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The result was: rejected by
Theleekycauldron (
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08:45, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
Created by Coin945 ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:55, 17 July 2021 (UTC).
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General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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I'll take this one since it seems like nobody else wants it. The article checks out on most criteria (length, sourcing, age, copyvio, etc). The main issue is neutrality.
At first glance, it looked fine. After looking a little closer I saw a lot of citations to the company's website and "feel good" information that didn't need to be there. However, the issues looked pretty minor to me and the page was basically solid so I rolled up my sleeves and did some minor copyediting. I think the page itself is perfectly fine right now. But I don't know if the hook should be promoted per WP:DYKNOT since Coin945 is paid to create (and probably DYK) the page. That could easily be seen as a "means of advertising, or of promoting commercial ... causes."
The other problem is the hooks. Both are cited but neither are very interesting. ALT0 is just a quote praising the software, and ALT1 is almost painfully banal. Unfortunately I think the best option is probably to reject this nomination for the above issues. There's no shortage of nominations, and the front page of Wikipedia can probably do without knowing which Australian-designed PC product was the first to have an IBM logo. That's not to knock Coin945's hard work on this nom and the page. It was a good effort and came out pretty well. BuySomeApples ( talk) 06:57, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
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The result was: rejected by
Theleekycauldron (
talk)
08:45, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
Created by Coin945 ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:55, 17 July 2021 (UTC).
Extended content
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General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook eligibility:
QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
I'll take this one since it seems like nobody else wants it. The article checks out on most criteria (length, sourcing, age, copyvio, etc). The main issue is neutrality.
At first glance, it looked fine. After looking a little closer I saw a lot of citations to the company's website and "feel good" information that didn't need to be there. However, the issues looked pretty minor to me and the page was basically solid so I rolled up my sleeves and did some minor copyediting. I think the page itself is perfectly fine right now. But I don't know if the hook should be promoted per WP:DYKNOT since Coin945 is paid to create (and probably DYK) the page. That could easily be seen as a "means of advertising, or of promoting commercial ... causes."
The other problem is the hooks. Both are cited but neither are very interesting. ALT0 is just a quote praising the software, and ALT1 is almost painfully banal. Unfortunately I think the best option is probably to reject this nomination for the above issues. There's no shortage of nominations, and the front page of Wikipedia can probably do without knowing which Australian-designed PC product was the first to have an IBM logo. That's not to knock Coin945's hard work on this nom and the page. It was a good effort and came out pretty well. BuySomeApples ( talk) 06:57, 25 August 2021 (UTC)