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Reviewer: Lightburst ( talk · contribs) 17:20, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
"father of modern dairying"is already cited in the body, the lead citation for this item is redundant. I suggest erasing citation one from the lead.
his magazineappears in the lead but it is not found in the body. All information which has been introduced in the lead should be found cited in the body. Under the publishing section I find
Hoard founded Hoard's Dairyman in 1885 as a folio supplement to the Unionso it should be made clear that this was the magazine in order to square with the lead.
German and Scandinavian immigrantsappears in the fourth paragraph of the lead, but I do not see
Scandinaviananywhere else in the article. It should be added to the body so that the lead is correct.
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Lightburst ( talk) 17:36, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
The Dairyman was initially financially supported by its parent newspaper but by 1889, it had become a separate publication that focused primarily on dairy farming.- wondering if this is a correct interpretation, as the source claims the Dairyman was a supplement to the weekly Jefferson County Union and then became "an independent sheet" in 1889. Lightburst ( talk) 20:54, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
He was named Wisconsin's "Most Distinguished Citizen" in 1915.
University of Wisconsin's Board of Regentsis found on page 50. Lightburst ( talk) 21:18, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
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Improved to Good Article status by M4V3R1CK32 ( talk). Nominated by Lightburst ( talk) at 23:59, 21 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/William D. Hoard; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Reviewer: Lightburst ( talk · contribs) 17:20, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
"father of modern dairying"is already cited in the body, the lead citation for this item is redundant. I suggest erasing citation one from the lead.
his magazineappears in the lead but it is not found in the body. All information which has been introduced in the lead should be found cited in the body. Under the publishing section I find
Hoard founded Hoard's Dairyman in 1885 as a folio supplement to the Unionso it should be made clear that this was the magazine in order to square with the lead.
German and Scandinavian immigrantsappears in the fourth paragraph of the lead, but I do not see
Scandinaviananywhere else in the article. It should be added to the body so that the lead is correct.
References
Lightburst ( talk) 17:36, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
The Dairyman was initially financially supported by its parent newspaper but by 1889, it had become a separate publication that focused primarily on dairy farming.- wondering if this is a correct interpretation, as the source claims the Dairyman was a supplement to the weekly Jefferson County Union and then became "an independent sheet" in 1889. Lightburst ( talk) 20:54, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
He was named Wisconsin's "Most Distinguished Citizen" in 1915.
University of Wisconsin's Board of Regentsis found on page 50. Lightburst ( talk) 21:18, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
The result was: promoted by
Bruxton (
talk)
14:24, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by M4V3R1CK32 ( talk). Nominated by Lightburst ( talk) at 23:59, 21 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/William D. Hoard; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.