Shuki- I don't know why you keep chopping out large parts of the article and leaving the only community as gush katif - please advise —Preceding unsigned comment added by 78.86.5.187 ( talk • contribs)
Hi Shuki, let me address the various points you make: 1. you are certainly correct that it is named after Binyamin Mintz but I thought lit. is the literal translation 2. Format/ content - agree on the format and thanks for making it look more presentable. Re the content, I actually used the Neve Daniel entry as a guideline which talks about the community and local facilities. Will remove the bit relating to transportation. Local facilities are mentioned on many other 'local' pages even for much larger cities, e.g. rishon lezion mentions its amphitheatres, dance clubs, etc
3. I see your point about the link to yishuv kehillati- in that case the definition under Communal Settlement would appear to be incorrect as there is no requirement to join any cooperative to live in YB. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cestor ( talk • contribs) 11:20, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
1. There is not much difference between neve daniel and yad binyamin in size. Again, Hashmonaim also has information on community facilities. The Commercial services and public facilities listed are not common in YB - there is exactly one of each and this may be important for people to know if they want more information about the place.
2. Again, why the removal of every community except gush katif? This gives a completely inaccurate view. Also as a point of fact they do not live in 'a compound'. Most of them live in pre-fabricated houses spread out throughout the yishuv.
3. see my comment above re the literal meaning of YB.
4. I edited the Transport section to remove the redundant information and this section, like others has been deleted wholesale.
I am not insisting on returning to the original article but requesting advice so that if there are specific points, they can be edited /corrected/ improved on rather than wholesale deletion. thanks
Cestor ( talk) 20:46, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
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Shuki- I don't know why you keep chopping out large parts of the article and leaving the only community as gush katif - please advise —Preceding unsigned comment added by 78.86.5.187 ( talk • contribs)
Hi Shuki, let me address the various points you make: 1. you are certainly correct that it is named after Binyamin Mintz but I thought lit. is the literal translation 2. Format/ content - agree on the format and thanks for making it look more presentable. Re the content, I actually used the Neve Daniel entry as a guideline which talks about the community and local facilities. Will remove the bit relating to transportation. Local facilities are mentioned on many other 'local' pages even for much larger cities, e.g. rishon lezion mentions its amphitheatres, dance clubs, etc
3. I see your point about the link to yishuv kehillati- in that case the definition under Communal Settlement would appear to be incorrect as there is no requirement to join any cooperative to live in YB. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cestor ( talk • contribs) 11:20, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
1. There is not much difference between neve daniel and yad binyamin in size. Again, Hashmonaim also has information on community facilities. The Commercial services and public facilities listed are not common in YB - there is exactly one of each and this may be important for people to know if they want more information about the place.
2. Again, why the removal of every community except gush katif? This gives a completely inaccurate view. Also as a point of fact they do not live in 'a compound'. Most of them live in pre-fabricated houses spread out throughout the yishuv.
3. see my comment above re the literal meaning of YB.
4. I edited the Transport section to remove the redundant information and this section, like others has been deleted wholesale.
I am not insisting on returning to the original article but requesting advice so that if there are specific points, they can be edited /corrected/ improved on rather than wholesale deletion. thanks
Cestor ( talk) 20:46, 5 June 2008 (UTC)