1. Lead
   1. put UJM ref into Reception (see 3.2.)
2. "Background" → "Model development"
   1. put "The Yamaha XSR900 and MT-09 share the same ... and stiffened suspension" over "Yamaha brought the XSR900 to market in 2016, releasing it in two variants world-wide"
   2. change "Yamaha brought the XSR900 to market in 2016, releasing it in two variants world-wide" to "The XSR900 was released in two variants:"
   3. insert between "... and stiffened suspension" and "The XSR900 was released in two variants": "The XSR900 engine produces no more power than the MT-09's" with MCN quote ( engine output details)
   4. delete heading "Model Updates" between "... and stiffened suspension" and "Little changed from ..."
   5. "... will be sold conventionally through dealers"
3. "Awards" → "Reception"
   1. insert "The earlier MT-09 was generally well received by the motorcycle press. Motorcycle News declared ..." with MCN quote
   2. insert "In response to such criticism ... " with quotes from MCN and Cycle World (UJM ref; see 1.1.)
   3. change "On its release, the 2016 XSR900 received journalistic praise and it gained several awards including Cycle World's; 2016 Best Middleweight Street Bike and G-Mark's; 2016 Good Design Award" to "The XSR900 garnered several awards including Cycle World's 2016 Best Middleweight Street Bike and G-Mark's 2016 Good Design Award"

Docteur Pie ( talk) 22:36, 3 January 2017 (UTC) reply