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Cheers.— cyberbot II Talk to my owner:Online 22:48, 30 January 2016 (UTC)
The lede already contains the international film festival mention, and the festival section mentioned New Hampshire twice. It's a good deal tidier just eliminating the sparse section and moving the N.H. cite up. The film is six years old, so it's not likely that it will be at any more festivals. Activist ( talk) 09:17, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
U.N. Me is a documentary film about the United Nations by first-time filmmakers Ami Horowitz and Matthew Groff, which premiered at the International Documentary Film Festival Amsterdam in November 2009.[1]
Then the sections I eliminated were
Awards
Best Documentary - New Hampshire Film Festival (2010)[19]
Appearances
International Documentary Film Festival Amsterdam (2009)[1] New Hampshire Film Festival (2010)[19]
So, the "Awards" Section contains the award itself. That text should be retained. "Appearances," the title of the next section, a line later, doesn't expand what's in the lede, regarding the International festival; in fact it contains less. The "New Hampshire Film Festival" doesn't either. It couldn't win the N.H. award without being present. I removed the sparse but repetitive Awards and Appearance Sections and simply moved the the award text up into the previous section. I didn't delete anything substantive. I'm the last person in the world who could be characterized as a "neat freak," but the deletion does make the article considerably more neat. The only thing that was restored to the article by "Beyond_My_Ken" was the redundant clutter.
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Cheers.— cyberbot II Talk to my owner:Online 22:48, 30 January 2016 (UTC)
The lede already contains the international film festival mention, and the festival section mentioned New Hampshire twice. It's a good deal tidier just eliminating the sparse section and moving the N.H. cite up. The film is six years old, so it's not likely that it will be at any more festivals. Activist ( talk) 09:17, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
U.N. Me is a documentary film about the United Nations by first-time filmmakers Ami Horowitz and Matthew Groff, which premiered at the International Documentary Film Festival Amsterdam in November 2009.[1]
Then the sections I eliminated were
Awards
Best Documentary - New Hampshire Film Festival (2010)[19]
Appearances
International Documentary Film Festival Amsterdam (2009)[1] New Hampshire Film Festival (2010)[19]
So, the "Awards" Section contains the award itself. That text should be retained. "Appearances," the title of the next section, a line later, doesn't expand what's in the lede, regarding the International festival; in fact it contains less. The "New Hampshire Film Festival" doesn't either. It couldn't win the N.H. award without being present. I removed the sparse but repetitive Awards and Appearance Sections and simply moved the the award text up into the previous section. I didn't delete anything substantive. I'm the last person in the world who could be characterized as a "neat freak," but the deletion does make the article considerably more neat. The only thing that was restored to the article by "Beyond_My_Ken" was the redundant clutter.