 (UTC)
The lead does not include a description of the article's major sections. The lead includes information about symptoms, which is not included elsewhere in the article. Additionally, it would be clearer if each section followed a similar style. For example, each country's section could explain when the first case arose, how many people died, and how the flu impacted the country in that order. That way, each section feels concise and easier to read. Overall, I think this article has potential, but it needs some work. Tayyy123 ( talk) 20:28, 28 February 2022 (UTC)